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Listed below are the Quarterfinalists of the 2024 ScreenCraft Horror Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 1,200 submissions. Congratulations to the writers who have made it this far and thanks to all for submitting!

Stay tuned for the Semifinalist announcement on January 17th on our blog and on our Twitter, Facebook, and Instagram pages! And if you’d like to receive a notification when this contest re-opens for entries, you can subscribe for updates via Coverfly here.

Here are the Quarterfinalists:

"BLOOD GULLY" Jesse Bouma
"Enduro" Bernadette Rivero
"The Transfer" Brian De Palma
(Li)thium Red Davis
#SelfCare Christian Tucker Perry
A Bad Case of the Mondays Paul Coleman, Matt Landry
A Hymn for the Darkness Alex Sosin, Chris Courtner
A Voyage to Forgiveness Anthony Greenstone
ABOMINATION Corrigan Foley
ABRAHAM VAN HELSING AND THE HUNT FOR DR. JEKYLL AND MR. HYDE      Gary M Raskin
Ada's Bride Michelle Domanowski
All Are Not Lost Melissa Bruning
Alter Garret Ricker
Answer Me Craig Stewart
ARCHIVED Jordan Vogeney
Athena Sabrina Wheeler, Serena Wheeler
Attunement Nick Holiday
Aunt Carrot's Christmas Eve Massacre Adam Lamb
Bad Bad Things Andrew Olson
BADBLOOD Aaron Lovett
Baker's Dozen Chris Leisure, Christy Leisure
Baristas of the Boondocks Theodore Ricker
Be My Eyes Jud Cremata
Beast of Virginia Matthew Corley
Before You Rachel Petzinger
Bestial Tyler Fedele
Better Off Undead Ray Keller
Better the Demons You Know Greg Harvey
Billie Black Nick Reiber
Black Menagerie Justin Sharp
Blindsight James Kriz
BLOOD MOON Caroline Chidester
Blood Yolk Myles Yaksich, Dani Alvarado
Bloodletting Alee Ruggieri
Bloody Burlesque Jill Morley
BLOW Maggie Mae Fish
BORDERLORE: Llorona J. Angel Sierra
Born Again Richard Mathiasen
Botica Matt Healy
Breaker Hill Robyn Kenney
Bright Light nathan crooker, J. Alan Ryker
Burn House Destiny Macon, Sh'kia Augustin
Cadaver Todd Naylor
Camp Mallice Julian Rubin
Candyman Darla Drendel
Cart Girls Juliet Mace, Bill Mace
CASKET GIRL John Darbonne
CAST Kimberley Wells
Cellar Door Sean Buttimer
Cerebral Cheyenn Alberti
Charred Thomas Joseph
Child's Play Charlotte Gajek
Chipper MK Kopp
Chosen Cosmo Wallace
Christmas Feast Bryce Raffle
Cinema Roulette Frankie Infante
Cold Dead Fingers Jack Warner
Conduit Willo Johnston
Contained Jennifer Wilton
CORKSCREW Brett Hauze
Coy Dog Matthew Corley
CRAWLER Luke Harvis
Crimson and Vine Richard Cotzabuyucas
Cryptid Brandon Weavil
Curse of the Final Girl Karen Ralph
Daisy Dips DH F
DANTE'S CIRCUS Sianne Tarda
Dark Frost Ryan Lee
Dawn of the Woman Martyn Eaden
Dead of Night: The Man-Thing Garrett Dunne
Dead-Enders Tyler Walker, Fidel Ruiz-Healy
Deathless Biagio Gulino, Tyler Kamens
DESECRATION Maddy Schwartz
Devil Says Goodnight: Shadow Of The Cross Andrew Monge
Devil's Gate Samuel Holladay
die famous Joshua Sonny Harris, Kathryn Vandervalk
Discreet Jeremy Bradford
Don't Forget About Us Brittany Falardeau
Don't Touch Me Ervin Anderson
Don't Touch the Floor Dayne Tanioka
Doomscrollers Danny Baram
Down Charlie McCarrick
DRAYKULA:GENESIS Jack Polo
Dream Parasite Sora SH Chung
Drip Phoebe Gibb
Eden '93 Julian Martin
El Cucuy Shane Redding
eM David Barras
Emmitt's Culling Jason Miller
End Of Day Andrew Kaberline
FAITHFUL SHADOW Kevin J. Howard
Family Values Vanessa Võ
Fantasma Taylor Tejada
Faux Graham Nelson
Festival Of Souls Patricia McCammond
Final Boy Final Boy
FINAL EXAM C.J. Ehrlich
Flower Park Children Daryl Wayne
For Thy Peace Jordan Klaja
Foreign Exchange Nazanin Anosheh
Foreverland Bev Chukwu
Gains JP LeRoux
Galentine's Day Carlos Gabriel Ruiz
Ghost Girl Wayne Turmel
Ghost Goose Seth Woodhouse
GLITCH Rebecca Berrih
Group D Brandon NV
Happily Never After Alec Cuddeback
Happily Severed After Travis Watson
Hardcore Jaime Andrews
Hatebreed Devin Weber
HEART OF FLESH Thomas Park
Heather Would Never Emelie Claxton
Hello Again Jeremy Jackson
Hi Patrick Pfupajena
High Moon Isaac Ruth
HOME Jan Pearson
HOMEWARD Ben Mehlman
Hopper's Creek Michael Tippett
HOSPICE Paul Gonzales, Todd Biggerstaff
Hunted House Chris Schwarz
I Need a Killer Pat Kiss
I Will Love You, Even When We Fall Out of Time Campbell Wright
In Red Rebecca Lee Lerman
Indigent Briana Cox
Island of Graves Ryan Dilbert
Izanami Michael Rogers
Kid Gloves Mathew Wright
Killer Party Joshua Saltzman
Killer Soundtrack Jeff Ullman
Killing Myself Nathaniel Feeley
KINGMAKER Victor Ridaura
Knight Alex E. Chew
Kurwick's Daughter Timothy Richardson
Laberintus Segolene Zimmern
Lenora Rich Ragsdale
LIKE YOU Hannah C. Langley
LOCKED Andrew Creme, Jeff Verge
Love to Watch You Bleed Virginia Hendry, Amanda Ellis
Lucile Ian Wee
Lure Jacob Daniel Phair, Vrishub Merai
Maggot Brain Max Flora
Maudit A.J. Vasquez
Mimic Cameron Tubbs
Mirror Gaze Josh Nadler
MISCHIEViOUS Warren Lane
Miscreations Alain Loubeau, Mike Meyerson
Monsters Below Carol Bass
Moonshine Preston Ray
Mothers of the Disappeared Paul Wilson
Mount Hopeless Richard Machin, Michael Ivey
Mount Mendocino (Current) Thomas Wortham
Mumia Hendrik Harms
Murder In Plane Sight Shawn Duenas
Muse in the Mazeum Clay Fusco, Pamela Chiacchiaro
Nain Rouge Michael Basha
NATURAL BORN SINNER Brittney Coon
No Man's Land Barry Ambrose, Armand Kachigian
No One Leaves Alive Jeff Kallet
Offspring Hannah Silverman
Oh, Great Cosmic Master! Kyle Spleiss
Olivia Mabel David McClellan, Martyn Eaden
Our Dead Lives Percival Pasquin Jr
Our Father Bartosz Pietryka
Ouroboros Red Davis
Owuompe Daniele Baiardi
Pascualita Valeria Miranda
Pet-Cam Pia Cook
Petrified Terry Richardson
Play Demon / Oni Gokko Valentin Narziss
Poppet Emma Niles
Primeval Drew Hellmich
Punk Marcus Jones
Putrid Spirit Paul Landry
RAGUEL Ali Jordan
REMNANTS OF MAN John Battistessa
Renegate Slade Sahoye
Requiem Nick Cardiff, Riccardo Berdini
Revival Abby Selden
Riddle Shiva Ramanathan
Ruby Darren Geare, Jeff Allen Geare
SATANIC INHERITANCE Igor di Kali
Savage Joshua Johnson, Jamie Napoli
Scream Queen Robert Stephen Apetagon
Season's Creepings Chris Holt
Seed Rudi O'Meara
Selling Your Soul Joanne Rose
Sentient Nik Mohan
Serial Summer Walter Quinn
She's Not There Jacob Staudenmaier
SHELTER FROM THE STORM Nathan Patton
Shit Show Patrick Lehe
SHOOK Kenneth Bogar
Silver Venom Joseph Monaghan
SINCE YOU'VE BEEN GONE Michael D Gutierrez, Zachary Ross
Sinistaar! Kai Martin
Sink Kyle Jutkiewicz, Alexander Seltzer
SiTTER Ryan Austin
Skudakumooch - The Ghost Witch Ryan L. Jones
Small Packages Scott Sadek
Snake Oil Sean Plemmons, Jeff Hassen
SNOW MAN Rhys Bufford
So Deep Maisie Hooper
Society of the Moon Jack Warner
Somewhere Beyond the Sea Daniel Michael Gurney
Somnium Michelle Narayan
Speak of the Devil James LeJeune
SpermBoy Mark Dollard
Spine Richard Chiles
Stairway to Hell Tina Lowe
Still Life Matthias Pasler
Stonebleeder Ted Bronson
Strong Emilia Black
Substance Brendan Ryan
Suburbaknight Adam Johnson
Sun Never Sets Aashish Gadhvi
Sunflower A J Roberts
Swine Lake Michael Rakoff
Syncope Dashiell Demeter
Systemic Michael Freeman
TATT2WO Deirdre Patterson
Teenage Monsters Tara Marie
TELL Benjamin Baraad, Mishal Mahmud
Ten Good Deeds Anwen Bull
Tenants Travis Cook, Joshua DiPaola
THE L E A T H E R M A N Mike Meyerson, Alain Loubeau
THE ADJUNCT Charles Schulman
The Amends Amanda Cole
THE BLACK DOG Joe Favalaro
The Body Farm Mike Gerbino
The Body Thief Peter Fink
The Bracken Fern Elizabeth Eromosele, Nicole Rosario Muller
The Bushwick Psycho Brian DiLorenzo
The Claim chuck oneil
The Cold Read Adam Gutierrez
The Couple at The End Cliff Ryan
The Crossing Daniele Baiardi
The Culvert Drew Hellmich
The Curse of Zozobra Adam Davis
The Demon Job Robert Husted
The Dullahan Maria Meluso
The Fall of Caribou Lodge Eamonn Cogan
The Farm sean birney
The Flip and the Dead Greg Harvey
The Forbidden Pendant Ken Harris
The Ghost Under My Bed Sara Caldwell
The Haunting of Olivia Mabel Martyn Eaden, David McClellan
The Herdsman David Castle
The Hots for You D.M. Zultowski
The House Always Wins Scott Richards
The Hum Anthony O'Connor
The Human Shackles Thorsten Kalteiss
The Hunter Cathal McCall
The Ice Curtain Caleb Ellis
The Keeper Daniel Jamal Judson
The Kidnapping of Skylar F*cking Spears Emelie Claxton
The King of Chasms Darren Oakland
The Labyrinth Billy Reid
The Last Cabin Left on Old Sycamore Lane Michael Rakoff
THE LAST RIDE OF THE BLOOD BROTHERS Johnny Galvan 3
The Last Vampire on Mars Hunter M. Altman
The Last Zombie STAN EVANS
The Lighthouse lee meaden
The Lineage Max Rissman
The Little Death Tanya O'Debra
The Long Night Tony Bloodworth
The Lycan Paula Cantillo
The Malignant Shift Scott Scheirich
The Method Erika Van Doren
The Miracle of Birth Holden Weihs
The Night Channel Ryan McDuffie
The Only Safe Place Left Is The Dark Warren Wagner
The Psycho Killer's Guide to Love JP LeRoux
The Pulpit Collector Peter Fraser
The Pyre Benjamin Webster
The Rath Timothy Stevens
The Realtor Jack Newsome
The Red Key Paul Sheridan
The Return Daniel G. King
The Savage Beast John Battistessa
The Seder Isaac Smith
The Shadow Falls Clay Callender
The Show Must Go On Bret Miller
The Splinter Francisco Castro
The Terror James Shepard
The Thin Todd Holden
The Torture of Kent Maddox RJ Buckley
The Vessel Kyle Ferris
The Watcher Sienna Kosalka
THE WHODUNNITS Ryan Malik
The Woman at the Lake Chris Inekhomon
The World Between Chuck Czech
The Wretched Man Joseph Landing
THERAPY scott cramer
There's Something Strange Inside The Church Matteo Anthony
They Call Her Prey Ryan Douglas Gore
They Wake By Night Andrew Beberman
THEY'RE THERE Jared Januschka
Thin Patrick Hegarty
This Does Not End Well Bailey Abedon, Gavin Conlon
This Is Living Alex Piliouras
This is Not a Place Kelsey Grace Pfeifer
Three Mark Ballantyne
Three Orchards MJ Farber-Ray
Timberland C. Shane Davis
Trash Odie Burnatowski
Treatment Aaron Sprecher
Trick Selfie Chad Wellinger
Two Lost Lambs in The Black Woods Nick Kloppenberg
U N E A R T H E D Billy Reid
UNFINISHED Sabrina Barton
Unidentified Mikel Wisler
Untitled Slasher Trevor Zhou
VAMPIRE CARS Danny Matier
VERSUS! Kevin Tavolaro
VINE OF THE DEAD Matt Karol
Viridian Lake Cynthia Webb
VISCERAL Damir Catic, Eric Alfio Jafari
Visitors Mark Galarrita
WAKEN Shero Syndicate
Wendigo Jake BEAN
Why Would I Let You Go Gabe Mouer
WiLL Ryan Hughes
Winter Harvest Nicole Grant
Winter-Over Lorenzo Galuszka
Wisteria Adam Lapallo
WITHIN THE BAMBOO FOREST Kevin J. Howard
WOKE Stefano Anania
Wolfblood Jaime Silverman
Worn Mike Underwood
Worry Doll Eddie McConville
Worship Me Craig Stewart
Yoga Hell Jessica McLaughlin
Zealots Brandon Johnston
Ziggurat Matthew Cunha

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2023 ScreenCraft Animation Competition Winners https://screencraft.org/blog/2023-screencraft-animation-competition-winners/ Wed, 29 Nov 2023 18:00:00 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=55415 Listed below are the Winners of the 2023 ScreenCraft Animation Competition. These exceptional projects were selected from almost 1,000 submissions. Congratulations to these winning writers...

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Listed below are the Winners of the 2023 ScreenCraft Animation Competition. These exceptional projects were selected from almost 1,000 submissions. Congratulations to these winning writers and thanks to all for submitting!

Grand Prize Winner

Jenkins and Watts: Paranormal Attorneys At Law by Michael Brennan

In a world where ghosts exist and have rights, Jenkins and Watts defend them against overzealous law enforcement, organized crime, and literal demons from hell...for fair market price.

Feature Winner

Medusa by Tristan Bellawala

A young girl with snakes for hair and a petrifying gaze traverses ancient Greece in an attempt at self-preservation and on a journey of self-discovery alongside a hero aiming to prove himself in this twist on the Medusa myth.

Short Winner

I'm Sorry I Missed You by Ethan Rogers

In the wake of a traumatic loss, the Clarke family finds itself grasping for answers to make sense of their son’s death. Older brother, Theo, plunges into his late brother’s comic book world to face the beast that took him—a beast that has since been stalking his family.

TV Winner

New Earth by Devon Sharma

Centuries after humanity abandoned dying Planet Earth for manmade New Earth, private investigator Brandt Truman searches for a missing android, only to get caught up in a far-reaching conspiracy that will force him to face his troubled past.

Honorable Mentions

Kaltera by Will Kisor, Gage Swanston  
Offspring
 by Hannah Silverman

The Add-on Prize Winner will be decided at a later date after further consideration by the prize partner.

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2024 ScreenCraft TV Pilot Script Competition Semifinalists https://screencraft.org/blog/2024-screencraft-tv-pilot-script-competition-semifinalists/ Wed, 22 Nov 2023 18:00:00 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=55377 Listed below are the Semifinalists of the 2024 ScreenCraft TV Pilot Script Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 2,100 submissions. Congratulations to the...

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Listed below are the Semifinalists of the 2024 ScreenCraft TV Pilot Script Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 2,100 submissions. Congratulations to the writers who have made it this far and thanks to all for submitting!

Stay tuned for the Finalist announcement on January 10th on our blog and on our Twitter, Facebook, and Instagram pages! And if you’d like to receive a notification when this contest re-opens for entries, you can subscribe for updates via Coverfly here.

Here are the Semifinalists:

Americool Tim Janas
Area Unknown: Eden Troy Miller, J.R. Smith
Ascension Darren Moran
ATHOR Brian Streaty, Paul Rose
AUPUNI Erik Ries
Babel Marlowe Harris
Bad Blood David Vieux
BADDIES Lilian Mehrel
Birdwatchers Rebecca Workman
Black Caesar Amanda Prentiss
Can You Hear Me David Vieux
Carnitas Mariana Reider
Chief Melanie Abrams Fierstein
CORROSION Ryan Patch, Paul Massaro
Cosmic Forces Ryan LaSalle
D.B. Nicole Donadio
Daddy Issues April Moreau
Daddy Issues Cerina Aragones
Dead Reckoning Luke Martin
Dire Transfers Nate Suppaiah
Dirtbag Fantasies Jay Tigers
Djinn Hunterz Seti Jakada
DRIFT Eva Konstantopoulos
Enter the Dreamscape! Peter Pappas
Evergreen Maryan Nagy Captan, Dini Parayitam
Everlost Vivian (Xiao Wen) Li
Experience Points Kris Horowitz
Fugitives of Dust J. Aldo Gonzalez, Justin T. Malone
GAMESTOP Sam Norman
Genius Tracey Houston
GeriOsity Barbara Ward Thall
Gold Bricks! Eli Elbogen, Hunter Ashton
Golem Simon Brown
GoodBetter Tagg West
Grants Pass Eric Shani
Helium-3 Aaron Sprecher
Honeymoon Shelly Mar
I Wanna Be the Lord of Darkness Jackie Lee
I'm Going to Kill The Moon Kumail Rizvi
Kaya Etta Gray
Lacie in the Wonderverse Michael Ierulli
Life Begins Barbara Haynes
life through the lens pilot Chad Hutson
MADS Jan Pearson
Male Pattern Boredness Christopher Emanuel Smith
MAN MADE Aaron Pritchard
Man Made Denise Baughn
Marlowe (Pilot) Simon Bowler Khan
Meaderville Bryce Berkowitz
Mighty Mediocre Temporary Rangers   Rhys Schlichtholz-Garcia
Mitra Pranali Kamble
Mound of Sh*t Scott Phillips
Neon Purgatory Sean O'Brien
Night Passing Scott Button
Non-Monogamy Richard Lister
Offsite Marc Winter
Pancetta Jenah Silver
Pink and Purple Jazeel Gayle
Pleyn Delit Tommy Cook
Power Couple Ari Donnelly
Queenmaker Matija Sraj
R.P.S. Cameron Tennyson
Rat City Ally Gilfeather
Relatively Unrelated Christa Butler
Reuben Nella Dudova
RIDGELAND Ali Gordon-Goldstein
Rightly So Mathew Kachur
Rubber Chicken Peter Dawson
SEED Nti Aning
Shark Gregory Abbey
Shitlaw Kevin Hulick
Skin Kelsey Kinney
Sorry Grandpa Hsiao Candace Ho
St. Anne's Olivia Macdonald
Strange Flesh Devin Fearn
Sunset & Vine Brandon Martin
Ten Percent Off Sammy Sultan, Alan Niku
The Bubble Jarod Backens
The Conservatory Nate Washburn, Ben Bergin
The Dyson-Nüwa Project Joey Yu
The Fire Dog Killers Lit Kilpatrick
The Hero and the Spare Molly Gross
The Hunt for Ezekiel Adams Fred Kalmbach
The Jewish Office Joe Abel
The Long Odyssey of the Emily Mae Spike Scarberry
The Misdirect: "Monkeyshines" Brennan Howard
The Odds Matthew Berns
The Project Joshua Sanchez
The Renaissance Earth Nicolas Charron
The Source Jeff Schick
The Thin Place Katie Seward
The Tomahawk James Lujan
The Trade Thomas Archer
The White Company Willem Lee, Mayuran Tiruchelvam
The Wolves Within Ginger Marin, J Bartell
Vincent the Void Jaye Younkin
Vitals Nelson Downend
Wicked Saints Matthew Thaler
Wild Life Robert La Rocca
World No More Timothy Gannon
WWJD Hannah van Dijk
Wytch (for streamers) Travis Seppala
Zone 6 Christian Emanuel

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2023 ScreenCraft Drama Competition Semifinalists https://screencraft.org/blog/2023-screencraft-drama-competition-semifinalists/ Wed, 15 Nov 2023 18:00:00 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=55284 Listed below are the Semifinalists of the 2023 ScreenCraft Drama Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 1,200 submissions. Congratulations to the writers who...

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Listed below are the Semifinalists of the 2023 ScreenCraft Drama Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 1,200 submissions. Congratulations to the writers who have made it this far and thanks to all for submitting!

Stay tuned for the Finalist announcement on December 13th on our blog and on our Twitter, Facebook, and Instagram pages! And if you’d like to receive a notification when this contest re-opens for entries, you can subscribe for updates via Coverfly here.

Here are the Semifinalists:

A Blind Eye Allison Kitaguchi
A.C. Anonymous Victor Neumark
Amen & Ameen Susan Polk
As Scared As You Jesse Dorian
Athor Brian Streaty, Paul Rose
Breaker Bob Oltra, Addie Manis
Camouflage and Lipstick Lawrence Daly
Cariño Taylor Tejada
Clyde Sarah Schygulla
Come and Take It Fred Dahr
Cringe Stephanie Mathless, Erik Fassnacht
Dark Prayer Natasha Mostert
Dead Melody Gabe Berry
Discriminating Love Jerome Epps
Dreamwalker Jeremy Hsing
Eden Josh Bromfield Davis
Feelgood Colors Ryan Wagner
Florida Dreams Michael Rakoff, Steven Starkey
Groomer Christopher Lukens
Hellton for the Holidays Laura Hunter Drago
Here Lies Tommy Rodolfo Salas
In Bones and Soul James LeJeune
Infarction Mark Moronell
Inheritance Johnny Gilligan
Lifted Andrew Zeoli, Christian Wagner
Lilypads Dan Taft
Matriarch Helmann Wilhelm
Nashaa ("Intoxicate") Jas Kandola
One Rubbish Summer Alice Greenland
Ostrich Taylor Tejada
Personal Statement Timothy Pruett
Praise Megan Hayes
Pressure Drop Scott Cramer
Prisoners by Choice Attila Peli
Punic Pearse Lehane
Red Rising, Her Pirate Story Lila DoVan
Road Closure John Cerrito
Rule Of Law Eric Johnson
Scent of Marigold Lily Malm, Laila Matuk
Shudder, West Virginia Bryce Berkowitz
Talk Dirty To Me Harris Korn
The Bubble Jarod Backens
The Cricket Gabe Berry
The Divide Scott Kassel
The Golden City Michael Yuen
The Kidnapper Dave Moutray
The Larson Episode John Norton
The Mayan Gourd John Benck
The Rooster Prince Josh Soskin
The Visionary Michael Lucks
These Cuffs Followed Me Home Vijay Ilankamban
Unshakeable Heather Farlinger
Vigilant Abhi Kumar
Welcome to America Weiyang Liu
West Texas Holiday Matt Foss
Where the Ground Touches the Sky      Sye Mac
Wire Hangers Jon Davis

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Fall 2023 ScreenCraft Virtual Pitch Winners https://screencraft.org/blog/fall-2023-screencraft-virtual-pitch-winners/ Wed, 15 Nov 2023 18:00:00 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=55289 We are excited to announce the Winner and Runners Up for the Fall 2023 ScreenCraft Virtual Pitch Competition! Eight exceptional finalists were selected from more...

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We are excited to announce the Winner and Runners Up for the Fall 2023 ScreenCraft Virtual Pitch Competition!

Eight exceptional finalists were selected from more than 900 submissions to pitch their projects virtually to our esteemed panel of jurors, including Daniel Perry (Literary Agent, Buchwald), Brittani Nichols (Writer and Producer, ABBOTT ELEMENTARY), Maddy Farkas (TV Development, Brownstone Productions) and Christian Rodriguez (Literary Manager, AAO Entertainment).

Congratulations to the winners and runners up and thanks to all for submitting! If you’d like to receive a notification when this contest re-opens for entries, you can subscribe for updates via Coverfly here.

Winner:

Franken-Fried Alien by Juliet Mace

When an intergalactic Planned Parenthood accidentally poisons a small town creating a gargantuan fried fecal alien abortion Frankenstein, three local chicken shop workers must save their home from government demolition.

First Runner-Up:

Single Person by Matt Foss

Dumped by his cheating fiancé and his spineless school board, an off-beat drama teacher reluctantly becomes a contestant on a reality dating show where his efforts to lose paradoxically make him a winner for the first time in his life.

Second Runner-Up:

Government Exorcists: The Department of Internal Affairs by Malt Schlitzmann

Hell is real and it opened a portal to Worcester Massachusetts. The only group who can do anything about it is an underfunded branch of the FDA, but can the new boss save her department before she falls prey to her own dark secrets?

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5 Simple Ways to Conjure Shocking and Surprising Plot Twists https://screencraft.org/blog/5-simple-ways-to-conjure-shocking-and-surprising-plot-twists/ Fri, 03 Nov 2023 18:50:26 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=52982 While it's true that screenwriters (and movie studios, networks, and streamers) need to offer audiences something familiar to draw viewers in, it's a screenwriter's job...

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While it's true that screenwriters (and movie studios, networks, and streamers) need to offer audiences something familiar to draw viewers in, it's a screenwriter's job to shake things up and subvert expectations when it comes to stories, plots and characterizations. Audiences love the familiar, but they appreciate something shocking and surprising — like a good plot twist.

Here we present five simple ways to help you conjure shocking and surprising (there's a difference) plot twists in your screenplays. But before we do that, let's showcase the difference between what shocks us and what surprises us.

5 Simple Ways to Conjure Shocking and Surprising Plot Twists

The Difference Between Shocking Plot Twists and Surprising Plot Twists

The terms "shocking" and "surprising" are often used interchangeably. However, there's a subtle difference between the two that screenwriters should keep in mind when writing these different kinds of plot twists.

Shocking Plot Twists

Shocking plot twists are those that evoke a more visceral reaction from the audience — usually at the climax of the story. They create more disbelief and astonishment, and sometimes leave the audience disturbed.

Three of the most shocking plot twists in cinematic history came in the 1990s.

Read More: 101 Great Plot Twist Ideas to Elevate Your Script

Note: Beware of Spoilers for The Sixth Sense, Fight Club, and The Usual Suspects

The first, The Sixth Sense, made auteur M. Night Shyamalan the go-to shocking plot twist conjurer. We learn that Malcolm — the protagonist of the film — has actually been dead the whole time. He's a ghost. The revelation left the audience stunned, questioning everything they had watched prior. This is likely what led to the repeat viewings that drove the box office numbers up, as audiences went back to search for clues.

The second, Fight Club, managed to pull off one of the most shocking plot twists of its era — that the two lead characters were actually one person. And the eventual antagonist of the film, Tyler Durden, was the protagonist's alter ego due to his dissociative identity disorder. Audiences were shocked because, again, everything up until that twist is now was now in question. It subverted expectations and made audiences wonder what was real, and what wasn't.

The third, The Usual Suspects, revealed that Verbal Kint — the film's narrator — is actually Keyser Soze, the mastermind behind the entire operation. The supposed weak and vulnerable Verbal being harshly interrogated was nothing more than a ruse. This left the audience feeling shocked and in disbelief.

Surprising Plot Twists 

Surprising plot twists deviate from what was anticipated or predicted but don't always necessarily provoke the strong emotional response that a shocking plot twist would.

Note: Beware of Minor Spoilers for Everything Everywhere All at Once and Mission: Impossible movies. 

In Everything Everywhere All At Once, it's revealed that Jobu Tupaki, the villain of the story, is actually the Alpha version of Evelyn’s daughter Joy.

In the Mission Impossible movies, every time it's revealed that a character is using one of the face masks, the audience is surprised but not overall shaken.

Surprising plot twists can be more peppered throughout the script, playing with the audience's (and script reader's) predictive anticipation with minor twists that change the course of the story.

So, how do screenwriters come up with these surprising and shocking plot twists?

5 Simple Ways to Conjure Shocking and Surprising Plot Twists

5 Ways to Create Plot Twists

1. Subvert Expectations

Most movies and series follow generally established conventions or tropes. The filmmakers and writers do this to engage the audience and give them what they are familiar with. Audiences are highly risk-averse. They know what they want to see in any given genre, and they expect certain conventional storylines, plot tropes and character arcs.

Knowing this, you can set up those audience expectations and point them in one narrative direction and then choose a place within that story or plot to deliver a surprising plot twist that goes against their assumptions of what is about to happen.

This is the easiest way to conjure plot twists for your script.

  • If conventional wisdom tells the audience that the guy will get the girl at the end of a romantic comedy, maybe the guy doesn't get the girl but learns something valuable in the end.
  • If audiences expect a secondary character to die, consider making them the hero of the story.
  • Perhaps the protagonist's mentor is actually a villain?

5 Simple Ways to Conjure Shocking and Surprising Plot Twists

If you know movies and series storytelling, you have a general knowledge of what to expect in a story. Use that knowledge to go in an entirely different direction than what would be expected.

2. Toy with the Audience

If you're taking the audience down familiar roads and story paths, meet their expectations and subvert their expectations at will. This will create an edge-of-their-seat experience where they don't know where the story and its characters are going to take them. This goes beyond subverting expectations. You're playing with those expectations.

This is by far the most entertaining and satisfying part of writing a screenplay. You're taking the audience (and the script reader) on a ride. Depending on the genre, it could be any type of ride.

3. Create Multi-Motivations in Characters

Revealing hidden character motivations can be an easy way to surprise and shock the audience. These types of plot twists are intertwined with character arcs and also offer an opportunity for more character depth within your story. When you reveal that a character has dual or multiple motivations than what has been initially set up, added suspense is injected into the story. It also keeps the audience guessing when it comes to not just the plot points of the story, but the character motivations.

4. Utilize Time Shifts and Play with the Chronological Order of Events

Flashbacks, flashforwards, and nonlinear storytelling can be highly effective in surprising and shocking the audience. Forget past screenplay educational books that tell you these story devices are cheats or unwanted. It's how you use them that truly matters.

  • Start your script at the climax of the story — and then flashback to the protagonist's ordinary world to surprise and shock the audience as to how the character could find themselves in such a predicament.
  • Have two storylines begin in different parts of the story — one starting from the beginning, and one starting from the end — and then have them converge in surprising or shocking fashion.
  • Flashback to pivotal revelations that reveal ulterior motives or otherwise hidden backgrounds of characters that create surprising and shocking plot twists.

As long as you structure these stories well, and don't use them as crutches for mere exposition, these types of practices can create some unique and memorable plot twists.

The Sixth Sense

The Sixth Sense (1999)

5. Start from the Twist Before Developing and Writing the Script

While seemingly divine inspiration during the development and writing phase of the story is great, starting the initial process with already knowing various surprising plot twists and perhaps a major shocking plot twist for the end is always the best way to deliver. Why? Because you can spend the whole development and writing process leading up to those pre-conceived twists.

The reason The Sixth Sense delivered its shocking plot twist so well was primarily because Shyamalan peppered the script with clues, plants, payoffs and foreshadowing.

Read More: Screenwriting Plants and Payoffs: The Sixth Sense

Once you have a general idea or concept, start thinking about the various surprising and shocking plot twists that you could apply to the story you're building. Think of those before anything else. Challenge yourself to find opportunities to subvert expectations, toy with the audience, create multi-motivations in characters, and possibly utilize time shifts and play with the chronological order of events.

Read More: 101 Great Plot Twist Ideas to Elevate Your Script


Ken Miyamoto has worked in the film industry for nearly two decades, most notably as a studio liaison for Sony Studios and then as a script reader and story analyst for Sony Pictures.

He has many studio meetings under his belt as a produced screenwriter, meeting with the likes of Sony, Dreamworks, Universal, Disney, and Warner Brothers, as well as many production and management companies. He has had a previous development deal with Lionsgate, as well as multiple writing assignments, including the produced miniseries BLACKOUT, starring Anne Heche, Sean Patrick Flanery, Billy Zane, James Brolin, Haylie Duff, Brian Bloom, Eric La Salle, and Bruce Boxleitner, the feature thriller HUNTER'S CREED, and many produced Lifetime thrillers. Follow Ken on Twitter @KenMovies and Instagram @KenMovies76.


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2023 ScreenCraft Animation Competition Finalists https://screencraft.org/blog/2023-screencraft-animation-competition-finalists/ Wed, 01 Nov 2023 17:00:00 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=55207 Listed below are the Finalists of the 2023 ScreenCraft Animation Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 1,000 submissions. Congratulations to the writers who...

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Listed below are the Finalists of the 2023 ScreenCraft Animation Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 1,000 submissions. Congratulations to the writers who have made it this far and thanks to all for submitting!

Stay tuned for the Winner announcement on November 29th on our blog and on our Twitter, Facebook, and Instagram pages! And if you’d like to receive a notification when this contest re-opens for entries, you can subscribe for updates via Coverfly here.

Here are the Finalists:

Barking Robert Ian Simpson
Carrier Pigeon Graham Nelson
Coming Home Hadley Rose
Damsel Dash Adrien Callahan
I'm sorry I missed you Ethan Rogers
Jenkins and Watts: Paranormal Attorneys At Law      Michael Brennan
Kaltera Will Kisor, Gage Swanston
Medusa Tristan Bellawala
New Earth Devon Sharma
Offspring Hannah Silverman

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2024 ScreenCraft TV Pilot Script Competition Quarterfinalists https://screencraft.org/blog/2024-screencraft-tv-pilot-script-competition-quarterfinalists/ Wed, 25 Oct 2023 17:00:00 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=55163 Listed below are the Quarterfinalists of the 2024 ScreenCraft TV Pilot Script Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 2,100 submissions. Congratulations to the...

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Listed below are the Quarterfinalists of the 2024 ScreenCraft TV Pilot Script Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 2,100 submissions. Congratulations to the writers who have made it this far and thanks to all for submitting!

Stay tuned for the Semifinalist announcement on November 22nd on our blog and on our Twitter, Facebook, and Instagram pages! And if you’d like to receive a notification when this contest re-opens for entries, you can subscribe for updates via Coverfly here.

Here are the Quarterfinalists:

"A Slight Alteration" Devin Barnes
"Dorfman" Scott Dorfman
A Blind Eye Allison Kitaguchi
A Bright World According to Beto Gabriele Almon
A Dog's Life Sammy Leach
A Dollar Short Barry Leach
A Dream of Death and Data Gillian OMeagher
A Haunting Sight Madelaine Guthrie
A Kidnapping Matthew Serrins
A More Perfect Union Ron Willis
A Second After Midnight Tyler Schmieder
A.fter D.eath C.onsultants for Hire Jordan Oliver
After Troy Miller
After America Jonathan Melenson
Algorithm Taylor Whitelow
All My Friends Are Gay Duncan Lewis
Alliance Suzanne Griffin
Alone Jon Eudowe
Alpha Beta Chinese Christopher H-M Liu
ALPHASTATE Johnny Gilligan
Alter X Kari Kyle
American Ecstasy Barbara Nitke
American Enterprise Michael Rakoff, Don Purnell, Maui Holcomb
American Muscle Jordan Blazak
Americool Tim Janas
Amerika Zaf Ayub
Ancient City Bait Michael Kenney
Angel of Skid Row Aaron Michael Bailey
Ann Arbor Richard Redlo
Area Unknown: Eden Troy Miller, J.R. Smith
Aris V.P. Evans
Ascension Darren Moran
ATHOR Brian Streaty, Paul Rose
AUPUNI Erik Ries
B. O. B. (Battery Operated Boyfriend) L. A. Hunt
Babel Marlowe Harris
Baby Lesbians Lauren Dunitz
Bad Blood David Vieux
Bad Soviet Nik Sysuev
Baddies Lilian Mehrel
Barking Wolf James Everett
Beau Rivage Logan Rees
Biddy Karen Hood, Belinda Benko Dickey
Birdwatchers Rebecca Workman
Black Caesar Amanda Prentiss
Black Cop Douglas Darby
BLACKBURN 'Dead Work' Kathryn Smith
Blackfriar Chris Bolton
Blackland County Josh Taylor
Blackwood PI J Brooke Bond
Blair & Tommie Brody Burgess
Blessed James Cushinery
Blind Pony Samantha Hart
Bogged Down Anthony Zonfrelli
Booth Creighton Sillars
Bring Me The Sun Kiva Da Costa
Broken Dathan Paterno
Brokers Todd Restler
Brothers In Arms Jamal Henderson, Andrew English Jr
Burrowing Madeline Kann
Butternut Blues Joshua Perell
Can You Hear Me David Vieux
Cancelled? Thomas Ferguson
Captain Flynn's Log Parker Starnes
Carbon Zero Matthew Scheffler
Carnitas Mariana Reider
Chameleon Eugene Lee
Chavez Ravine scott lettieri
Chicken With Gun Andrew Mister
Chief Melanie Abrams Fierstein
Class Warfare Duncan Lewis
COINTELPRO Matt Stewart
Connectify Gianfranco Cuoco
Control-Alt-Delete - Pilot "Poking The Bear" Rudi O'Meara
Cooperstown John Licata
Corrosion Ryan Patch, Paul Masarro
Cosmic Forces Ryan LaSalle
Courtney Finds A Friend Chris Upp
Crazy Wendy Moulton Tate
Creatures of Chaos James Moon
Creemore Village Helmann Wilhelm
Crescent City Michael Brandt
Crow Matilda Corley Schulman
Culebron Chema Solari
Cyberknights Nikki Wallin
D.B. Nicole Donadio
Daddy Issues April Moreau
Daddy Issues Cerina Aragones
Dawn of the Eclipse Nico Wenzel
Dead Reckoning Luke Martin
Deadhead Ep. 1- "DREAMCATCHER" Apollo Hansen
Deadstick Stephen Barber
Deadway Mitchell Simms
Dean's List Emily Duke
Dear infinite curiosity, Christopher Alvarez
Dearly Departed Rob Campoy
Deep Cut Joel Jensen
Denise Jake Cullen, Oliver Cullen
Devil's Empire Sarah Gray
Devil's Son Jackie Lee
Dire Transfers Nate Suppaiah
Dirtbag Fantasies Jay Tigers
Dirty Deeds Sam E. Mack, Kirk Petruccelli
Dischordant Melanie Munt
Djinn Hunterz Seti Jakada
Doing Good Darren Moran
Dream Parasite Sora SH Chung
DRIFT Eva Konstantopoulos
Dwell David Clark
Edenville Lee Crompton
Ego Gennady McCracken
embassy row Kelsey Ross
Enter the Dreamscape! Peter Pappas
Eon Kent Moran
Evergreen Maryan Nagy Captan, Dini Parayitam
Everlost Vivian (Xiao Wen) Li
ExPand-Man Cliff Ryan
Experience Points Kris Horowitz
Falling Skies - Episode 1: Chandelier Tom McEvoy
Fine Lines Jake Cullen, Oliver Cullen
First Kiss Last Kiss Paul Lind
Foreverland Bev Chukwu
Frontiers Jarod Backens
Fugitives of Dust J. Aldo Gonzalez, Justin T. Malone
Fun & Games Sam Marchiano
Gal Pals Miriam Sachs
Gallatin Ryan Skinner
GAMESTOP Sam Norman
Genius Tracey Houston
GeriOsity Barbara Ward Thall
Gilded Terrors Jackie Todd
Go Green Jodie Hewson
Going Home Marilynn Loveless, Sara Dinga, Sherry Wachter, Patrick Dunphy
Gold Bricks! Eli Elbogen, Hunter Ashton
Gold Coast Ryan Galliher
Golem Simon Brown
Golems Steve Fisher
Good Bones Brooke Becker
Good City Natalia Chown
Good People Kris Fordham
GoodBetter Tagg West
Grace and the Aliens Jennica Lynn Johnson
Grain of Salt Ligia Maria Storrs Rojas, Justin Storrs
Grants Pass Eric Shani
Hail Mary Anne Dauchy
Hardware Store Detectives Nan Schmid
Headers Christopher Kelly
Held Under Benjamin Morgan
Helium-3 Aaron Sprecher
Hell County Jodie Bullock
Helping The Dead Ron Mondz
Here She Comes Jasmine Aziz, Dan McNeil
Homecoming Lynn Maleh
Honey Boba Saro Acharya
Honeymoon Shelly Mar
Honor Sonya Davis
House of Miracles Annina Black
Howl Zoe Kerr
Humanely Human Ryan Dellaquila
I Wanna Be the Lord of Darkness Jackie Lee
I'm Going to Kill The Moon Kumail Rizvi
Identities Bruno Lyra
Illegal Aliens Andrew Bryan Smith
Imaginary Friends Bryce Berkowitz
In My Heaven All Faucets are Fountains Jeremy Hsing
In the Light of a New Sun Will Saunders
INK Steve Garratt
Insane Clown Pussy Tita Poe
Into The Ether Steve Brown, Robert Rogers
INVADERS Daniel G. King
Jesus Christ! Hunter Gardner
Johanna Van Gogh Patrick Griffith
Jungle Tavish Gudgeon
Justin Case: Agent of S.Q.U.A.T. Douglas Wentworth, David Hogan
Kaya Etta Gray
Kill the Rabbit Rebekah Mueller
KILLERS Stephanie Stanley
Killing Boys Keeley Bell
Killner E Rissetto
Klown Town Lindsay Jean Michelle & Pam Bassuk
Kush Garden Michael Niehaus
L.O.T.U.S. Nathan Patton
Lacie in the Wonderverse Michael Ierulli
Lady Madonna Debra Mooradian
LAPD 2043 David Burton
Laughey Giraffey Adrián Burke
Laughing Badger Cory Jordan
Lazevnik Grove Jon Portman
League Night Nick Kokonas
Let Me Be Your Star Joshua White
Liberated Kyle Hughes
Life Begins Barbara Haynes
life through the lens Chad Hutson
Lifepasser Ted Bronson
LOGOS Alexander Blum
Lose Yourself Richard Osborne
Love, Mary Todd Bixby Elliot
Lunatic Chris Allport
Luxury Estates Bryan Chesters
Macabre Tales From Montague Manor Rich Vecchione
MADS Jan Pearson
Magddo Paden Burger
Maggie Valley Ezra Herz
Magneto Brandon Gale
Male Pattern Boredness Christopher Emanuel Smith
MAN MADE Aaron Pritchard
Man Made Denise Baughn
Man-Made Ryan Cunningham
Marlowe Simon Bowler Khan
Meaderville Bryce Berkowitz
Memento Mori Jason R. Kay
Michelin Star Samantha D’Amico
Mid-Aughts Rachel Gulotta
Midnight Cinema Jon Davis
Mighty Mediocre Temporary Rangers Rhys Schlichtholz-Garcia
Mind and Matter Ben Myers
Mirrors Christopher Lukens
Missing in the Midwest Michael Streight
Mitra Pranali Kamble
Moonrise Rebekah Mueller
Moonstone Beach Lisa Petersen
Mordred Rising Larry Gilmore
Most Wanted Cat Youell, Brad Crowe
Mound of Sh*t Scott Phillips
Moving In KJ Bell
My Job Is Hell Joslin Underhill
My Space Therapy Nate Raven
Nark Eric Garner
Neon Dreaming Ethan Westerfield
Neon Purgatory Sean O'Brien
Never Let Go Raven Petretti
Never Let Go Raven Petretti
Night Passing Scott Button
Nightfall David B. Guthrie
Non-Monogamy Richard Lister
NORJAK: The Lives of D.B. Cooper Christopher Santambrogio
Northway Brian Molongoski
Nothing Means Nothing Andrew Zeoli, Christian Wagner
Nuclear Family Gregory Abbey
Oasis Estates Carrie White
Office Pawlitics Tita Poe
Offsite Marc Winter
Offspring Allison McGevna-Cirino
Old Queens Reid Pope
On the Sidelines Mark Greene
One Wild Life Nate Huntley, Maddie Hammond
Or I'll feed him to the Sharks Colleen Henry
Our American Rebecca Mlinek
Out of This World Jeremy Pick
Out of Whack Derek Nicoletto
Overworld David Blue, Julie McNiven
Oy...A Jewish Comedy Series Shara Ashley Zeiger
Pancetta Jenah Silver
Pandora Jeff Bower
PANSY Jack Flynn
Paris, USA Matthew Maisano
Past Lives John Cerrito
Paul Gersey and The Whole World's Glory Liam LoPinto
Peace, Love, and Aliens Jackie Lee
Peaking Charlotte Lobdell, Jack Flynn
Piaf Maureen Mahon
Pickleballers Carlos Gabriel Ruiz
Pink and Purple Jazeel Gayle
Plastic Kingdom Josiah Powell
Play Alex Garcia-Laguer
Pleyn Delit Tommy Cook
Power Couple Ari Donnelly
Praise Megan Hayes
Pregnant bi Polly Ilana Garcia-Mittleman
Pretty OK Amrita Pradhan
Primeval Rocco Urso
Prisoner Tony Conniff
Project Hope Ralph Bishop
Proof L.H. McQueen
Protocol One Geoffrey Colo
Provocation Art Blount
Public Access Jordan Cipolla
Public Displays of Affection Samantha Jose
Puppet Tears John Cerrito
PWI Tiara Masso
QUASH John McCarney
Queen's English Tyler Dwiggins
Queenmaker Matija Sraj
R.P.S. Cameron Tennyson
Rainbow Reloaded Devin Gillis
Rare Charlotte Gajek
Rat City Ally Gilfeather
re.Form(ed) Johnny Gilligan
Rear View Timothy Gunatilaka
Red Scare Paige Meintzer
REDFLAGS Nathan Patton
Relatively Unrelated Christa Butler
Reuben Nella Dudova
Revelations Adam Chuckryk
RIDGELAND Ali Gordon-Goldstein
Righteous Side of Hell Eric Sanchez
Rightly So Mathew Kachur
Rim of the World Chris Knauer
Rise of the Unbeliever Jeff Viens
River Rats Bryce Berkowitz
Rodeo Drafthouse Peter Donaruma
Rubber Chicken Peter Dawson
Rudy Champion and the Edge of the Earth Philip Enchelmaier
Run! Run! Run! - The Lives of Abbie Hoffman Michael J. Shapiro
Sadist Jennifer Anderson
Same Old Tricks Barry Leach
Second Set Candace Egan
SEED Nti Aning
Seven South Sara Romeo-White
SHAKES Matt Foss
Shark Gregory Abbey
She/Hero Dina Laura
SHIKSA Sonya Goddy
Shitlaw Kevin Hulick
Shoot from the Hip James Barrett, Tony Robenalt
Shudder, West Virginia Bryce Berkowitz
Silent Blades Criss Gidas
Skála Shauna Joy
Skin Kelsey Kinney
Skylarks Kate Delin
Slipstream Imogen Cooper
SOMBRERO Ricardo Mestre
Sorry Grandpa Hsiao Candace Ho
Sour Dough Carlton Norris
South of the Gnat Line Georgia Norman
Spark & Iron-Strike Aleksander Krutainis
SPOILD Jay Tigers
SPOTLIGHT Annie Mitchell, Ash Newman
St. Anne's Olivia Macdonald
Stalemates Sam Wiens
Stealth Help Inc. Christin Balan
Strange Flesh Devin Fearn
Stuck in Park Jimmy Jo
Student Affairs John Orozco
Sunset & Vine Brandon Martin
Sweet Science Peter Petralia
Swindled Matt Sharp
SYMBIONTS Johnny Gilligan
Talk Dirty To Me Harris Korn
Tang Matthew Giacheri
Tears Of The Feelers Maor Pticha
Ten Percent Off Sammy Sultan, Alan Niku
Terror and Virtue Ernest Pysher
The Adventures of JD Gabriela S. Rodriguez
The American War Kelby George
The Assistant Araceli Sanchez
The Babies of Luna Park Bat-Sheva Guez
The Backrooms Jon Addison
The Bad Newz Jay Hodgkins
The Best of Us James Barnes
The Blood in Our Veins Garrett Hemmerich
The Book of Raquel Olga Holtz
The Bubble Jarod Backens
The Complex Ben Carter Olcott
The Conservatory Nate Washburn, Ben Bergin
The Creed of Man Caden Stayner
The Dark Calm Conner Reed
The Domino Adam Hoelzel
The Dyson-Nüwa Project Joey Yu
The Earth, My Butt, and Other Big Round Things Sophie Hessekiel
The Endless House Mark Zakeri
The Enterprise Marisa Forrest
The Estate Chris Squadrito
The Everest Project Paula Cantillo
The Faceless Harry Maxon, Holly Maxon
The Family Doctor C.S. Woo
The Fire Dog Killers Lit Kilpatrick
The Fruitlanders Laurie Rivlin Heller
The Ghost Club Mitch Smith
The Golden Children Julia Weisberg
The Good Detective Richard Stokes
The Good Girl Of Chinatown M Lee Speyer
The Grind Laurel Gans
The Headlands Steve Bruno
The Heart Goes Missing Tom Matthew Wolfe
The Hero and the Spare Molly Gross
The Hopeful Romantic Marissa Ziets
The Houdinis Ron Mondz
The Hunt for Ezekiel Adams Fred Kalmbach
The Invisibles Sheri McMahon
The Jewish Office Joe Abel
The Last Cabin Left on Old Sycamore Lane Michael Rakoff
The Local Mark Naccarato
The Long Odyssey of the Emily Mae Spike Scarberry
The Loop Whitney Crowder, Adam Hardman
The Marshal Zach Pappas
The Match Justin Ballheim
The Misdirect: "Monkeyshines" Brennan Howard
The Monks Jessie Cohen
The Mulligans AKA The Retreads Christopher Sweeney
The Murder of Jensen Scott Just Lunning
The Murder of Thomas Merton John Fitch III, Mitch Smith
The Nightshift Shiv B
The Nightshift Shiv B
The Odds Matthew Berns
The Orchard Jeremy Pick
The People Team Jonathan Weisbrod, William Stribling, Russ Nickel
The Phantom Of Venice Daria Burge
The Primordials Rebecca Goulding
The Project Joshua Sanchez
The Renaissance Earth Nicolas Charron
The Revolutionary Potential of Dance William Keiser
The Rothschilds Mimi Hasson, Steven Peros
The Satisfaction Greg Sidman
The Singing Telegrams Edward Grey
The Soloist Daniel Hernandez-Zapata
The Son of Life Tyler Blomstrom-Moore
The Source Jeff Schick
The Substitutes Stephen Krespel
The Talbot Group Evan Lawless
The Terminal Club Kimberly St.croix
The Terrorist Jeremy Hudson
The Thin Place Katie Seward
The Titanomachy: From Darkness Mikael Holcombe-Scali
The Tomahawk James Lujan
The Trade Thomas Archer
The Turners' Daughters Edoardo Vitaletti
The Union AJ Currie
The United States of Automata Austin Langley
The Washbournes John Rodriguez
The White Company Willem Lee, Mayuran Tiruchelvam
The Whitzeks Sam Parker
The Wolves Within Ginger Marin, J Bartell
The Wrestling Show Julie Harrison-Harney
Therapeutic Craig Berger
Thermal Maximum Ellen Riverside
Thornfield Amanda Cole
Those Loyal Mike Fitzgerald
Threestyle Matt C. Dawson
Thunderfoot Carlton Welch
Til Death Do Us Part Lachlan Vary
Times Scare Sara Rose Carr
Transmissions Brett Caron
Treasure Valley Chapman Hyatt
Trigger Objects Nik Perring
Triumvirate David Alexander
Turf Wars Lee Crompton
Under One Roof Rose Casolari
UnderLand Keren Green
United Beef Russell Costanzo
Valerie August Mak Deezal
Vetted Sean Carmichael
Vigilant Abhi Kumar
Vincent the Void Jaye Younkin
VIPs Jenna Larson
Vitals Nelson Downend
Vortex Jordan Bolinger, Anthony Marcon Marcon
Wake the System Micah Sloat
Weird Things in the Sky Gideon Shmorak
Welcome to Dalwood Joshua Young
West Wing High Joshua Kazemi
What Have I Done To Deserve This Chris Phillips, Billy Walker
White Gold Benjamin Del Vecchio, Jair Kornegay
White Hat Sarah Granger
White Lies Margaux Poupard
Wicked Saints Matthew Thaler
Wild Life Robert La Rocca
Wire Hangers Jon Davis
Wonderama Jack Mayer
World No More Timothy Gannon
Wrecks Joseph Capp
WWJD Hannah van Dijk
Wytch (for streamers) Travis Seppala
Yellow Tie Jeffrey Shieh
You Are Not A Hero Josh Jacobs
Zero Light Christina Auriana
Zone 6 Christian Emanuel

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Fall 2023 ScreenCraft Virtual Pitch Finalists https://screencraft.org/blog/fall-2023-screencraft-virtual-pitch-finalists/ Wed, 18 Oct 2023 17:00:10 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=55072 Listed below are the Finalists of the Fall 2023 ScreenCraft Virtual Pitch Competition. These exceptional pitches were selected from almost 700 submissions. Congratulations to the...

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Listed below are the Finalists of the Fall 2023 ScreenCraft Virtual Pitch Competition. These exceptional pitches were selected from almost 700 submissions. Congratulations to the writers who have made it this far and thanks to all for submitting.

We are so excited for our Finalists who will pitch their projects to our industry jury that includes Andres Fernandez (Creative Executive, ARRAY), Daniel Perry (Literary Agent, Buchwald), Brittani Nichols (Writer, Abbott Elementary), Maddy Farakas (TV Development, Brownstone Pictures) and Derrick Eppich (Literary Manager, Empirical Evidence).

Stay tuned for the Winner announcement on November 15th on our blog and on our Twitter, Facebook, and Instagram pages! And if you’d like to receive a notification when this contest re-opens for entries, you can subscribe for updates via Coverfly here.

Here are the Finalists:

De-Code Switch April Kimble
Franken-Fried Alien Juliet Mace
Going Batty Maya Florin
Government Exorcists: The Department of Infernal Affairs Malt Schlitzmann
Rejuvenation Rudi O'Meara
Single Person Matt Foss
The Bridal Posse Scott Cox
The Sangeet Arjuna Mahenthiran

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2023 ScreenCraft Drama Competition Quarterfinalists https://screencraft.org/blog/2023-screencraft-drama-competition-quarterfinalists/ Wed, 18 Oct 2023 17:00:01 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=55080 Listed below are the Quarterfinalists of the 2023 ScreenCraft Drama Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 1,200 submissions. Congratulations to the writers who...

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Listed below are the Quarterfinalists of the 2023 ScreenCraft Drama Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 1,200 submissions. Congratulations to the writers who have made it this far and thanks to all for submitting!

Stay tuned for the Semifinalist announcement on November 15th on our blog and on our Twitter, Facebook, and Instagram pages! And if you’d like to receive a notification when this contest re-opens for entries, you can subscribe for updates via Coverfly here.

Here are the Quarterfinalists:

$10 Fortune Michael Bret Hood
5 Years, 5 Months Ani Simon-Kennedy
A Blind Eye Allison Kitaguchi
A Christmas Tale Giovanni D'Amaro
A Gangsters Tackle Box Janifer Youmans
A.C. Anonymous Victor Neumark
Adam's Song Nathan Xia
After You Sean Wathen
Airplanes and Bad Decisions James Thompson
All Saintsmen Michael Sosnowski
Allegiance Sonya Davis
Amateurs John Nodilo
Amen & Ameen Susan Polk
American Enterprise Michael Rakoff, Don Purnell, Maui Holcomb
Anglerfish Megan McKiernan
Apples Rodolfo Salas
ARC Steve Valentine
As Scared As You Jesse Dorian
Ashes and Bone Shannon Davies
Athor Brian Streaty, Paul Rose
Atlantis Jeremy Gluck
Awaken The Wolves Jason W. Lee
Bariloche Claudia Cifuentes
Be Cool Prachi Bhardwaj
Between Good and Goodbye Corey Chavers
Biddy Belinda Benko Dickey, Karen Hood
Bind Our Hearts Kemp Lee
Binky Tom Batha
Black Prince Chris Schwarz
Blackwood PI J Brooke Bond
Blind Eyes Jerry Jerome
Blinded by Faith Helen Hudson
Blue Chips 1 Nick Flanagan
Bouquet Canyon R. D. Smith, Nicklaus Parada
Braided Chaise Gerber
Breaker Bob Oltra, Addie Manis
Breathe Eric Yang
Brownie Mary Brent Delaney
Bury Your Bodies Deep Nick Kloppenberg
Burying Granddad Sam Harding
But Some of Us Are Brave Jainaba Seckan
Call Of The Void Ben Monaco
Camouflage and Lipstick Lawrence Daly
Cariño Taylor Tejada
Champ Dylan Gallimore
Child of Woe Samuel Perrone, Michael Perrone
Clyde Sarah Schygulla
Color Me In James Murphy
Come and Take It Fred Dahr
Committed Jill Morley
Community Garden Matthew Boggess
Confabulation Sylvia LaFleur
Cosmos Black Eliot Cooper
Creemore Village Helmann Wilhelm
Crime In A Bottle Robert Londberg
Cringe Stephanie Mathless
Daisy Iain Anderson
Dangerous Days Ruben Varela
Dark Mountain Ryan Howard, Daniel Howlett
Dark Prayer Natasha Mostert
Dead Dad's Club Christopher Kelly
Dead Melody Gabe Berry
Deadline William Hyland
Deliver Will Tarlton
Different From The Others Ben Samuels
Dirty Work Tara Handza
Discriminating Love Jerome Epps
Dissecting Rod Serling Joel Karlinsky, Eafat Newton
Don’t Cry Stefan Alexander, Anthony Guilianti
Dreamers Jack Gorman
Dreamwalker Jeremy Hsing
Dry by Midnight Dustin Cook, Gregory Caruso
Eden Josh Bromfield Davis
Endora Brandon Windsor
Equinox Mira Atwah
Esperanza David Christopher Loya
Ethereal Betty Bema
Exposed Alan Schwarz
Exposition Girl Sofia Drummond-Moore
Far West Randy Woodley, Edith Woodley
Feelgood Colors Ryan Wagner
Final Days Mia Donnelly
Fire Season Conner Allen
Florida Dreams Michael Rakoff, Steven Starkey
For Life (Por Vida) Tristan Rodriguez
Forest for the Trees Peter Murphy
Found Antonio Aguinaga
Freedom Express Hernando Romero-Gomez
Freedom Man Billy Festorazzi
Frontiers Jarod Backens
GAMESTOP Sam Norman
Gemini James LeJeune
Going under Anita Rogers
Gold Digger Rachel Hutchings
Grandma Betty Jacob Lazarow
Gray Zone Veronica Tabares
GRiND Maxwell Goldman
Gringos Gladden Rangel
Groomer Christopher Lukens
Grown Ant Rivera
Hard Virtue Mansur Ahmed
Headers Christopher Kelly
Hellton for the Holidays Laura Hunter Drago
Helmand Daniel Salamanca
Helping The Dead Ron Mondz
Here Lies Tommy Rodolfo Salas
Holes of Glory Kristen Alario
Hometown Glory Abija Mukendi
Honeyfly Nicolas Scroggins
How Far Chris Inekhomon
How to build a home Genevieve Cramsie
I Chose Earth Over Heaven Tom Burke
Identity Joseph Jaussi
Iguana You Back Noah Pohl
In Bones and Soul James LeJeune
Infarction Mark Moronell
Inheritance Johnny Gilligan
Instantaneous Blue Aaron Craven
Insurrection Simon Bowler
It could be worse Ilaria Ricci
It takes a long time to get young Patrick Timpone
Ivories Zach Taylor Roth
Jamedna Nina Shelton
Jasminder Art Arutyunyan, Rohini Chandra
Jerome, July 4th Joe Favalaro
Just What You Need Keith Zivalich
Karl Vincent Gallut
Keroin Hills Virginia Austin
Kill the Rabbit Rebekah Mueller
LA LEÇON DU MAÎTRE Joseph Lushi
La Parca Miguel del Campo
La Sudamericana Angelo Dania
Land of the Young Zach Bandler
Last Will Daniel Stevens
Lifted Andrew Zeoli, Christian Wagner
Lilypads Dan Taft
Liv & Mel Jennifer Katz
Looking For Nirvana Robert Ian Simpson
Lords of New York Aaron Pritchard
Love Lyric Justin LeMond
Lucky Danny Wascou
Lucy/Lucinda Adir Golan
Madam Syndicate Daniel Yi
Mafia Secrets: Honor and Silence Matt Curtsinger
Malaga Jeff Thurber
Marilyn 13 Jocelyn Osier
Masked Men Eileen Dennehy
Matriarch Helmann Wilhelm
Maxine & The Queen - Femme Fatales! Tom Burke
Meaderville Bryce Berkowitz
Mercy Springs Helen Hudson
Merde' Kimberly Samon
Mere Mortals Russ Lindway
Merry Outlaws Remi Vaughn
Michelin Star Samantha D’Amico
Mindful Stephanie Alban
miri & gav Matilda Corley Schulman
Mission City Darrell McGregor
Moksha Saurin Lakhia
More Than A Heart Can Hold Julia Maddox
Mother Mary Jaye Younkin
Mudpuppies Tavish Gudgeon
My Brother Fruitcake Lynwood Shiva Sawyer, Jen Senko
My Caddie Mike Zimmerman
My Idiot Sister Michael Basha
My Only Everything Gillie Perkins
Nashaa ("Intoxicate") Jas Kandola
Neophyte Cole Stamm
Nettles: Flowers Don't Belong In The Dustbin Yvette Farmer
New New York Rachel Hong
Next Semester Gabe Berry
Next Thursday Wendy Swiney
Night of Slow Tears Aaron Lovett
Noel & Leon Dayna Hanson, Dave Proscia
Normal Liesl Wilke
Objects in Mirror Danny Katz
Odyssey at the End of the World Albert Wang
Off Guard Paul Lind
On Blackpoint Road Anna Scotti
On Island Rie Anders
Once and Future Kylie Boersma
One Rubbish Summer Alice Greenland
One Single Solitary Son Sean Azze
Ostrich Taylor Tejada
Our Echo-Lives Brian Wapole
Pareidolia Ashley MacPherson
Past Lives John Cerrito
Patrons of the Righteous Joseph Franklin
Personal Statement Timothy Pruett
Phaeton Olivia G
Praise Megan Hayes
Pressure Drop Scott Cramer
Prisoners by Choice Attila Peli
Punic Pearse Lehane
Qualies Andrew Cahn
Red King Daniel Salamanca
Red Rising, Her Pirate Story Lila DoVan
Redemption Lisa Weiss
Richard Spong Terry Podnar
Right Beside You, Dear Scott Honea
Riverwalk James Miller
Road Closure John Cerrito
Rope Richard Turgeon
Rule Of Law Eric Johnson
Run Red Felicity Landa
Save Me Sara Stockbridge
Save the Child John DeStafney
Savior Brandon Marlon
Scent of Marigold Lily Malm, Laila Matuk
Sebago Lake Bradley Casalinuovo
Send in the Clowns Tyler Peterson, Jordan Peterson
Shadow Dancing Dianna Ippolito
Shaka Emelie Svensson
Shallow Waters Conor O'Farrell
Shudder, West Virginia Bryce Berkowitz
Side Dishes Amelia Hoang
Skin Deep Sylvia Mulholland
Slit AJ Currie
Snake Oil Danny Katz
Soldiers of Martial Law Alex Tackett
Soulless Darrin Grimwood
Strive David Bold
Sunnier Climes Mia Volta
Sunny & Tessa - Pearls in The Jungle Tom Burke
Swan Song Megan Hermann
SWEET 16 - The Long Road to Love! Tom Burke
Swine Lake Michael Rakoff
Take Care of Her Y.S. Kim
Talk Dirty To Me Harris Korn
The Modesto Messiah Richard Roller, Gregory Bell
The Art of Starving Joe Favalaro
The Belonging Kathy Robinson
The Bubble Jarod Backens
The Cricket Gabe Berry
The Curator Matthew Syrett
The Curse and Redemption of Nikesh Prasad Nikhil Prakash, Santosh Oommen
The Cycle Josh Snyder
The Divide C. E. Simon
The Divide Scott Kassel
The Donnelly Affair Caroline Friedman Levy
The Dreamers Support Group Matthew Tolbert
The Elevator Robert Rice II
The Empty Garage Elan Maier
The Family S. E. Green
The Farmer Robert Cuen
The First Day Madeline & Ian Blue & McClellan
The Forgotten Ones Ryan L. Jones
The Gauntlet-Drama Hernando Romero-Gomez
The Ghost Wedding Sining Xiang, Patrick Boyd
The Golden City Michael Yuen
The Grass Is Greener (TGIG) Miles McComb
The Houdinis Ron Mondz
The Informer Coli Sylla
The Kidnapper Dave Moutray
The Larson Episode John Norton
The Last Thing I Do C. E. Simon
The Man by the River Casey Warfield
The Match Justin Ballheim
The Mayan Gourd John Benck
The Nightshift Shiv B
The Ornament Jamie Faryniak
The Power of Wings Connie Rankin
The Prison Lawyer Mark Landry, Vanessa Hagen
The Reckoning of Billy Barnes Jeff Cotton
The Rift Travis Callahan
The Rooster Prince Josh Soskin
The Seamstress of Hollywood Boulevard Charlotte Lobdell, Jack Flynn
The Seed Loves You William Leavengood
The Sheridan Children Michael Harkins
The Snip Billy Hanson
The Son Jay Smith
The Truth About Sam Tara Handza
The Very True Existence of Susannah and Her Friends C. E. Simon
The Vigilante Vampire Michael Faunce-Brown
The Visionary Michael Lucks
The Wages of Sin Byron James, Stephen Johns
The Wake-Up Music Festival Kristan Foreman
The Willow Tree Grows Green in Springtime Min Lee
The Workshop Brad Sullivan, Bryan Smith
Thermal Maximum Ellen Riverside
These Cuffs Followed Me Home Vijay Ilankamban
They Also Serve... John F. McCarney
Third Button Rajko Stiglic
Three Hermits Kiera Bratton Lewis
Ties That Bind Laura Harbin
To The Stars K. Michelle Stewart
Today's Date C. E. Simon
U.S.A. Rules! Tom Burke
Under The Influence Louis Lehrman
Undercurrent Debby Huvaere
Unshakeable Heather Farlinger
Valerie August Mak Deezal
Victor Aaron Huckleberry
Vigilant Abhi Kumar
Violet's Code Julian Paulsen
Vivian David Woll
Voracious Hounds Danielle Bishop
Warning Signs Aaron Michael Bailey
Welcome to America Weiyang Liu
West Texas Holiday Matt Foss, Heidi-Marie Ferren
What We Were Promised Michael Harkins
Whatever It Takes Jim Bodley
Where the Ground Touches the Sky Sye Mac
Where There's Smoke Danny Katz
Whiskey and Words Jack Gorman, Shannon Walsh
White Bridge Katia Ray
White Rhino Slava Kirillov
Who Let the Wallflowers Out? Virginia Austin
Who Will Live? Paul Sokal
Wildhaven Nadya Reich
Winnie & Clyde Matthew Rafferty
Wire Hangers Jon Davis
Wonder Girl Jonathan Solomon
Working Tacoma Rod Tipton

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2023 ScreenCraft Action & Adventure Screenplay Competition Winners https://screencraft.org/blog/2023-screencraft-action-adventure-screenplay-competition-winners/ Wed, 18 Oct 2023 17:00:01 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=55091 Listed below are the Winners of the 2023 ScreenCraft Action & Adventure Screenplay Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 700 submissions. Congratulations to...

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Listed below are the Winners of the 2023 ScreenCraft Action & Adventure Screenplay Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 700 submissions. Congratulations to these winning writers and thanks to all for submitting!

Grand Prize Winner

East Jesus by Duane Graves

A pair of kinfolk Texas cops are lifelong products of Denler, the once-thriving rural boomtown they dutifully protect. When skyrocketing crime and moral decay threaten to wipe their tiny town from the map, the duo resort to desperate, unorthodox measures to save it.

Feature Winner

Heartrace by Will Bermender

A father will stop at nothing to save his dying daughter after a drug cartel hijacks her transplant heart.

TV Pilot Winner

Kill School by Katrina Skender

In a dystopian future where humans have evolved into two species, superior Predators and inferior Prey, one rebellious teenage girl desires to escape Predator society to pursue inter-species peace – there’s only one problem: if all you’re taught is violence, how do you know what “peace” is?

Add-on Prize Mentorship Winner
with Andrew Bergamo

Lure by Tom Castillo

After cutting an illegal fishing line, an estranged father and son are chased across the sea by a vengeful ship.

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2023 ScreenCraft Feature Screenplay Competition Winners https://screencraft.org/blog/2023-screencraft-feature-competition-winners/ Wed, 11 Oct 2023 17:00:14 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=55024 Listed below are the Winners of the 2023 ScreenCraft Feature Screenplay Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 2,000 submissions. Congratulations to these winning...

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Listed below are the Winners of the 2023 ScreenCraft Feature Screenplay Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 2,000 submissions. Congratulations to these winning writers!

Grand Prize Winner (Selected by Meg LeFauve)

The Refugee by Jennifer Black & Ibrahim Renno

A tormented Syrian refugee finds his pulse again in caring for a neglected 10-year-old, until her abduction by a savage gang forces him to resurrect his vigilante prowess to save her.

Grand Prize Winner (Selected by Stephany Folsom)

Electric Road by M.K. Ching

When an autistic boy is inadvertently taken during a carjacking, his parents give chase, remotely connecting to the car's dashcam in order to follow their son. Meanwhile, a mysterious woman attempts to goad the accidental kidnapper into murdering the boy—for reasons known only to her.

Grand Prize Winner (Selected by Samuel D. Hunter)

The Cockfighter by Andrew Case

To pay off a loan shark, a foolhardy Vietnam vet is driven to desperate ends as he navigates the go-for-broke world of underground cockfighting in 1980s Oklahoma.

Nardeep Khurmi Industry Mentorship Winner

Mother Mehreen by Anna Khan

A Muslim teenager’s lies to cover up her secret abortion from her small Mississippi town spiral out of control when she accidentally claims immaculate conception, and is soon heralded as the mother of the next messiah.

The Anonymous Content Mentorship Add-On Winner will be decided at a later date after further consultations.

Congratulations to these winning writers, and thank you to our jury and to everyone who submitted projects; we read a number of remarkable scripts. View the quarterfinalists, semifinalists and finalists by clicking the corresponding link.

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What is a Plot Hole and How Can You Avoid Writing Them? https://screencraft.org/blog/why-plot-holes-happen-and-how-screenwriters-can-avoid-them/ Wed, 11 Oct 2023 13:00:47 +0000 http://screencraft.org/?p=16332 Ah, plot holes — those pesky narrative inconsistencies that plague all writers regardless of their experience level. You know one when you see one. It's the...

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Ah, plot holes — those pesky narrative inconsistencies that plague all writers regardless of their experience level. You know one when you see one. It's the illegal crane kick in The Karate Kid, the choice to train deep-core drillers to be astronauts in Armageddon, or Bruce Willis's time off-camera in The Sixth Sense. (What was he doing and wasn't he curious as to why no one would interact with him!!?) There's a lot to unpack when it comes to plot holes, so let's go over the definition, the most infamous examples in film, and ways to spot them in your own writing so you can avoid them.

What is a Plot Hole and How Can You Avoid Writing Them?

Plot Hole Definition

Plot (plät) — the main events of a play, novel, movie, or similar work, devised and presented by the writer as an interrelated sequence.

Hole (hōl) — a hollow place in a solid body or surface.

Plot Hole (plät hōl) a gap or inconsistency in a storyline that goes against the flow of logic established by the story’s plot, or constitutes a blatant omission of relevant information regarding the plot. These include such things as unlikely behavior or actions of characters, illogical or impossible events, events happening for no apparent reason, or statements or events that contradict earlier events in the storyline.

We see them within even the highest quality of movies that come to the big and small screen. And they come in all different shapes and sizes.

What is a Plot Hole and How Can You Avoid Writing Them?

Three Categories of Plot Holes

Movie plot holes can be broken down into three distinct categories:

  • Moderate Plot Holes
  • Excessive Plot Holes
  • Over the Top Plot Holes

Moderate Plot Holes

Moderate plot holes are minor in the big scheme of the story and are caused by a number of reasons.

  • Budget limitations
  • Production scheduling issues
  • Writing oversights
  • Easy answers to solving a character's problems

What is a Plot Hole and How Can You Avoid Writing Them?

These types of plot holes don't drastically affect the overall narrative and are either reasonable, forgivable, or neither excessive nor insufficient. You'll usually find them in individual scenes, rather than throughout the whole cinematic story.

Excessive Plot Holes

Excessive plot holes are a bit more major, specifically affecting the overarching character arcs throughout the entire story. The story itself may not falter because of these plot holes. However, the characterization elements of the story may be drastically affected.

  • Intelligent characters making unintelligent decisions.
  • Unintelligent characters outwitting intelligent characters.
  • Heroic characters acting unheroically.
  • Unheroic characters acting heroically.
  • Characters going against their established beliefs.

What is a Plot Hole and How Can You Avoid Writing Them?

You can have moderate plot holes pop up in individual scenes, and you can have excessive plot holes present within the characters of a story — all while still providing an engaging cinematic experience (see any major action-filled rollercoaster flick).

But it's the over-the-top plot holes that can derail the cinematic experience altogether.

Over-The Top Plot Holes

Over-the-top plot holes involve the overarching story and how it is presented. When you negatively challenge the logic of the story you are trying to tell, the audience will disengage. The conflict facing the characters will likely be deemed unbelievable. And when that happens, you've lost the audience.

If a character is facing the ultimate conflict and suddenly has unexplained powers or unbelievable luck, the audience won't be invested in the drama of the moment because the stakes are no longer high, and the conflict is no longer interesting.

Some of these plot holes are more tolerable than others. Some genres — horror, science fiction, fantasy, comedy, and action — call for audiences to suspend their disbelief in exchange for pure and utter entertainment. But writers need to tread carefully when deciding how far they want to push that plot hole envelope.

What is a Subplot?

Five Types of Plot Holes

1. MacGuffin Plot Inconsistencies

These arise when the narrative presents inconsistencies related to MacGuffins, which are objects or goals that drive the plot forward, sought after by protagonists for various reasons.

Read More: Everything You Need to Know About MacGuffins

2. Logical Plot Incoherencies

These occur when certain elements of the story lack logical consistency, whether it's within the real-world context or in relation to the rules and setups established by the screenwriters and filmmakers.

3. Character Plot Discrepancies

These involve inconsistencies in characters' decisions, sudden introduction of unexplained abilities to resolve conflicts, or any deviations from established character traits.

4. Narrative Plot Discrepancies

Narrative plot holes refer to gaps or irregularities within the storyline that disrupt its coherence.

5. Deus Ex Machina Plot Flaws

These emerge when an apparently unsolvable or insurmountable conflict is suddenly resolved through the introduction of a new character, skill, or object.

What is a Plot Hole and How Can You Avoid Writing Them

Why Plot Holes Happen

It's easy — and lazy — to immediately point fingers at the screenwriter. Sure, there are many cases where screenwriters are to blame. However, the process of development and filmmaking as a whole only begins with the written word.  There are many filter systems in place before a movie is released to the masses — script readers, development executives, producers, directors, script supervisors, and talent. The blame doesn't just fall on screenwriters.

Too Many Hands in the Cookie Jar

In Hollywood, notes are offered ad nauseam to screenwriters from a plethora of sources, including:

  • Development executives
  • Producers
  • Studio executives
  • Directors
  • Talent.

That can amount to dozens of subjective opinions offered by people who have their own vision of the project at hand.

What is a Plot Hole and How Can You Avoid Writing Them

Screenwriters are tasked to apply the many different notes through many different drafts and then sometimes additional screenwriters are brought in to enhance certain elements of the script. When that happens, you now have multiple writers with their own creative perspectives. Thus, we see different shifts in tone, atmosphere, logic, character arc, story arc, etc. And they're stuck with it because the deadline has come and gone — and it's time to shoot.

Production

During any given production, things change.

  • Production problems arise.
  • Budget cuts occur.
  • Schedules change.
  • Interpretation of the script can be at odds.

Because film is a collaborative medium, by the time production is underway, many things can change — for better or worse.

The Edit

Many plot holes that you see in movies are a direct result of the final edit, and the many edits that came before it. The final cut is never representative of the shooting screenplay.

The edit can drastically change what was in the original shooting script.

  • Pacing
  • Tone
  • Atmosphere
  • Characterization
  • Theme

Scenes are cut for any number of reasons. When that happens, those moderate, excessive, or over-the-top plot holes occur.

The Screenwriter

And yes, we do need to go back to the screenwriter now that we've thrown everyone else under the bus.

Plot holes are aplenty in the many drafts that a screenwriter can write. They are a product of many mishaps, including:

  • Miscalculation
  • Bad memory
  • Complacency
  • Naivete
  • Laziness

Creative (and Forgivable) Choices

Sometimes a plot point is created to up the stakes.

Read More: Must-Read Analogy That Teaches "Raises the Stakes" in Screenplays

Other times, a movie just needs some added plot twists and turns to keep things interesting for the audience. Screenwriters, producers, and filmmakers do this knowing that someone could easily pick apart the logic of such choices. However, that suspension of disbelief asked of the audience will never go away. The people behind the scenes often go into these eventual plot holes knowing that they serve a greater good.

Plot Holes Examples

Okay, we know what plot holes are. We understand the different types of plot holes. And we also have an idea of why plot holes occur. Now let's take a look at ten examples to put everything in perspective.

Spoiler Alerts Below!

Cutting the Power Plot Hole in Die Hard

Despite Die Hard being one of the greatest screenplays ever written, it has many plot holes. The biggest — yet oddly overlooked — plot hole can be found in the power supply plot point of the film. Hans Gruber and his men concoct a scenario where they will trick authorities into thinking that they are terrorists. Because they know general tactics of the police and FBI, they expect them to cut the power, which would disengage the last security measure and allow them to access the fault.

Wouldn't it have been easier for them to send a team to cut the power themselves?

Nazis Digging in the Wrong Spot Plot Hole in Raiders of the Lost Ark

Indiana Jones and Sallah quickly discovered that the Nazis were searching in the wrong area for the Ark of the Covenant. If they had simply departed with the medallion, the Nazis would never have laid eyes on the Ark.

The Poster Plot Hole in The Shawshank Redemption

It's revealed that Andy tunneled his way out of prison after many years of work using only a small rock hammer. We're willing to forgive how long it would have taken him to do so (that is somewhat addressed in the film). However, if Andy crawled through the tunnel to escape, how was the poster reattached to the cell wall to cover his escape tunnel?

Unconscious and Time-Traveling Indy Plot Hole in Indiana Jones and the Dial of Destiny

Let's take it back to Indiana Jones — this time in the final chapter of the character's story. In the end, when Helena, Indy, and company have traveled back in time to the era of Archimedes. Indy wants to stay. However, Helena punches him out. Indy wakes up in his apartment. He has somehow been transported back to his present time and has been also transported back to his apartment. How did Helena do all of this without Indy waking up?

The Illegal Kick Plot Hole in The Karate Kid

Sure, we could explain this away. Many (yours truly) have. However, the plot hole of the illegal kick still remains. During the tournament, Daniel is told that kicks to the face are illegal. Yet he manages to win the whole thing with — wait for it — a kick to the face.

The Not-So-Quiet Place Plot Hole in A Quiet Place

A family lives in near-silence in a postapocalyptic world where aliens with acute hearing attack the slightest of sounds. However, the family does visit a waterfall area where the noise is so loud that they can talk freely. Why would they consider moving closer to the waterfall? Sure, they would have to build a new home and cart new supplies across the forest to do so, but it's moderate plot holes like this that make you think they could have used a line of dialogue to explain that.

Buzz Lightyear Freezing Plot Hole in Toy Story

This classic has its own plot holes. Namely, why did Buzz drop and freeze at the presence of Andy if he didn't think he was a toy? Sure, you could argue that any toy automatically freezes in the presence of a human. However, Buzz and Woody (as well as their friends) clearly don't freeze as they move about town. Heck, Woody even talks to Sid. So why did Buzz freeze when Andy walked into the room before he realized he was a toy?

Giant Eagles Coming to the Rescue Plot Hole in The Lord of the Rings: Return of the King

The entire Lord of the Rings saga hinges on the difficult cross-country journey that Frodo embarks on with various Fellowship peers. He's tasked with taking the One Ring to Mordor to throw it into the lava. Mission accomplished, Frodo and Sam are about to die until giant eagles summoned by Gandalf come to save them. Um, why didn't they just use those eagles to fly Frodo into Mordor in the first place? It would have saved literally thousands of lives. While the books may explain this, the movies don't.

Thousand-Some Police Officers Trapped Underground for Months Plot Hole in The Dark Knight Rises

It's one of the biggest plot holes in a movie full of plot holes. Supervillain Bane traps a thousand-plus police officers underground for months. How did they survive? And when they escape, how come they are clean-shaven with fully-pressed uniforms?

Old Steve Rogers in Avengers: Endgame

This is a plot hole that audiences just choose to forgive because it's such a cool character moment. Steve Rogers appears as an old man at the end of the film. It is revealed that during his time-traveling, he decided to go back and be with the love of his life, Peggy. It's a sweet and tender moment. And we love the fact that he finally got to be with her. However, how is he in the same timeline as the Avengers we grew to know that just went through years of conflict with Thanos and his minions?

How to Avoid Writing a Plot Hole

Screenwriters have no control over what happens to their script after they hand it over to the studio. So forget the many hands in the cookie jar during the development phase, the trials and tribulations of production, and the editing done in post-production.

But what can you do to avoid writing plot holes in your spec scripts?

Protect Your House of Cards

The final draft of a screenplay is a house of cards. And as is the case with any house of cards, when you remove one card, many will usually fall as a result.

Great screenplays build and build and build to something. And when you build upon elements as you try to reach a desired climax, each piece is not just important, but vital.

If in Pulp Fiction, Quentin Tarantino is tasked to eliminate the character of Jules, the ripple effect within the script would be disastrous. However, sometimes those types of choices need to be implemented.

Pulp Fiction (1994)

How you overcome this is by going back and witnessing each and every cause and effect.

  • If Jules isn't there, then it's just Vincent in the car.
  • And if it's just Vincent in the car, how are we able to keep the amazing dialogue about Royale with Cheese and other gems?
  • Do we have Vincent on a car phone talking to Marsellus?
  • Do we have Marsellus in the car with him as Vincent is dropping him off somewhere?
  • If we do that, what is the cause and effect? How does that interfere with Marsellus's timeline?

Editing your script isn't just about cutting and pasting. It's about protecting that house of cards by carefully going back and seeing the cause and effect of every choice you make, whether those elements will be big or small.

Read Previously Written Pages Before You Write

Reading previously written pages before your next writing session is perhaps the most vital element of ensuring that there are little to no plot holes in your script.

Pacing, tone, atmosphere, and character portrayal can change depending on your state of mind during each writing session. Reading what you've written before you continue writing is key to preventing pacing holes, tone holes, atmosphere holes, characterization holes, and, yes, all types of plot holes.

  • If you write ten pages on the first day of writing, on that second day be sure to read those ten pages before you write more.
  • When you have twenty pages before your next writing session, ready those twenty pages before you continue with ten more.
  • Continue this process before every single writing session you have.

When you do this, your mind will have each and every detail ever-present as you write on, thus you'll be less likely to miss out on those bigger or smaller elements within the story and character arcs, the action, the build-ups, and the eventual payoffs.

Read what you've written before you write and you'll always be on the same page with yourself to catch those plot holes.

Salt and Pepper Your Script

When you've reached that final draft, take the time to go through the whole thing from Page One to The End with your metaphorical salt and pepper shakers to season the story, plotting, and characters.

Find any and all opportunities to offer foreshadowing earlier in the script to set up moments later on. Foreshadowing can be the ultimate plot hole fix because you're well aware of the minor and major plot points as you do so, thus you'll be more apt to ensure that things are connected well.

Choose Your Requested Suspension of Disbelief Wisely

It's okay to ask the reader or audience to suspend their disbelief in exchange for entertainment. Logic shouldn't always be applied to film because film is fantasy. Even films based on true stories have to adhere to the fact that, in the end, there are only two hours (give or take) to tell a story that could amount to a lifetime in the real world. It's fantasy. And it's entertainment.

That said, a reader or audience will only give you, the screenwriter, so much leeway in that respect. If you don't offer any logic within your story, you'll lose them fast because that means the script doesn't have any stakes.

Set the Rules and Stick to Them

If you have stated that a character has a heart condition that prevents them from running at high speeds for a long duration of time, and then in the climax you have them chasing down the bad guy in an epic foot race, that's a plot hole.

In Lord of the Rings, if you have shown that a certain wizard character has the ability to conjure giant eagles to fly characters to safety and you fail to utilize such capabilities in the most drastic of times as a Hobbit struggles to climb to the top of a mountain to throw a dangerous ring into the fire, that's a plot hole. And even if fanboys have an explanation for why those eagles couldn't take on that task, you need to have at least some dialogue explaining such rules.

You, the screenwriter, are the Lord of the Story. Suspension of disbelief is fine, to a degree, as long as you showcase the rules of your universe and stick to them. When you do that early, the audience will have no choice but to accept the rules and go along for the ride. If you break them, you're going to lose them.

Keep It Simple, Screenwriter

KISS. The greatest stories are often told through the most simple of plots.

A giant shark is terrorizing an island community and a chief of police, fisherman, and marine biologist are tasked to stop it.

One of the greatest and most suspenseful films contains one of the most simple plots in cinema. The chief needs a boat and he needs an expert. He can't do it alone. That's all this story is, yet it captures us and takes us on an amazing journey. We didn't need to know where the shark came from and why it was wreaking havoc. It's a giant shark and it likes to eat. And that's bad for the community. That's it. Time to go shark hunting.

Over-complicating stories with multiple A plots, B plots, and C plots almost always leads to inevitable plot holes. It's unnecessary most of the time.

Keep it simple and you'll avoid the deep, dark depths of plot holes.


Ken Miyamoto has worked in the film industry for nearly two decades, most notably as a studio liaison for Sony Studios and then as a script reader and story analyst for Sony Pictures.

He has many studio meetings under his belt as a produced screenwriter, meeting with the likes of Sony, Dreamworks, Universal, Disney, and Warner Brothers, as well as many production and management companies. He has had a previous development deal with Lionsgate, as well as multiple writing assignments, including the produced miniseries BLACKOUT, starring Anne Heche, Sean Patrick Flanery, Billy Zane, James Brolin, Haylie Duff, Brian Bloom, Eric La Salle, and Bruce Boxleitner, the feature thriller HUNTER'S CREED, and many produced Lifetime thrillers. Follow Ken on Twitter @KenMovies and Instagram @KenMovies76.

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2023 ScreenCraft Animation Competition Semifinalists https://screencraft.org/blog/2023-screencraft-animation-competition-semifinalists/ Wed, 04 Oct 2023 17:00:00 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=54959 Listed below are the Semifinalists of the 2023 ScreenCraft Animation Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 1,000 submissions. Congratulations to the writers who...

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Listed below are the Semifinalists of the 2023 ScreenCraft Animation Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 1,000 submissions. Congratulations to the writers who have made it this far and thanks to all for submitting!

Stay tuned for the Finalist announcement on November 1st on our blog and on our Twitter, Facebook, and Instagram pages! And if you’d like to receive a notification when this contest re-opens for entries, you can subscribe for updates via Coverfly here.

Here are the Semifinalists:

Abraham Melissa Hope
Afterlife in the Sierra Nevada Hotel Samual Darlington
Athor Brian Streaty, Paul Rose
Barking Robert Ian Simpson
Barnabus O'Hooligan Allison Dressler Losq, Andrew Losq
Bigger the Better Ines Albert
Blinky Allan Roberts
Brian & Brains Nathaniel Moher
Carrier Pigeon Graham Nelson
Cat, Dawg and Dalton Genine Tillotson, Robert Tremblay
Coming Home Hadley Rose
Critical Aidan Kilpatrick
Damsel Dash Adrien Callahan
Darcy Delane :Pet Psychic Wendy Braff
Deductibles and Dragons Duncan Carr, Jake Gillespie
Exiles Mahonri Stewart
Fairy Lost Jennifer Wilton
Fixer and Law Sam Tracton
Floe Russ Eisenman, Paul Wood
Gauntlet Girl Brett Melnick, Levi Prewitt
Ghosted... Jackson Groom
Glory Glory Ethan Judelson
I'm sorry I missed you Ethan Rogers
Ill Technique G.B. Lem
Infinite - An Animated Odyssey Bruna Fachetti
Jenkins and Watts: Paranormal Attorneys At Law Michael Brennan
Kaltera Will Kisor, Gage Swanston
Kooky Spooky Marfa Andres J Rovira
Little Pawn Shop of Horrors Aidan Kilpatrick
Max'd Out Jesse Lucks
Medusa Tristan Bellawala
Meredith Sing! Camilo Angelo
Mokabi Hunter Charlotte Zielinski
Nazareth High Randy Steinlauf
New Earth Devon Sharma
Offspring Hannah Silverman
Picture It DJ Schaffer
Qubit Darren Moran
Ravenheart Sean Monahan, Scott Hennelly
Shine Catherine Gouge
Techies - Pilot - Plebeian Blues Kevin Minke, Jason Blalock
The Junior Detectives Sydney "Sydney-Gene" Pawlak
The Night Light Chronicles Will Neisen
The Talking Pelican Daniel Padbury
Todd Peters: Vampire Superhero Adam Pica
Tooson Christiane Granha-Self
Tooth Michael Lee
Verducci: The Museum on Mars Veru Narula, Daniel Kulhman
Wanted Duane Piedmont

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The Screenwriting Dos and Don'ts of Intellectual Property https://screencraft.org/blog/the-screenwriting-dos-and-donts-of-intellectual-property/ Thu, 28 Sep 2023 16:29:50 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=53332 Hollywood has been obsessed with intellectual property (IP) for decades. It offers executives and producers peace of mind when developing projects, knowing they have a...

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Hollywood has been obsessed with intellectual property (IP) for decades. It offers executives and producers peace of mind when developing projects, knowing they have a built-in audience that could generate ticket sales and viewership. In their minds, IP offers them:

  • Free Market Awareness: A pre-established fanbase guarantees instant market recognition.
  • Instant Project Validation: Book/video game/article adaptations have built-in credibility
  • Fanfare: Fans drum up a lot of buzz as they wait eagerly for these adaptations.

But what intellectual property, and what should (and shouldn't) screenwriters do with it?

The Screenwriting Dos and Don'ts of Intellectual Property

What Is Intellectual Property?

Intellectual property refers to creations of the mind that are legally protected. Examples of this are:

  • Inventions
  • Artistic works
  • Symbols
  • Names
  • Images
  • Designs
  • Trade secrets
  • Literary works (articles, music, lyrics, poems, novels, stage plays, teleplays and screenplays)

For writers, as soon as you create something, you own the IP rights. Registration only exists to help you prove such ownership in a court of law or binding arbitration procedures if there is a dispute between parties.

And if you want to adapt anyone else's IP, you're going to need to know the dos and don'ts of handling it.

The Screenwriting Dos and Don'ts of Intellectual Property

The Screenwriting Dos and Don'ts of Intellectual Property

DO Adapt Studio Franchise IP for Fun

There's nothing wrong with playing in your favorite movie franchise's sandbox, in fact, it's a great opportunity to experiment with established characters and worlds and learn the art of adaptation. If you ever get to the level of becoming a professional screenwriter, a majority of the paid jobs you'll get will be writing assignments that handle IP that studios, networks and producers own.

DON'T Attempt to Profit from Studio IP

While it's okay to adapt studio IP on your own for fun, understand that profiting from it and promoting it as yours is illegal. This includes writing it, producing it and then putting it on YouTube to generate revenue from ad views or clicks.

The Screenwriting Dos and Don'ts of Intellectual Property

DO Use Studio IP to Draw Attention to Your Talent

Let's face it, screenwriters and filmmakers need to do something to stand out and sometimes that means using studio franchise IP to get noticed.

In 2003, filmmaker Sandy Collora directed what is highly regarded as one of the best fan films ever made, Batman: Dead End, which garnered him near-legendary status among Comic-Con fans and even director Kevin Smith.

DON'T Pitch Your IP-Adapted Projects to Studios

You might have a great idea for a Star Wars, Harry Pottery or MCU movie, but unless you're an established screenwriter, it'll never be read. Studios and their teams of lawyers fear any lawsuits that may come their way. Even the frivolous ones. That is why it is policy to not accept or read any unsolicited emails, loglines, pitches, screenplays, or materials — especially those related to IP that they own.

The Screenwriting Dos and Donts of Intellectual Property

Avengers Endgame (2019)

DO Understand Fair Use

Limited fair use of IP without permission for purposes such as criticism, commentary, or parody is possible. However, fair use can be a complex legal issue, so consult legal counsel if you're unsure.

DON'T Assume Fair Use Applies

There is so much false information out there — especially in screenwriting forums and comment sections. To avoid any legal issues, don't use anyone else's IP.

DO Try to Find IP You Can Adapt

Make no mistake, attached IP can help your script. In most general meetings, IP is almost always brought up. Executives will ask if you have any IP-related projects — or they will have IP that they need to be adapted.

If you can nab the licensing or option the adaptation rights to comic books, novels, stage plays or any other IP, go for it. But you need to understand the limitations you'll be facing (see below).

The Screenwriting Dos and Donts of Intellectual Property

DON'T Pursue Unproven or High Profile IP

The old Hollywood development benchmark for a successful novel worth adapting is 50,000 copies sold (it's likely double that now). Anything under that probably isn't worth pitching.

Too many screenwriters believe that just having the rights to any novel means their project is more valid than others. The IP has to be successful. The only time an unproven novel is picked up for adaptation by studios or networks is when the author or subject is high-profile already.

The real secret is getting in on something early. However, it's difficult to ascertain what will hit and what won't. That will be the gamble you'll be facing when trying to find IP to adapt. Yes, it's an unfortunate Catch 22.

Read More: How to Adapt a Book for the Big Screen

The Screenwriting Dos and Donts of Intellectual Property

DO Require a Contract Before Adapting Anyone's IP

Whenever you partner with someone to adapt their IP, make sure you draft a contract that you both sign. Use contracts to clearly define the rights and obligations of all parties involved. Consult a lawyer or entertainment attorney to ensure your contracts are comprehensive and protective.

DON'T Assume the Contract Will Apply to Studio or Network Deals

Just because you and an IP owner agreed on profit splits doesn't mean that agreement will apply when studios and networks are ready to make a deal.

If you agree to adapt a novel for an author and also agree to share the profits from the sale of the script, you need to understand that things can go awry for you quickly when studios and networks become involved. They could offer a side deal with the author if you haven't been given the sole rights to adapt their work. If the contract you drafted was only for the sale of the script you wrote, the studio or network could easily buy the adaptation rights from them and hire another screenwriter.

The Screenwriting Dos and Donts of Intellectual Property

DO Consider Using Open IP Available in the Public Domain

The Public Domain encompasses properties that are accessible for unrestricted utilization by anyone. This accessibility arises from various factors such as the expiration of copyright, the loss of copyright due to loopholes or errors, the death of the copyright owner, or the failure of the copyright owner to file for rights or extensions thereof.

What's great about the Public Domain is that you can find iconic characters and stories and use them within your own original interpretations. Or you can adapt them outright. These are all available in the Public Domain to adapt:

  • Dracula
  • Frankenstein's Monster
  • The Phantom of the Opera
  • King Arthur
  • Robin Hood
  • Sherlock Holmes
  • The Wizard of Oz
  • Tarzan
  • Alice in Wonderland
  • Peter Pan

Read More: The Hottest Public Domain Properties for Screenwriters

DON'T Use What Studios and Networks Have Already Done with Public Domain Properties

It is crucial for writers to exercise caution and restrict their focus solely to the material present in the books. Any inclusion or mention of characters and visuals from the classic film or any other subsequent adaptations could potentially lead to copyright and trademark infringement liabilities.

Read More: 101 Public Domain Story Prompts

The Screenwriting Dos and Don'ts of Intellectual Property

DO Use Intellectual Property as Inspiration for Your Original Work

Anyone who says they don't take inspiration from successful movies, franchises, and TV shows is lying. Directors, producers, and screenwriters are inspired by the work that came before them. Studios and networks are always trying to take what's been successful and create their own version of that to jump on the bandwagon.

You can use intellectual property as inspiration for your original screenplays. And even when screenwriters and filmmakers aren't openly using other cinematic stories as inspiration, the influence of cinema is inescapable.

DON'T Just Change the Character Names and Settings to Make the IP Yours

This is a common fear of novice and ill-informed screenwriters when sending their scripts to development executives and producers — that Hollywood will just change the character names and settings to steal your work. That's not going to happen.

On the flip side, don't attempt to do the same thing with someone else's IP. It's not only wrong ethically, but it's illegal.


Ken Miyamoto has worked in the film industry for nearly two decades, most notably as a studio liaison for Sony Studios and then as a script reader and story analyst for Sony Pictures.

He has many studio meetings under his belt as a produced screenwriter, meeting with the likes of Sony, Dreamworks, Universal, Disney, Warner Brothers, as well as many production and management companies. He has had a previous development deal with Lionsgate, as well as multiple writing assignments, including the produced miniseries Blackout, starring Anne Heche, Sean Patrick Flanery, Billy Zane, James Brolin, Haylie Duff, Brian Bloom, Eric La Salle, and Bruce Boxleitner, the feature thriller Hunter’s Creed, and many Lifetime thrillers. Follow Ken on Twitter @KenMovies


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Fall 2023 ScreenCraft Film Fund Grant Recipients https://screencraft.org/blog/fall-2023-screencraft-film-fund-grant-recipients/ Wed, 27 Sep 2023 17:00:32 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=54867 We are thrilled to announce the Grant Recipients of the Fall 2023 ScreenCraft Film Fund. These exceptional projects were selected from almost 1,100 submissions and will...

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We are thrilled to announce the Grant Recipients of the Fall 2023 ScreenCraft Film Fund. These exceptional projects were selected from almost 1,100 submissions and will receive grant assistance and creative development support from the ScreenCraft team to help these projects advance through the filmmaking process.

The Spring 2024 Film Fund is now open for submissions. If you’d like to receive additional notifications for this contest you can subscribe for updates via Coverfly here.

Grant Recipient Winners:

Coal Country is a feature documentary from directors Jessica Blank and Erik Jensen and producer Audrey Rosenberg. In southern West Virginia, a community devastated by the deadliest U.S. mining disaster of the 21st century strives towards a brighter, more sustainable future in this emotionally-raw documentary that complicates mainstream perceptions of life and politics in rural America.

El Cartel Cubano is a feature documentary from Adrienne Hall. It tells the story of the complex and beautiful Caribbean island of Cuba, reflected through 60+ years of its post-revolution cinema, posters, and the artists behind these creations. As the Cuban people continue to endure political and social upheaval, local artists continue to fight for freedom of expression. El Cartel Cubano explores how these posters (carteles), a beloved and enduring form of expression and activism, continue to be visible in the daily lives of Cubans and serve as a true reflection of Cuba.

The (Mis)education of Black Children is a live-action feature film from Moreetsi Gabang. Over the course of a single day in a village in Botswana, a little boy’s relationship with his domestic helper is threatened, a dog’s life is endangered, and the barren wife of a pastor discovers her albino niece is missing. A look at a defining moment in the lives of three Batswana who learn the values of compassion, respect and responsibility.

Timetracker is a feature documentary from Peter Quandt that follows Jack Powers, a brilliant 61-year-old man recently released from a 33-year federal prison stay, 22 of which were spent in extreme solitary confinement. The film accompanies Jack as he navigates reentry and travels the American West in a rehabbed RV, in search of a better life and a sense of peace with his past.

Congratulations to our grant recipients and finalists, and thank you to everyone who submitted; we read a number of remarkable projects. View the second rounders, semifinalists and finalists by clicking the corresponding link.


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2023 ScreenCraft Action & Adventure Screenplay Competition Finalists https://screencraft.org/blog/2023-screencraft-action-adventure-screenplay-competition-finalists/ Wed, 27 Sep 2023 17:00:22 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=54881 Listed below are the Finalists of the 2023 ScreenCraft Action & Adventure Screenplay Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 700 submissions. Congratulations to...

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Listed below are the Finalists of the 2023 ScreenCraft Action & Adventure Screenplay Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 700 submissions. Congratulations to the writers who have made it this far and thanks to all for submitting!

Stay tuned for the Winner announcement on October 18th on our blog and on our Twitter, Facebook, and Instagram pages! And if you’d like to receive a notification when this contest re-opens for entries, you can subscribe for updates via Coverfly here.

Here are the Finalists:

Blitzkrieg Follies Devin Toohey, Brian Whitaker
Champ Joel Jensen
Detroit Run Odin Ozdil
Día de las Carpas Marina Kato
East Jesus Duane Graves
Eyes of Fate Catherine Wright
Heartrace Will Bermender
His Horse is Crazy Sven Anarki
How The Brooks Saved Christmas Parker Starnes
Into the West Matthew Dixon
Kill School Katrina Skender
Lure Tom Castillo
Mokabi Hunter Charlotte Zielinski
The 7 Steve Ronaldson
The Devil, a Rebel, a Fool Clay Fusco
Tow Truck Jud Cremata

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Fall 2023 ScreenCraft Virtual Pitch Semifinalists https://screencraft.org/blog/fall-2023-screencraft-virtual-pitch-semifinalists/ Wed, 20 Sep 2023 17:00:54 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=54813 Listed below are the Semifinalists of the Fall 2023 ScreenCraft Virtual Pitch. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 700 submissions. Congratulations to the writers...

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Listed below are the Semifinalists of the Fall 2023 ScreenCraft Virtual Pitch. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 700 submissions. Congratulations to the writers who have made it this far and thanks to all for submitting!

Stay tuned for the Finalist announcement on October 18th on our blog and on our Twitter, Facebook, and Instagram pages! And if you’d like to receive a notification when this contest re-opens for entries, you can subscribe for updates via Coverfly here.

Here are the Semifinalists:

"Johnstown" Raymond Leech
"Offstage" George Hamaty
28 Steve Fisher
A Few Boards The Ben Jones Story Wiley Jones
Afterwards Leonid Shmelkov, Anna Kadykova
Aisles Jonathan Di Rocco
All the Gallant Men Ken Gire
Amanda Breadbrenner Aaron Carter
Amateurs Andrew Rickel
América Jonze: A streaming series pitch Zareh Artinian
Ascension Darren Moran
Bacél Bonito and The Big Apple Zack Fernández
Be-Mused Joey Day Hargrove
Before We Were Katelyn Henslin
Blood and Ice Michael Di Raimondo
Body Count Rory Applin, George Nelson
Bridge of Sighs Frederick Rauschenbach
Caregiver Zach Drummer
Chas & Sid Lyric Nelson
Child(less) Thea Gagliardi
Chimera Ross Denyer
Code Breakers Kevin Gibson
Code Death Olga Gabris
Crowley Ed Purchla
Darkest Before the Dawn William Parsons
De-Code Switch April Kimble
Deadline William Hyland
Divine Retribution Ola Nwadiuko
Dogcatchers Darren Moran
Doing Good Darren Moran
Dylan P.I. susan lerner
Endora FJ Roebuck
First Resort Spencer Paez
For The Good of Mankind Harvey Waters Jr
Forbidden in the City (TV Series) Michelle Dong
Franken-Fried Alien Pitch Juliet Mace
Free Swing Lindsay Stidham
Freedom Island Thomas Williams
Frida does Flamenco eva midgley
Galapagos Jordan Mitchell
Gasp! Donovan Erskine
Ghosts of Winter Antoinette Dietkus
Girl Shaped Ghost Graeme Morrice
Going Batty Maya Florin
Golems Steve Fisher
Government Exorcists: The Department of Infernal Affairs Malt Schlitzmann
Group B Paul Thomas
Honeymoon Ali Mesgaran
How To Survive A Narcissist Steffany Sommers
Hype High Julie Harrison-Harney
I Won't Let You Kill Me — A Love Story Leslie Singer, Mara Leveritt, Richard Zuckerberg
I'm Not Dead, I'm Dreaming Peter Petralia
If Pens Could Speak Lester Scott
Incident Shane Mountain
Isabela's Revolution Farrah Pereira
Jobber Brock Cohen
Koolah chandni srivastava
Kurrachee Basir Ahmed
Liam's List Kevin Smithers
Line of Scrimmage Gary Gurner
Longfield Brandon Pantry-Melsom
Love Unveiled Evie Joy
Loverboy James Barnes
Luca Michelle Harris
Madonna - Before Cinderella Amarilis Pereira
Martha Lisa Laine
Meet Gilda Rae Hilary Abraham
Megan's Law Nick Cariddo
My God Parents Marine Mondelot
My Mother Es Mi Madre Kathleen Oneill
Night Witches Phae Amara, Kathryn Wright
No Fear Samantha Higgins
No Return To Myer's Island: Pitch Isabelle Byrne
Nothing But Glory Pitch Onil Lad
M. Hildbrand
One More Round Ethan Gomes
Out of This World Jeremy Pick
Pen Pal Jamie Rose
Pitch: Camouflage and Lipstick Lawrence Daly
Redline Scott Saffran
Rejuvenation - Pitch Rudi O'Meara
Relatable Arjuna Mahenthiran
Rival Sumitra Rajagopalan
Rose Episode Pitch Vanessa Le
Rx F J Roebuck
Sanity Road (Virtual Pitch 350 words) Eric Kelso
Santo Clos Al Lopez
Seeing Stars Steve Budd
Shackled Bec MacIntyre
Simon Lakena Hinnant
Single Person (pitch) Matt Foss
Snow Job Karla Moriarty, Wilbur Rice, Michael Bacon
So Much Love Malwina Grochowska
Soul Camp Christie Quarton
Stealing Home For The Holidays Wendy Young
Strike Paper Jason Gallagher
Study Abroad Mary Chasen
Sturgeon General Molly Bandt, Celia Ramsey
Sugar Kerri Quinn
Superlame Darren Moran
Teacher Brian Rohrig
The Age of Desire - Pitch - 350 words Suzanne Griffin
The Bridal Posse Scott Cox
The Bubble Jarod Backens
The Butcher's Daughter Ashley Scarbro, Travis Scarbro
The CCO Loyall Wilson
The Chronocar Steve Bellinger
The King's Legionnaire Matthew Skeate
The Mind Palace Hassan Nadeem
The Old G.O.A.T. Arley Ryder
The Psychiatrist Hailey Coleman
The Refs Brendan Lynch
The Sangeet Arjuna Mahenthiran
The Sherlock Holem Boys Judnel Antoine
The Show Must Go On Stefano Anania
The Snow Children (Pitch) Michael Basha
The Streamer Cam Parkes
The Trial of Aeneas Amelia McNamara
The Waitresses Cindi Marshall Oakey
The Woman at the Lake Pitch Chris Inekhomon
There’s So Much More to Fishing Than Catching Fish Roger Corea
Three Lakes Barbara Gilmore
Timberland C. Shane Davis
Tink Ashley MacPherson
Tooled Katie Ward
Townie Suemedha Sood
Trophy Bass Roy Thomasson
Troy Story Deborah Gero
Under Pressure Steven T. Smith
Ungifted Giles Brown
Unschooled Bronwyn Isaac
Walter Amanda Hanson
War Crimes Alexander Rosenstein
We are coming Jesse Pridham
When We Were Mermaids Amy Bizzarri
Where the hell is Lubbock? Yvonne Racz
Wild Willy Jeroen van der Zee
Wiley Jones In Bloody Kansas Wiley Jones
Women Who Lay Eggs and The Men Who Hatch Them Dalila Bailey, Gerardo Garcia
You Dirty Rat Robert Bartolome
Zitkala-Sa Robert Jackson

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Using Empathy to Create a Better Villain https://screencraft.org/blog/using-empathy-to-create-a-better-villain/ Wed, 13 Sep 2023 18:23:38 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=53318 There's nothing better than a good villain — except when audiences are introduced to a great one. But what separates the good from the great?...

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There's nothing better than a good villain — except when audiences are introduced to a great one. But what separates the good from the great? And what can screenwriters do to take their villain to that next level of greatness? It's actually quite simple. With that in mind, here we share five ways you can inject your villain with a little more oomph, using a cinematic tactic called empathy.

Let's define empathy before we move on to the five ways you can use it to create better villains.

How to Make Character Deaths More Memorable

What Is Empathy in Screenwriting?

Empathy can be best defined as the act of comprehending, acknowledging and sensitively relating to the emotions, thoughts and encounters of another. In movies and TV shows, audiences experience these character elements vicariously. The intention is for readers and audience members to immerse themselves in your characters' lives. That is exactly the kind of cinematic experience that captivates most people.

Empathy Doesn't Require a Character to Be Likeable

Old screenwriting books emphasize the necessity for protagonists to possess an inherent likability. However, in contemporary cinema and television platforms, this guideline has progressively blurred. Flawed characters and antiheroes have become central protagonists in movies and television.

Using Empathy to Create a Better Villain

The Last of Us (2023-)

Television series such as The Sopranos, Breaking Bad, The Last of Us, Game of Thrones, Yellowstone and others have excelled in portraying characters who may not always be endearing. Yet we still manage to develop empathy towards them due to their distinctive character traits.

Read More: Antihero with a Heart: Analyzing Joel from 'The Last of Us'

Some of our greatest cinematic icons have been antiheroes that blurred the lines of protagonist versus villain. Michael Corleone in The Godfather is perhaps the greatest example.

  • He becomes a murderer.
  • He orders the death of others.
  • He shuns his wife.

Yet we still look upon him as someone to root for. Why? Empathy.

Using Empathy to Create a Better Villain

The Godfather (1972)

5 Ways to Create Empathy for Your Villains

1. Inject Tragedy Into Their Lives

When we see any type of character dealing with any type of loss, empathy is created — even in villains. Tragic backstories can explain why they have turned into the villain they now are.

  • Perhaps they've lost a loved one, which has triggered their reactive plans against the hero and the world they protect.
  • Maybe they have been wronged or wrongly prosecuted.
  • What if they are avenging someone?

When we see the humanity in villains dealing with past tragedies, we empathize with them and feel as if the lines between right and wrong, light and dark, and good and evil are blurred. This creates a more cathartic feeling as we walk out of the theater questioning whether or not the villain was in the right or wrong — or at least it's understandable why they did what they did.

Using Empathy to Create a Better Villain

Breaking Bad (2008-2013)

2. Coping with Illness, Addiction and Other Internal or External Challenges

Whether it's a battle against cancer, the burden of shame, the weight of guilt, the grip of depression, the grip of anxiety, the complexities of schizophrenia or the clutches of addiction, when you give your villain an internal or external struggle, the audience can't help but feel empathy for them, even if they are a villain.

If Breaking Bad had solely revolved around a man's decision to embark on a life of crime for monetary gain, he could have been a mere villain or antihero. However, because he grappled with cancer and undertook those actions for the sake of his family, the audience experienced a heightened sense of empathy. While he was technically an antihero and lead protagonist to root for in the series, the lesson learned is that physical and mental challenges can inject empathy into a villain's story that makes them more memorable in the end.

Using Empathy to Create a Better Villain

Star Wars: Episode III – Revenge of the Sith (2005)

3. Make Them Fallen Heroes

If a villain was once good (Anakin Skywalker/Darth Vader), and that is present within the story, we feel empathy for them because they've fallen from glory — and we want them to find their way back. And the more we see them struggle to choose right from wrong, the more we'll be emotionally affected by whatever choices they make.

4. Give Them Shades of Humanity

Sometimes a villain just needs to be a villain. We get it.

However, you still can find ways to showcase their humanity. It could be something as simple as having a love for a pet, showing loyalty to their minions or underlings, or creating a gesture they make that goes against their otherwise evil intentions.

Even Frankenstein's Monster showcased true empathy when he interacted with the little girl.

It doesn't matter if their humanity is forever lost or hopeless to prevail. It just needs to be present now and then to add a little flavor and depth to their villainy.

5. Have Them Redeem Themselves

Sure, a villain can go out with a bang — void of any redeeming moment before their demise, but redemption by the end of their character arc leaves the audience in an empathetic state that makes the villain even more memorable by the end of the story.

  • Showcase a change of heart.
  • Have them understand what they did was wrong.
  • Make them sacrifice themselves for the greater good.

And if you don't want them to be that redeemed, find creative ways to make their perspective understood.

The villain in Black Panther, Killmonger, seeks to overthrow the Wakandan throne. And he's willing to kill to do so. However, his tragic past and desire to rectify historical injustices provide a nuanced perspective. His final actions reflect a selfless act that challenges T'Challa's approach, leading to a degree of redemption.

Case Studies: AFI's Top Five Villains of All Time

The American Film Institute created a list of fifty of the greatest movie villains of all time. To prove our point about the importance of empathy when it comes to creating better villains, let's find the ways that we can empathize with AFI's top five villains.

1. Hannibal Lecter (The Silence of the Lambs)

Despite his gruesome nature, Hannibal Lecter's exceptional intelligence and refined tastes can captivate audiences. His ability to understand and manipulate others, coupled with his tragic past, creates a complex character that elicits a strange fascination and empathy. We also empathize with his protectiveness of Clarice. When he lets her go, we see some of the humanity left in him.

2. Norman Bates (Psycho)

Norman Bates is driven by a severe psychological disorder. He struggles with his fractured identity. Audiences can empathize with his internal battles and the torment caused by his domineering mother figure. Because of this, we can view him as a tragic figure caught in a web of mental anguish.

3. Darth Vader (Star Wars)

Darth Vader, formerly Anakin Skywalker, undergoes a tragic transformation from a gifted Jedi Knight to a powerful Sith Lord. His internal conflict, stemming from the loss of loved ones and manipulation by Emperor Palpatine, evokes empathy as audiences witness his struggle between the light and dark sides of the Force. Sure, in the first Star Wars, he's a less sympathetic presence. But as his arc through the original trilogy concludes, we feel empathy for him by the end. He sacrifices himself for his son. And when we watch the prequels, we learn more about the Anakin side of him as we watch the tragic downfall of his character as he succumbs to the Dark Side of the Force. But it's his final moments in Return of the Jedi that make us empathize with him most.

4. The Wicked Witch of the West (The Wizard of Oz)

She is initially portrayed as a malevolent force. However, the Wicked Witch of the West can be represented as a marginalized and misunderstood character. Her quest for revenge against those she perceives as oppressors can be seen as a response to her mistreatment. Sure, it's a stretch. But when you look at things from her perspective (her sister was killed by Dorothy), you can find empathetic moments if you're creative enough.

5. Nurse Ratched (One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest)

Nurse Ratched embodies the oppressive authority figure within a mental institution. While her strict demeanor and abuse of power make her more of an antagonist than a villain, understanding the pressures she faces within the system may generate empathy for the difficult choices she makes, even if they are detrimental to the patients.

All of these perceived villains have empathetic qualities that make them better than mere evildoers. Now, let's explore ways screenwriters can create more empathy for the villains they conjure.

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Creating empathy for villains adds more depth to your stories and the characterizations within. Sometimes you can use a lot of empathy for particular stories. Other times all you need is just a little.

But if you're looking for ways to create better and more memorable villains, empathy is the way to go.

Read More: 12 Villains That Every Screenwriter Should Study


Ken Miyamoto has worked in the film industry for nearly two decades, most notably as a studio liaison for Sony Studios and then as a script reader and story analyst for Sony Pictures.

He has many studio meetings under his belt as a produced screenwriter, meeting with the likes of Sony, Dreamworks, Universal, Disney, and Warner Brothers, as well as many production and management companies. He has had a previous development deal with Lionsgate, as well as multiple writing assignments, including the produced miniseries BLACKOUT, starring Anne Heche, Sean Patrick Flanery, Billy Zane, James Brolin, Haylie Duff, Brian Bloom, Eric La Salle, and Bruce Boxleitner, the feature thriller HUNTER'S CREED, and many produced Lifetime thrillers. Follow Ken on Twitter @KenMovies and Instagram @KenMovies76.


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2023 ScreenCraft Feature Competition Finalists https://screencraft.org/blog/2023-screencraft-feature-competition-finalists/ Wed, 13 Sep 2023 17:00:10 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=54221 Listed below are the Finalists of the 2023 ScreenCraft Feature Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 2,000 submissions. Congratulations to the writers who...

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Listed below are the Finalists of the 2023 ScreenCraft Feature Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 2,000 submissions. Congratulations to the writers who have made it this far and thanks to all for submitting!

Stay tuned for the Winner announcement on October 11th on our blog and on our Twitter, Facebook, and Instagram pages! And if you’d like to receive a notification when this contest re-opens for entries, you can subscribe for updates via Coverfly here.

Here are the Finalists:

Altered Zach Bandler
Any Other World Ben Pickles
By the Sea Vanita Flanagan
Eastern Son Y.S. Kim
Electric Road M. K. Ching
How Not To Write a Romance Novel Suzy Stein, Fernando Perez
Internal Security Stefan Alexander
Inward Jolan Bastien
Mother Mehreen Anna Khan
One-Eyed King Joe Bonito
Other People Jordan Prosser
Saturn Return Mallory Sparks
Seasick Sailor Torre Catalano, Devon Bostick
Sovereign Citizen Trent Johnson
The Cockfighter Andrew Case
The Green House Zach Grossman
The Refugee Ibrahim Renno, Jennifer Black
Wrightsborough Mahonri Stewart

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What is the Best Screenwriting Education? https://screencraft.org/blog/what-is-the-best-screenwriting-education/ Wed, 06 Sep 2023 18:28:51 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=53153 Budding screenwriters can learn the art, craft and business of screenwriting in many ways. The celebrated professionals with Oscars and box office hits have come...

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Budding screenwriters can learn the art, craft and business of screenwriting in many ways. The celebrated professionals with Oscars and box office hits have come from many walks of life when it comes to how they got their screenwriting education.

Some attended film school (George Lucas, Francis Ford Coppola). Others created their own film school by watching and studying movies (Quentin Tarantino).

Whether you get your knowledge from film school, studying movie catalogs, reading screenwriting books, taking online courses or diving into screenwriting software to conjure scenes, there's a wealth of knowledge from many different places. And even the most successful professionals will tell you that screenwriting education never ends. You're always adapting and evolving as a screenwriter.

With that in mind, here we peel back the layers of screenwriting education by ranking the top five ways to learn how to write screenplays. We'll delve into the strengths and weaknesses of each, starting from what we feel is the overall least effective to the most effective of the five.

A Complete Guide to the Best Film Schools in the U.S.

Top Five Screenwriting Education Options Ranked

5. Film School

We're not knocking education here. If you can attend a university — film school or not — we highly recommend it. When it comes to film school, it's ranked the least effective because it depends on where you go.

According to The Hollywood Reporter, the top five film schools are:

  1. American Film Institute
  2. New York University — Tisch School of Arts
  3. University of Southern California — Los Angeles (USC)
  4. Chapman University
  5. Cal Arts

Read More: A Complete Guide to the Best Film Schools in the U.S.

But not everybody can afford to go to film school — or make the move to different cities and states to attend. The benefit of going to one of the best is that you're usually learning from seasoned professionals. Most other film schools — or media programs — are limited in screenwriting mentors with industry experience. While instructors from those schools may have knowledge to share, you can learn a lot more from other resources.

And there is no screenwriting bachelor's degree. Film schools will focus more on the filmmaking aspects of the industry, with screenwriting as one of the classes required for a film school degree or degree in media.

The true benefit of film school is attending the options with the most connections with the Film/TV industry (AFI, USC, CAL ARTS, UCLA). You can utilize those mentor and peer connections you make to expand your industry network post-graduation.

Read More: Should Screenwriters Go to Film School?

What is the Best Screenwriting Education

4. Online Courses and Mentorship Programs

Just a notch above film school lies a much more affordable option — online courses and mentorship programs. These types of online options are usually offered by individuals who have had some industry experience, be it as professional screenwriters, former Hollywood executives, or former industry script readers and story analysts.

You're getting pretty much the same advice and instruction you would be receiving from lower-tier film school or media programs, but for a fraction of the price.

The benefits are that you'll be guided through the basic industry guidelines and expectations regarding story development, screenplay format, structure, characterization, dialogue, and marketing. These basics are all that you need to begin your screenwriting journey.

With mentorship programs, you'll also benefit from having one-on-one access to mentors who can help guide you through the learning process.

We rank online courses and mentorship programs above film school for easier access when it comes to the financial and geographical hurdles of attending film school. Again, the benefits outweigh the easier access and more affordable online options if you can attend the top programs with the most industry connections. But if you can't, you can get the same — if not better — screenwriting education than lower-tier film school or media programs.

What is the Best Screenwriting Education

3. Screenwriting Books

Screenwriting books can be an excellent way for screenwriters to search for industry knowledge, wisdom, perspective, philosophy, experience, tips, and instruction.

  • You can learn the basics from format to structure in books like The Screenwriter's Bible.
  • You can dive deeper into story analysis with Robert McKee's Story.
  • You can apply or learn from theoretical formulas like those found in Save the Cat!
  • You can seek wisdom from mythological structure in Chris Vogler's The Writer's Journey.
  • You can gain behind-the-scenes knowledge from successful blockbuster screenwriters in Writing Movies for Profit.

There are so many screenwriting books packed with knowledge, experience and instruction. For some professional screenwriters, the best film school experience was reading screenwriting books in the Barnes and Noble Film/TV aisle.

Yes, you need to pick and choose wisely. But you always get a wide variety of options that you can cherry-pick from as you develop your own style and philosophy.

Screenwriting books are obviously more affordable and available to screenwriters compared to film school, online classes, and mentorship programs. And the best ones are usually written by industry professionals with a background in screenwriting, studio development, and studio coverage.

Read More: The Best Screenwriting Books for Screenwriters

What is the Best Screenwriting Education

2. Becoming a Script Reader

Beyond learning the basics of format, structure, story, and characterization, there's no better screenwriting education — beyond actually doing it (see below) — than becoming a script reader.

A script reader is someone who is tasked with reading and evaluating screenplay submissions. In short, they offer script notes.

  • Interns and assistants for production companies, agencies, and management companies.
  • Professional script readers and story analysts for studios, networks, and streamers.
  • Screenplay contest, competition, and fellowships readers and judges.

As a script reader, you'll be asked to read multiple submissions and write script coverage that ascertains whether or not a script should advance to the next competition round or higher-tier development decision-makers.

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Why is this position the best overall screenwriting education? Because you're reading examples of the best screenwriting out there, as well as the worst.

  • 95% of the scripts that script readers read are horrible — or just not ready. You will quickly start to see the red flags and glaring mistakes made by scripts like these.
  • 4% of the scripts read by readers are average. As a screenwriter, you can use this knowledge to understand the difference between an average script and one that is good enough to get purchased and produced.
  • 1% (usually less than) of the script being read are fantastic, for any number of reasons. They are few and far between, but when you find them, you'll truly see what kind of script goes the distance.

The educational aspect of being a script reader is one of the greatest hidden treasures in the industry. Reading multiple scripts each week — the amazing, the average and the bad — will help you master screenwriting format, structure, dialogue, prose, theory, genre dynamics, etc. You'll be many steps ahead of the pack.

Read More: How to Become a Hollywood Script Reader

1. Learn By Writing Scripts

Notice how we didn't use the singular. You don't learn screenwriting by writing a single script. In fact, your first script is always your worst. You learn by writing multiple scripts and learning from both your triumphs and failures.

What is the Best Screenwriting Education

Most successful screenwriters write multiple scripts before they write the marque script that got them representation, a sale, an assignment, or a produced project. And you need to have a stack of amazing screenplays to truly draw decision-makers' attention, primarily because the first thing you're asked after that first general meeting is, "What else do you have?"

Reading and evaluating the screenplays of others is truly the best screenwriting education you can receive — before (or while) you start writing multiple scripts of your own.

  • When you get feedback from mentors and peers, you'll learn how to take feedback and notes.
  • As you later begin to submit to contests, competitions, and fellowships to test the waters, you'll hopefully opt to pay extra for the script coverage they offer. And then learn from the notes they give and your eventual placements.
  • When you market and query production companies, managers, and development executives and get them to read your scripts, you can gauge what scripts are making an impact and what scripts aren't.
  • As you begin to network and submit your scripts to various contacts you've made, you'll hopefully get feedback and be able to gauge responses.

But none of this happens until you've written multiple screenplays. You learn most by writing, failing, writing again, improving, failing, writing again, etc.

  • Don't take six months to a year or more to write a screenplay.
  • Try to write under professional deadlines (2-3 months) to allow more time to move on to other scripts.
  • Learn how to move on to the next script as quickly as possible while also writing excellent material in the process.

You'll learn the most from your triumphs and your failures. Ultimately, that is the best screenwriting education you'll ever receive. And know that professionals making a living are still learning with every single screenplay they write.


Ken Miyamoto has worked in the film industry for nearly two decades, most notably as a studio liaison for Sony Studios and then as a script reader and story analyst for Sony Pictures.

He has many studio meetings under his belt as a produced screenwriter, meeting with the likes of Sony, Dreamworks, Universal, Disney, and Warner Brothers, as well as many production and management companies. He has had a previous development deal with Lionsgate, as well as multiple writing assignments, including the produced miniseries BLACKOUT, starring Anne Heche, Sean Patrick Flanery, Billy Zane, James Brolin, Haylie Duff, Brian Bloom, Eric La Salle, and Bruce Boxleitner, the feature thriller HUNTER'S CREED, and many produced Lifetime thrillers. Follow Ken on Twitter @KenMovies and Instagram @KenMovies76.


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Fall 2023 ScreenCraft Film Fund Finalists https://screencraft.org/blog/fall-2023-screencraft-film-fund-finalists/ Wed, 06 Sep 2023 17:00:20 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=54150 Listed below are the Finalists of the Fall 2023 ScreenCraft Film Fund. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 1,100 submissions. Congratulations to the writers...

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Listed below are the Finalists of the Fall 2023 ScreenCraft Film Fund. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 1,100 submissions. Congratulations to the writers who have made it this far and thanks to all for submitting!

Stay tuned for the Grant Recipient announcement on September 27th on our blog and on our Twitter, Facebook, and Instagram pages! And if you’d like to receive a notification when this contest re-opens for entries, you can subscribe for updates via Coverfly here.

Here are the Finalists:

Ada - My Mother The Architect Yael Melamede
Appetite (working title) Kevin Longa
Bella Noche Antonina Kerguelen
Black Snow Alina Simone
Bumblebees Can't Fly Andrew Jonathan Smith, Abraham Kleinman
Coal Country Jessica Blank, Eric Jensen, Audrey Rosenberg
Don't be late, Myra Afia Nathaniel
El Cartel Cubano Adrienne Hall
How to Sue the Klan John Beder
Is Gay Marriage Next? Emily Clark
M Calvin Nemeth
One More from the Road William Reilly
Sons of The River Katyayani Kumar
THE (Mis)Education of Black Children Moreetsi Gabang
The Collins Film Brennan Huizinga
Timetracker Peter Quandt
Tokeru (Melting) Yuki Soga
Westhampton Christian Nilsson
Who Killed Alex Odeh? William Youmans
Winsome Justin Lerner

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2023 ScreenCraft Action & Adventure Screenplay Competition Semifinalists https://screencraft.org/blog/2023-screencraft-action-adventure-screenplay-competition-semifinalists/ Wed, 06 Sep 2023 17:00:12 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=54149 Listed below are the Semifinalists of the 2023 ScreenCraft Action & Adventure Screenplay Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 700 submissions. Congratulations to...

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Listed below are the Semifinalists of the 2023 ScreenCraft Action & Adventure Screenplay Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 700 submissions. Congratulations to the writers who have made it this far and thanks to all for submitting!

Stay tuned for the Finalist announcement on September 27th on our blog and on our Twitter, Facebook, and Instagram pages! And if you’d like to receive a notification when this contest re-opens for entries, you can subscribe for updates via Coverfly here.

Here are the Semifinalists:

All That Is Seen and Unseen Laura Becker
Blackstone Jess and the Island of the Warshadows Michael Hahn
Blitzkrieg Follies Devin Toohey, Brian Whitaker
Blood Trigger Ron Podell
Champ Joel Jensen
Contained Jennifer Wilton
Detroit Run Odin Ozdil
Día de las Carpas Marina Kato
East Jesus Duane Graves
Eyes of Fate Catherine Wright
Fright Masks Stephen Polakiewicz
Ghost Mamba Michael Dzurak
Heartrace Will Bermender
His Horse is Crazy Sven Anarki
How The Brooks Saved Christmas Parker Starnes
In Vain Jake Nordby
Into the West Matthew Dixon
Kill School Katrina Skender
Lost Souls Jeremiah Granden
Lure Tom Castillo
Magnitude Douglas Charles Macleod
Mokabi Hunter Charlotte Zielinski
Phoenix Lee Lawson
Reckoning Road Joshua Weeks
Stray Dog Caleb Ellis
Superlame Darren Moran
The 7 Steve Ronaldson
The Book of Raquel Olga Holtz
The Devil, a Rebel, a Fool Clay Fusco
The Houdinis Ron Mondz
The Last Travelers Darrell McGregor
The Paleontologist Ross Peacock
The Runner Debra Equassance
Tow Truck Jud Cremata
Volantino Russ Eisenman
Wasteland Britannia Aaron Hector

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How to Make Character Deaths More Memorable https://screencraft.org/blog/how-to-make-character-deaths-more-memorable/ Thu, 31 Aug 2023 18:18:44 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=53133 Killing a character off in your feature script or episodic series is an easy way to create empathy and inject some much-needed catharsis into your...

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Killing a character off in your feature script or episodic series is an easy way to create empathy and inject some much-needed catharsis into your screenplay. It can also help raise the stakes. When one character dies, others need to react. Plot points need to move forward and the narrative must tie up loose ends. This creates good drama and often leads to some very delicious twists and turns.

Read More: 10 Reasons to Consider Killing Your Main Character

But you want to avoid killing a character just for the shock value. That's not enough. And the audience will resent you for it. Character deaths in movies and television need to mean something because if we don't care if they died or not, it is a waste of prime screenplay real estate — and a waste of the audience's time and investment.

With that in mind, here are seven ways to make your character deaths more memorable, heartbreaking and impactful.

How to Make Character Deaths More Memorable

Timing Is Everything

If you kill a character off too quickly, there's no time for the audience to really care if they are gone or not. And if you kill them off at strange times throughout your script, the death may seem random and out of place.

One of the keys is to find the right time to kill your character.

  • You can kill a character early, but only if you showcase their loss through the eyes of your protagonist.
  • Another reason to kill characters early is to play on the expectations of the audience. If they feel there's no way a character of a certain type or magnitude would die early, you can do that — as long as you showcase their loss through the eyes of other characters.
  • You can also time the character deaths near crucial turning points in the plot, which allows you to enhance the effect of those turning points by showcasing added loss and the conflict that ensues.

Choose your timing wisely. Have a reason that you pick that particular time in your script to kill them off.

Attach Symbolism, Metaphors and Themes

You can create a deeper meaning for a character's death by attaching it to any symbolism, themes or metaphors that can touch on those you are trying to inject into the overarching story.

When Obi-Wan Kenobi died in the original Star Wars, it later touched on the symbolism of the Force and how powerful it truly was. It also touched on the themes of Luke Skywalker's loss after previously losing his aunt and uncle. Now all of his connections to Tatooine were gone, allowing him to fully mature and come of age amidst the battle to destroy the Death Star.

How to Make Character Deaths More Memorable

Showcase the Impact The Death Makes on Other Characters 

How does their death affect the other characters they had connections with before their demise? We learn most about characters through their actions and reactions to the conflict they face. If surviving characters are left unaffected by the death of the character, it's not going to be that memorable for the audience. But if they are devastated, the audience will feel that pain through them while doing what most audiences do, living vicariously through the movie's protagonists.

Countering that, you could be creative by showing a character's indifference to the death, which could lead to additional plot twists.

Read More: 18 Plot Devices You Can Use to Elevate Your Story

Have Them Sacrifice Their Lives for Others

The act of sacrificing oneself for the greater good — or the protection of loved ones — elicits an emotional response from the audience. That's where empathy and catharsis can play a vital role in the success of your story. Audiences (and script readers) can relate to emotional loss — and sacrifice. They will be forced to imagine what it would be like to see a father, mother, daughter, son, friend, relative or peer sacrifice their life for them. That will then create a connection between the surviving characters and the audience, leading to a more memorable experience.

Star Wars paired sacrifice, shock (see below), and symbolism/theme for a memorable death.

Shock Value

Audiences love to be surprised and shocked, but it's not enough to sustain a powerful narrative. People don't want to see character deaths coming. If you're a Star Trek fan, you know the element of the Red Shirt character that beams down with the captain — the character we've never met (usually wearing a red shirt) that we know is going to die because they're presented as expendable.

While you can't rely on shock alone to make a character's death memorable, shock value is a, well, valuable asset to attach to another one of these.

That archetype of a character that never dies in a movie? Kill them off. That's what made the death of the puppy in John Wick so impactful. The cute dogs in a movie hardly ever die. But that film killed the dog off for shock value, while also attaching it to the emotional arc of the protagonist (it was a gift from his deceased wife).

Build Emotional Investment By Giving Them an Arc

The easiest way to make their death memorable is by giving them their own arc. In Pixar's Up, we didn't get to know Ellie that well. She dies within the first 10 minutes of the film. However, we were shown her character arc during that time through a montage of character moments.

  • We saw her and Karl meet.
  • They fell in love.
  • They built a life together.
  • They suffered through the loss of a child.
  • They grew old together.

When she died, audiences were heartbroken. It is one of the most cathartic moments in cinematic history — all for a character that we only knew for a brief period of time within the movie.

Whether it's a major character or a supporting character, try to give them a character arc that audiences can become invested in. When they die, it will become one of the more memorable moments within your story.

Read More: Understanding the 3 Different Types of Character Arcs

Make the Actual Death Memorable Through Dialogue or Reveals

Yes, the death scene can be trite — especially when paired with a death monologue. There are plenty of cliched moments in cinematic history. But so many of them are memorable because of what is said during those last moments.

When Doc is on his deathbed in Tombstone, this killer marksman opens up about his friendship with Wyatt Earp. We see the humanity in him finally. But it goes deeper than that. We see two friends saying goodbye. And that is what creates the cathartic climax in the film. Sure, a sacrificial death could have been sufficient (although historically inaccurate). But the dialogue-driven scene is what made his otherwise quiet death so memorable.

Give a lot of attention to how you write these death scenes, and what your characters are saying during them. Look inward and find what would make you cry (or laugh for comedic death scenes).

You can also reveal further plot points, leading to twists or the completion of character arcs to make these scenes more memorable as well.

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Take this list of seven ways to make your character deaths more memorable, and use it to write some truly cathartic scenes that will stick with script readers and audiences. Mix and match them together — or use keep it simple by using just one. Regardless, don't look upon a character's death lightly in your writing. It's usually one of the more memorable moments of your script — so make it as memorable and meaningful as possible.


Ken Miyamoto has worked in the film industry for nearly two decades, most notably as a studio liaison for Sony Studios and then as a script reader and story analyst for Sony Pictures.

He has many studio meetings under his belt as a produced screenwriter, meeting with the likes of Sony, Dreamworks, Universal, Disney, and Warner Brothers, as well as many production and management companies. He has had a previous development deal with Lionsgate, as well as multiple writing assignments, including the produced miniseries BLACKOUT, starring Anne Heche, Sean Patrick Flanery, Billy Zane, James Brolin, Haylie Duff, Brian Bloom, Eric La Salle, and Bruce Boxleitner, the feature thriller HUNTER'S CREED, and many produced Lifetime thrillers. Follow Ken on Twitter @KenMovies and Instagram @KenMovies76.

 


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2023 ScreenCraft Animation Competition Quarterfinalists https://screencraft.org/blog/2023-screencraft-animation-competition-quarterfinalists/ Thu, 31 Aug 2023 17:00:00 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=53990 Listed below are the Quarterfinalists of the 2023 ScreenCraft Animation Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 1,000 submissions. Congratulations to the writers who...

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Listed below are the Quarterfinalists of the 2023 ScreenCraft Animation Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 1,000 submissions. Congratulations to the writers who have made it this far and thanks to all for submitting!

Stay tuned for the Semifinalist announcement on October 4th on our blog and on our Twitter, Facebook, and Instagram pages! And if you’d like to receive a notification when this contest re-opens for entries, you can subscribe for updates via Coverfly here.

Here are the Quarterfinalists:

A Brooklyn Squirrel Ayindè Howell
A Farm Upstate Kevin Luperchio, Chris Nicoletti
A Thanksgiving Tradition Casey Hagaman
A toothbrush story Rodrigo Figueiredo
Abby and Stella Sam Robotham
Abraham Melissa Hope
Adventures in Woolytown Chirine Alameddine
Advertising the Musical Dan Fried
Afterlife in the Sierra Nevada Hotel Samual Darlington
Albert Joshua Young
All We Are Cameron Harbison
Almost Extinct - Only Stink to Drink Kim Linnett
American Monsters Noah Jorgensen, Nolan Watt
An Intruder In The Termite Hill PAULO ROBERTO DA SILVA
Apopalypse Nicolette Groome
Athor Brian Streaty, Paul Rose
B Team Michael Cohen, Bill DeMeritt
Barking Robert Ian Simpson
Barnabus O'Hooligan Allison Dressler Losq, Andrew Losq
Betta Sorority: Rush Week Sarah Fishel
Bigger the Better Robin D. Albert
Birth of the Fae: Locked out of Heaven Danielle M. Orsino
Blinky Allan Roberts
Blinky Allan Roberts
Boil the Ocean MATT LINTON
Brian & Brains Nathaniel Moher
Bright Blue - Pilot Mary McGloin
Bunny Hill Max Rissman
Camp Havasu Kyle Butenhoff
Carlton's Cosmos Ethan Scott
Carrier Pigeon Graham Nelson
Cat Cul-de-sac Ricardo Vera, Vanessa Zarate
Cat, Dawg and Dalton Genine Tillotson, Robert Tremblay
Chronic Town Bill Zide
Cold-blooded Ariel Hartzman
Coming Home Hadley Rose
Console Christopher Pennington
Critical Aidan Kilpatrick
CROAK Issac Nunez
Crystallis Sergio Pintore, Daryl D. Well
Da Doo Waas Movie Lee Kitchen
Damsel Dash Adrien Callahan
Damsel on a Quest Jocelyn Manns, Ryan Manns
Damsels and Dragons avery koenig
Darcy Delane :Pet Psychic Wendy Braff
Dead Arm Andrew Luft
Deadpool: Merc For Hire, Episode One: "No More Heroes." Matthew Sandage
Deductibles and Dragons Duncan Carr, Jake Gillespie
Detective Gizmo Zeke Nelson, Mark Nelson
Don't Quit Your Day Job Anthony Maccio
Ducked Out Sarah Eaglesfield
Eat the Rich! Ben Shiplett
Escape from Pet Heaven avery koenig
Exiles Mahonri Stewart
Fairy Lost Jennifer Wilton
Fighting Felines Devon Villacampa
Five Mile Charlie Anthony Guilianti
Fixer and Law Sam Tracton
Floe Russ Eisenman, Paul Wood
Flutter Terry Mitchell
From the Stars Kevin Smithers
Fruitopia Jessica Tang
Gauntlet Girl Brett Melnick, Levi Prewitt
Ghost Town Felix van Kann
Ghosted... Jackson Groom
Gift of a Heart Contained Vanisha Sumboo
Girl Overboard Sharon Allbright
Glory Glory Ethan Judelson
Going Commando Adam Hopwood
Gold Diggers Danny Hogan
Grand Jesters Merlin Senthil
Gristle Heidi Hornbacher
Hallows Eve High Ryan Johnston
Hammed Aleah Welsh
Harold's Comic Shop Jason Ryan
Hoop God Kelton Arcado, Connor Cooper
How to Be a Robot Yameen Hameed
I'm sorry I missed you Ethan Rogers
Ill Technique G.B. LEM
Imaginary Friends Bryce Berkowitz
In the Wings Marty Johnson
Infinite - An Animated Odyssey Bruna Fachetti
Into Space Nick Kruysifix
Inventure Joshua Jashinski
Iridium Seti Jakada
It's A Wonderful [After]Life Megan Sass
Itch mike Addiego
Jenkins and Watts: Paranormal Attorneys At Law Michael Brennan
Jesus Christ: High School Dropout Antonio Saenz
Kaltera Will Kisor, Gage Swanston
King of Blades Paul Hikari
Kooky Spooky Marfa Andres J Rovira
Lacie in the Wonderverse Michael Ierulli
Left On Base Kyle Davidson, William Stefancic
Legitimate Brittnay Johnston
Limbo Tom Welch
Little Pawn Shop of Horrors Aidan Kilpatrick
Little Red Rooster Diana Shoykhet
Mata Mapi Line Abrahamian
Mating Life Elliot Sokolsky
Max'd Out Jesse Lucks
MECCA Jeremy Gay
Medusa TRISTAN BELLAWALA
Meredith Sing! Camilo Franchesco Angelo Verastegui
Mokabi Hunter Charlotte Zielinski
Nancy Alexandria Smith
Nazareth High Randy Steinlauf
Nebula Prep Christopher Pennison
New Earth Devon Sharma
Nielheim Pilot Elyssa Catalfano
Normal Ave. Jana Henson
Not Even a Mouse Macklen Makhloghi
Offspring Hannah Silverman
Oh, Give Me a Home Kate McCusker
Out of This World Jeremy Pick
Pakaderm Battles Daniel Williams
Picture It Donald Schaffer
Poe & Co. Detective Agency Mindy Strouse
Porcupine David Hunter Fein
Power Couple Ari Donnelly
Qubit Darren Moran
Rabbit Hole Laurie Hartung
Raindrops Kelly Abbott
Ravenheart Sean Monahan, Scott Hennelly
Rebuilding Reedley Natalie DeJohn
Rottenburgerfield Myles Hewette
Samurai Squad Nat McCall
Santaman: Re-Gifted Colin O'Brien
Scary Fairy Scanlon Allison
Sergio's Dream Grayce Presnar
Shentu Across the Ages Allen Wu
Shine Catherine Gouge
Solutions Limited Jared Jeffries, Peyton Brown
Space TV Ryan Bennett
Spellboda Jo Clarke
Star Student Danny Galvin, Brad Pike
Station 53 Rebecca Potters
Steamboat Willie Returns Robert Szanto
Sunny Boy Josh Jonathan
Super-Duper Weenie Mitchell P. Ganem
Symphony Rodrigo Carvalhedo
Taro: Legend of Japan Blue Spruell
Techies - Pilot - Plebeian Blues Kevin Minke
The 7 Steve Ronaldson
The Ballboy David Seth Cohen, Shai Kushner, Josh Hyman
The Circus Gates Ann Lapine
The Crossroads Kalos Chu
The Explorer's Club Garrett Rowe, Joe Varkle
The Gayborhood Lucia Towers, Nicole Ledoux
The Glam Reaper Alexandra Cottle
The Junior Detectives Sydney "Sydney-Gene" Pawlak
The Last Heavy Metal Wizard Jordan Prescott, Matt Tribble
The Legend of Shitface Juan Topete
The Mask of Haliya Kaitlyn Fae
The Night Light Chronicles Will Neisen
The One They Call the Fighter Joshua Scammell
The Reindeer Games Dan Wilson, Aubrey Hubbell
The Steins pilot: "First Day" Melanie Reilly
The Talekeeper Judith Feldman
The Talking Pelican Daniel Padbury
The Unintelligible Devils of Negligible Evil Henry Lamb
The Union AJ Currie
Time Janitors Ryan Manns, Jocelyn Manns
To Be Great Andréanne Milette
Todd Peters: Vampire Superhero Adam Pica
Tooson CHRISTIANE Granha-Self
Tooth Michael Lee
Tooth Ferē Dre Higginbotham
Under the Bed Mackenzie Sammeth
Untitled Animated Space Trash Comedy Quincy Cho
Verducci: The Museum on Mars Veru Narula, Daniel Kulhman
Vic & Patti Go To Eden Rodolfo Salas
Villain Era Simone Gerber
Wanted Duane Piedmont
Why Me? Sam Buckner III
Wrong Herd Kevin Eis
Yard Story Margina Sisson
Yava! Tevin Houle
Yo Ho Ho! Jack Flynn, Charlotte Lobdell

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2023 ScreenCraft Sci-Fi & Fantasy Screenwriting Competition Finalists https://screencraft.org/blog/2023-screencraft-sci-fi-fantasy-screenwriting-competition-finalists/ Wed, 30 Aug 2023 17:00:00 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=54029 Listed below are the Finalists of the 2023 ScreenCraft Sci-Fi & Fantasy Screenwriting Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 1,300 submissions. Congratulations to...

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Listed below are the Finalists of the 2023 ScreenCraft Sci-Fi & Fantasy Screenwriting Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 1,300 submissions. Congratulations to the writers who have made it this far and thanks to all for submitting!

Stay tuned for the Winner announcement on September 20th on our blog and on our Twitter, Facebook, and Instagram pages! And if you’d like to receive a notification when this contest re-opens for entries, you can subscribe for updates via Coverfly here.

Here are the Finalists:

Adrift Aaron Edwards
Anything You Can Do David Hailes
Brother's Keeper David Zeltser, Joseph Greco
Cross of Wotan Bradley Stryker
Death's Daughter Sunny Karnan
Earthbound Bryce McLellan
From Above Ben Tedesco
Gun Clown Jax Ball
Hereditary Craig Berger
I Hold It True Joohun Lee
Liars Alicia Louzoun-Heisler
Man-Made Ryan Cunningham
North Star Zach Grossman
Only Apparently Real Michael Richter
Pandora Jeff Bower
Point Nemo Alex Rivers
Positron+ Jud Cremata
Pulling Seedlings Eris Qian
Rim of the World Chris Knauer
Search Angela Treviño
Sole Mate Michael Apgar
Starfall Seda Anbarci
The Deadhead Justin Ballheim
The Lights of Time Paul Ian Cross
Zarmina's World Arturo Corces

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How to Write Short Stories That Make an Emotional Impact https://screencraft.org/blog/how-to-write-short-stories-that-make-an-emotional-impact/ Mon, 28 Aug 2023 22:14:23 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=54005 Though writing a short story is challenging, there are a lot of reasons to do it. It can serve as a proof of concept for...

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Though writing a short story is challenging, there are a lot of reasons to do it. It can serve as a proof of concept for a short or feature film, a powerful means of self-expression, or even as an effective writing sample. In fact, Michael Dinner, showrunner of Justified: City Primeval, told me in Final Draft’s recent Write On podcast interview that he often prefers to read short stories instead of a spec script when looking to hire new writers.  Whatever reason you choose for writing a short story, the trick is to make it resonate emotionally with the reader. And if you're just getting started you might want to also check out our article on how to get started writing a short story.   

Here are a few tips for making your short story resonate with readers on a deeper level. 

How to Write Short Stories That Make an Emotional Impact

Craft a Killer Opening Line

The first sentence of your short story should immediately capture the reader's attention. It should hook the reader and compel them to keep reading. Here are a few opening lines that do just that.

“I’m pretty much fucked.”

– Andy Weir, The Martian

Immediately we want to know, why this person is “fucked” and in what very bad situation is this foul language appropriate? The sentence is short with an active voice. It’s intriguing. 

“The cage was finished.”

—Gabriel Garcia Marquez, Balthazar’s Marvelous Afternoon

This line can’t help but make us wonder what exactly is going on in that cage. Presumably, it’s an animal, but what if it’s something more sinister, like a human? We definitely want to keep reading to find out.

“They shoot the white girl first.”

—Toni Morrison, Paradise

Violence mixes with race in this powerful opening line. It’s startling and takes you right into a danger-filled moment with life-and-death stakes. 

For your short story, think about the most emotional moment or explosive place you can begin the narrative. If you can also convey tone and setting in your opening sentence, then your opening will be even stronger. 

Read More: 5 Reasons You Should Write a Short Story

How to Write Short Stories That Make an Emotional Impact

Create Vivid, Sensorial Images with Your Words

A short story should evoke a specific time and place. You can paint a graphic picture of the setting by using descriptive language that appeals to the senses. Describe the natural elements, like the cold, salty sea air hitting your face as you board the creaky wooden sea vessel. Or the candy-colored tropical flowers that smell sickly sweet in the stifling, humid air. The more you can detail the smells, sounds and specific items in your setting, the more you can intensify emotions and immerse readers in the story.

Read more on how short stories are quickly becoming a great way to break into Hollywood with this interview Final Draft conducted with Verve lit agent David Boxerbaum.

Build Relatable Characters

People don’t read short stories to find characters that are simply likable, they read them to find characters who are struggling in ways they can relate to. In fact, your protagonist doesn’t have to be likable at all if we understand why they do the things they do. Your characters should feel like real people with strengths, but also flaws – big flaws that cause trouble for them. The more they struggle, the more they will evoke empathy from the audience.

In Annie Proulx’s short story “Brokeback Mountain,” on which the 2005 film of the same name starring Heath Ledger and Jack Gyllenhaal is based, the character Ennis tries to fit in with society and provide for his wife and daughters by ranching. But at the same time he tries to reconcile his powerful feelings for Jack, his lover. Spending the night in a hotel room together, Ennis confesses to Jack how twisted up he feels inside:

“That summer,” said Ennis. “When we split up after we got paid out I had gut cramps so bad I pulled over and tried to puke, thought I ate somethin' bad at that place in Dubois. Took me about a year a figure out it was that I shouldn’t a let you out a my sights. Too late then by a long, long while.”

Ennis is relatable because we’ve all had that one person we loved and missed so much, we felt physically sick. But Ennis lives in a time and place where men are not supposed to love and miss each other and Ennis doesn’t know how to handle his feelings – this is his flaw, causing him to live a lie.  

How to Write Short Stories That Make an Emotional Impact

Raise the Stakes

Give your characters actions that conflict with their personal histories and values. Jumping off a boat into the ocean to save a puppy is a no-brainer for most people, but if you almost drowned in a boating accident as a child, the stakes of that jump become much greater. You can add an emotional charge to a simple act when we know there is past trauma around it. 

Include Turning Points

Your protagonist should have to make at least one big decision in your story – if not several big decisions. If your protagonist has to make a choice, whether it’s to jump off a boat, or love someone they know will break their heart – the entire story will turn in a new direction. These turning points can trigger strong emotional reactions in both the characters and the readers.

Don’t Underestimate the Element of Surprise

Another way to hook the reader emotionally is to do something unexpected. A sudden kiss, a gunshot, a plane crash – all these things can excite or jolt the reader out of the normal, predictable world and into a surprising, emotional state. Unexpected twists and turns challenge readers' expectations and add an element of excitement, wonder or humor.

In Mary Gaitskill’s short story “Secretary,” which inspired a film of the same name starring Maggie Gyllenhaal in 2002, we follow Debby, a young, fledgling secretary trying her best at her new job at a law office.

Unfortunately, she keeps making errors in the letters she types for her boss. When verbally reprimanding her doesn’t seem to improve the quality of her typing, he tries a new tactic when he calls her into his office and asks her to bend over and read the flawed letter:

Shaken and puzzled, I did what he said.

“Now read the letter to yourself. Keep reading it over and over again..”

I read: “Dear Mr. Garvy: I am very grateful to you for referring…” He began spanking me as I said “referring.” 

He’s spanking his secretary? On her bottom? In the office? This surprise really grabs your attention considering how mild-mannered and uptight Debby seems to be. Whether you find this turn in the plot disturbing or hilarious, it is certainly unexpected and almost ensures you will read to the end.   

Keep the Story Moving

A quickly-paced story can create an exciting, page-turning experience for the reader. You’ll still need moments of self-reflection and soul-searching for your characters, but those moments should be balanced with action and plot twists. Avoid long passages that repeat information or drag on so you don’t lose the reader's interest.

Some great examples of fast-paced short stories are “A Sound of Thunder,” by Ray Bradbury, “Escape From Spiderhead” by George Saunders, and “Three-Ten to Yuma” by Elmore Leonard.  

Read More: Why Do Short Stories Make Great Movies?

Give Your Ending an Emotional Punch

The resolution of a story can leave a lasting emotional impression. Ensure that the ending satisfies the protagonist’s emotional arc and provides closure for the readers. Dare to make your ending an emotional rollercoaster, filled with risks, rewards and losses.

In O. Henry’s short story, “The Gift of the Magi,” we follow the protagonist Della as she sells her knee-length, chestnut-colored hair so she can buy an expensive watch fob for her husband, Jim, as a Christmas present. At the end of the story, we are surprised to learn that Jim has also made a sacrifice - the depth of which is revealed when Della opens her gift from Jim. 

For there lay The Combs—the combs that Della had seen in a shop window and loved for a long time. Beautiful combs, with jewels, perfect for her beautiful hair. She had known they cost too much for her to buy them. She had looked at them without the least hope of owning them. And now they were hers, but her hair was gone.

This ending shows the true meaning of love and sacrifice, but it also breaks your darn heart to know how much Della and Jim and willing to give up for each other. This ending will stay with the reader for a long time. 

Read More: 12 Best Short Stories to Read for Screenwriting Inspiration

How to Write Short Stories That Make an Emotional Impact

Edit and Rewrite

After finishing your first draft, edit and revise your short story. Look for opportunities to enhance emotional depth, strengthen character arcs, and fine-tune the narrative. If the emotional level is at a 7, how can you ratchet it up to a 9? Save the biggest emotional responses for the ending where your protagonist either succeeds or fails at their main goal. Either outcome should evoke an emotional response. 

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Writing emotionally impactful short stories takes lots of practice, getting feedback from others and most importantly, rewriting. Emotions are fundamental to being alive, and tapping into them can help you create a story that resonates deeply with your audience. 


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What Hollywood Looks for in Adapted Screenplays: A Q&A with Kurt Conner https://screencraft.org/blog/what-hollywood-looks-for-in-adapted-screenplays-a-qa-with-kurt-conner/ Fri, 25 Aug 2023 18:46:34 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=53975 ScreenCraft has teamed up with Coverfly to sit down with Kurt Conner, Director of Development at Ubisoft Film and Television. Ubisoft is a video game...

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ScreenCraft has teamed up with Coverfly to sit down with Kurt Conner, Director of Development at Ubisoft Film and Television. Ubisoft is a video game publisher best known for games like Assassin’s Creed and Prince of Persia. Before joining Ubisoft, Conner worked in film and TV for over a decade, Connor has now spent the last six years at Ubisoft, which he says is a dream come true. “ I basically foster relationships with writers and directors and create the ideas that we think are interesting and will break through,” he says. Here are the takeaways from our conversation. 

Conner Looks for a Strong Point of View

Conner reads a lot of writing samples in his search to find writers to adapt Ubisoft video games into film and TV properties. First and foremost, he says the main thing he’s looking for is a strong point of view. “We have never been interested in a one-for-one adaptation of any of our games. We’ve always wanted to use the games as a jumping-off point for you to tell the story you want to tell,” says Connor. 

He says the more different or cool the writing sample is, the better. “Even a pilot script – you don’t have to think about the whole series, people will ask you about the whole series, but if you have a dynamite pilot sample, people will say, ‘Oh, this is awesome! She knows how to set up a world.’ It can be as big as you want.” To find out more about how to write for video games, click here.  

So if a writer presents a sample with a strong voice and clear vision, Conner knows they will be more likely to take one of their videogame properties and develop it into something fresh and exciting. “As long as it feels within the world and tone of the game, anything is fair game,” he says. 

Read More: How to Develop Your Voice as a Screenwriter

Opportunities for Female and Non-Binary Genre Writers 

One of Ubisoft’s goals is to develop diverse voices through a fellowship that includes mentorship and access to Ubisoft’s library of IP. “It’s a non-exclusive, paid fellowship where we pick one woman for film and one woman for TV and basically give them access to our entire back catalog of games – as well as implore them to come up with an original idea should they want to,” he says. 

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Having female and diverse writers is important to create bold, exciting content, Conner says, but finding them can be difficult – even in Hollywood. “Every time we were looking for a female genre writer, we’d get the same five names. Why are only these people doing this? There’s more people out there!” says Connor who’s more than willing to go the extra mile to find them. In the first year of the program, they selected Mishna Wolff for the fellowship based on her writing sample. For IFC, Wolff went on to develop their first independent feature, Werewolves Within (based on the Ubisoft game of the same name). 

Read More: Play Mechanics: Adapting Video Games For the Screen

Conner’s Advice to Writers 

Conner says to keep these three words in mind when writing a sample: smart, commercial and unexpected. Whatever you write, a feature spec, a TV pilot, a podcast or a short story, it should absolutely tick off these three boxes. 

On the more practical side of things, Conner encourages writers to, “Write all the time!” and get as much help from industry professionals – like the folks at Coverfly – as possible. “Try to get someone on your side – a manager, an agent, even if it’s just a friend who’s a manager.” He says this is important because it’s hard to go it alone and get access to development execs without someone who can get past the gatekeepers. Most companies, including Ubisoft, won’t accept unsolicited submissions for legal reasons.  

His last bit of advice has to do with getting notes. “Through the development process, you will get notes, upon notes, upon notes,” he says. Learning how to navigate through that process of listening to and incorporating notes in your work is a skill that is imperative to have. “It’s a tough process, it can really beat you down. But it will help you and your script will only get better.”

Learn about Ubisoft’s TV and Film Fellowship for Women and read about past fellows.


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What to Do When Your Script Coverage Tells You Your Script is Terrible https://screencraft.org/blog/what-to-do-when-your-script-coverage-tells-you-your-script-is-terrible/ Mon, 21 Aug 2023 17:58:07 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=53619 Handling rejection is hard for anyone in any walk of life. For screenwriters, it's not just a rite of passage — it's a continual fact...

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Handling rejection is hard for anyone in any walk of life. For screenwriters, it's not just a rite of passage — it's a continual fact of life that never goes away, no matter what level you accomplish within the film and television industry. You get just as much rejection, and far, far more objective and subjective notes when you're a professional screenwriter working on assignment for studios, production companies, networks and streamers. But how do you handle being told through script coverage that your script isn't up to par, isn't ready for the industry and sometimes is just outright terrible?

Here, we'll delve into the dynamics of interpreting script coverage notes and how script coverage can make you a better — and more industry-ready — screenwriter.

Read More: What Is Script Coverage?

Don't Take Script Coverage Notes Personal

Script consultants aren't trying to insult you. They are offering a reaction to the screenplay you have shared with them for that very purpose — an honest reaction. When you submit your scripts for coverage, you shouldn't be doing so to find instant admiration and praise. You should be submitting your work to get an in-depth outside perspective, which is something very difficult for a screenwriter to experience when reading their own work. Script coverage is there to help you gain an industry perspective on the screenplays you're looking to submit to studios, networks, streamers, production companies, agencies and management companies. It should never be taken personally. It's there to help.

What to Do When Your Script Coverage Tells You Your Script is Terrible

Consider the Source of the Script Coverage

When you're a pro and get word from your executive or producer that the draft you've handed in is terrible, there's not much you can do. You'll have to hope they haven't replaced you — and then apply the objective notes for a better draft.

However, when you're earlier on your screenwriting journey and using script coverage services to better your craft, there's a higher learning opportunity that will better prepare you for success in those professional assignments.

The best script coverage services — like ScreenCraft’s genre-specific script notes —  employ professional readers with years of experience reading for the top studios, production companies, agencies, management companies, networks and streamers. Such experience is required to become a script consultant. And their sole purpose is to help prepare screenwriters — and their screenplays — for the tough industry spec script market.

When you consider them as the source, you'll understand that the feedback and coverage notes within are not purely subjective rants. Instead, the insights they offer are a direct reaction similar to what you should expect when you submit your screenplays to major competitions, fellowships and especially film and television industry development executives, producers, agents, managers, directors, etc.

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They are offering you the industry reaction. Thus, it's imperative that you look at their notes and ratings with an open mind, void of emotional reactions and defensive mindsets. It's not easy to do that, but let's discuss some ways that will help you find the good in the terrible. (We do a deep-dive of script coverage ratings in another post, so go check that out if you want more information.)

Pay Attention to Script Coverage Notes that Trend with Your Scripts

The easiest step to accepting and learning from negative feedback is to first seek out the trends that you're reading in the reactions to your screenplays. It's one thing to have one person or script coverage service give you a bad review of your work. When you start to see the same notes trending between coverage and individuals reading your work, you should start to see that it's less about a subjective viewpoint and more about the objective issues you're writing is causing.

It's easy for screenwriters to scoff at trending script notes, which usually create a negative "me against the world" approach. Sure, plenty of studios passed on some of the most successful movie scripts ever produced. However, it's wise not to fall into immediate delusions of grandeur. Most of the time when script notes are trending toward negatives, it means that there are objective issues you may need to address.

What to Do When Your Script Coverage Tells You Your Script is Terrible

Examples:

  • Poor formatting which makes the script difficult to read.
  • Wooden dialogue that needs to be punched up.
  • Inconsistent tone.
  • Lacking character development.
  • Slow pacing.

Whatever the trending issues may be, pay attention to them. Don't think of them as nothing more than subjective reactions.

Subjective Negative Reactions to Your Script Should Not Be Taken Lightly

There's a stark difference between objective and subjective reactions.

Objective script reactions are not influenced by personal feelings, opinions or biases. Instead, they are based on the needs, wants and trends of the industry. They can be communicated and described in a neutral and impartial manner. Possible objective script notes include:

  • "The budget would be too high for most studios and production companies to consider."
  • "There is not enough diversity in the cast of characters."
  • "The story and concept have been done before."
  • "The action and plot points are too derivative of previous films."
  •  "The market for the subgenre is too saturated."

What to Do When Your Script Coverage Tells You Your Script is Terrible

Subjective script reactions are responses influenced by personal feelings, opinions and biases. These types of reactions can vary from person to person, based on personal interpretations, as well as any individual's wants, needs, personal preferences and emotional baggage.

However, that's how a screenwriter's work will always be received by the audience — with subjectivity. All art forms are viewed with subjective eyes by the consumers of the art. And it goes far beyond that in the film and television industry as well.

Studio/Network/Streaming executives, producers and directors/showrunners are the driving force of entertainment. They will often make decisions based primarily on what they want their name — or company's name — attached to.

So you can't escape subjectivity. Nor should you ignore subjective opinions when it comes to script coverage. If a script consultant didn't like your script, pay attention to the reasons they offer. The objective reasoning will be easy to spot (see above for examples). The subjective reasoning point toward more personal reactions.

  • "The plot twists didn't shock me. I saw them coming a mile away."
  • "I didn't like the protagonist. They came across as distractingly unlikeable to me." 
  • "The pacing felt very slow in the opening act."
  • "The main character's journey didn't resonate with me on a personal level, which made the story less emotionally impactful."
  • "The humor and jokes weren't funny to me."

These subjective reactions aren't objective reasons to change your script. However, subjective reactions need to be, at the very least, considered. Why? Because you're going to get subjective reactions from every single person you send the script to. And even if the script gets produced and the movie comes out, you're going to get thousands or millions of subjective reactions. It's part of the art form of fiction — especially something so easily consumable as film and television.

Embrace negative script notes — or script notes that go against your original intentions. Trust in the script consultant's reaction, knowing that their reaction may likely fall in line with the majority of decision-makers reading your script.

Ask yourself, "What if they're right?" Then, consider the solutions that your creative mind could conjure when considering the subjective reactions to your work. You just may discover that not only are they right, but their pointing their subjective opinions out actually led to better versions of your story and characters.

What to Do When Your Script Coverage Tells You Your Script is Terrible

Find the Note Behind the Note

Addressing surface-level issues with your script is easy. But the key to understanding why your script may be lacking (or terrible) in the eyes of those writing script coverage, is looking for the underlying problem(s) that a script reader may have with your script. This is where finding the note behind the note is key.

To do this, you need to delve deeper into the feedback and try to grasp and identify the core issue(s) the reader is trying to convey.

  • Analyze the feedback.
  • Consider the broader implications.
  • Identify the root cause of their subjective reactions.

If the script coverage states that the antagonist's motivation is weak, the note behind the note may be pointing to the issue of the character's arc lacking a clear emotional journey. If the protagonist's motivation is weak, maybe the stakes need to be heightened to make their story more engaging.

If the script coverage points out that the dialogue is unnatural and wooden, the note behind the note may be that the character's dialogue may lack authenticity or a distinct voice that separates them from other characters.

If the script coverage touches on the ending, calling it too predictable, the note behind the note may be that the screenplay's climax suffers from a lack of surprises or doesn't subvert expectations that theatergoers crave. You may need to consider exploring alternative resolutions or bigger twists.

What to Do When Your Script Coverage Tells You Your Script is Terrible

Understand and Realize All Screenwriters Need to Evolve and Grow

Let's keep it real. Sometimes your script sucks. And sometimes it takes an outside party to help you realize this. Even pro screenwriters write duds. It happens — more often than we'd like.

Script coverage helps you evolve and grow as a screenwriter. You're not going to do that by being told how amazing every single thing you write may be. Sure, positive reinforcement is good. And, yes, the best script coverage will also point out the strength of your scripts, as well as their weaknesses. But constructive criticism is key to becoming a better screenwriter. You need it. And you should seek it out.

Consider All Script Coverage Notes — But Don't Be Held Hostage by Them

If you do all of the above, and still feel that your script is exactly what you want it to be, then you have the power and freedom to reject it. As shown above, it's wise to consider each note — and the notes behind the notes. But, in the end, it's your choice. You can cherry-pick what you feel resonates best with your script and toss the rest. It's up to you. You should never feel held hostage creatively by script coverage. Nor should you rely on script coverage to write the script for you.

Screenplay coverage is a tool — a very effective one that can help you jumpstart your evolution as a screenwriter. Eventually, when you become a pro, you won't be able to use it while you're under contract. So, enjoy it while you can. And use it to help you and your writing get to a point where you're relying on yourself to complete that paid writing assignment.

Read More: What You Should and Shouldn't Expect from Script Coverage


Ken Miyamoto has worked in the film industry for nearly two decades, most notably as a studio liaison for Sony Studios and then as a script reader and story analyst for Sony Pictures.

He has many studio meetings under his belt as a produced screenwriter, meeting with the likes of Sony, Dreamworks, Universal, Disney, and Warner Brothers, as well as many production and management companies. He has had a previous development deal with Lionsgate, as well as multiple writing assignments, including the produced miniseries BLACKOUT, starring Anne Heche, Sean Patrick Flanery, Billy Zane, James Brolin, Haylie Duff, Brian Bloom, Eric La Salle, and Bruce Boxleitner, the feature thriller HUNTER'S CREED, and many produced Lifetime thrillers. Follow Ken on Twitter @KenMovies and Instagram @KenMovies76.


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A Screenwriter’s Guide to Script Coverage https://screencraft.org/blog/a-screenwriters-guide-to-script-coverage/ Fri, 18 Aug 2023 19:00:34 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=52956 Script coverage plays an essential role in developing a screenwriter's skills and aids them in discovering their unique screenwriting voice. Without guidance, novice screenwriters can...

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Script coverage plays an essential role in developing a screenwriter's skills and aids them in discovering their unique screenwriting voice.

Without guidance, novice screenwriters can often find themselves lingering between bland screenwriting and attempting to explore the wants, needs, guidelines, and expectations of the film industry they are trying to break into.

With that in mind, here we present the ultimate screenwriter's guide to script coverage!

What Is Script Coverage?

Script coverage involves the evaluation and examination of a screenplay by a skilled script reader/story analyst or script consultant. This comprehensive assessment aims to gauge the screenplay's viability for potential consideration and acquisition by studios, networks, streamers and production companies. The ultimate outcome of this process is the creation of a written report that meticulously outlines the strengths and weaknesses of the screenplay itself, as well as the screenwriter(s) behind it.

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How Does Script Coverage Help Writers?

Screenwriters have the ability to harness the beneficial attributes of script coverage by utilizing paid script coverage services to improve their craft and help ready their writing and their screenplays for the movie and television industries. Script coverage — provided by experienced industry script readers, story analysts, and script consultants — can help you pinpoint your script's strengths and weaknesses while providing suggestions to maximize its potential.

The script notes and feedback help to hone your skills and make your scripts shine brighter.

Does Script Coverage Help Studios?

Yes! When it comes to studios, networks, streamers, and production companies, script coverage plays a key role in giving development executives and producers valuable insights. It helps them figure out if the script and the screenwriter truly align with the company's overall vision and brand. The script readers and story analysts, who are often the same person, base their assessment on what the company wants and needs. They determine whether the script fits the kind of projects they want to develop, produce and distribute.

Different Types of Script Coverage

There is a vast landscape of coverage options and definitions that you will come across in your screenwriting journey. Understanding which types of script coverage you, the screenwriter, can utilize to hone your skills is important.

Let's explore five prominent types of script coverage available to screenwriters and examine their purpose and benefits. This analysis can help you find the most fitting type of screenplay coverage for you.

For a deeper dive, check out our article about all the different types of script coverage.

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Genre-Specific Notes

Genre-specific notes are a type of script coverage that provides feedback and recommendations based on the conventions and expectations of a specific film genre. These notes consider the unique rules and norms followed by genres such as horror, action, thriller, adventure, comedy, mystery, drama, and their respective subgenres.

While still addressing story structure and character development, genre-specific notes also emphasize the tone, pacing and style relevant to the intended genre. They provide insights into how well the screenplay aligns with the genre's overall landscape and its potential appeal to the target audience.

What makes genre-specific notes particularly intriguing is that the script consultant assigned to review your screenplay is typically a knowledgeable enthusiast of the genre you're working with.

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Format-Specific Notes

Certain script consulting platforms offer specialized services that focus specifically on the formatting of your screenplay. Formatting is often a challenge for new writers, and although it may not determine the quality of your script, it does carry significance. Inadequate formatting can impede the reading experience of your screenplay and greatly impact studio coverage, as well as your chances in screenwriting contests, competitions and fellowships.

Format-specific notes comprehensively address all elements of your script, ensuring adherence to industry standards and expectations for proper formatting.

Preparation Notes

Consulting services provide preparation notes that assist in assessing the viability and effectiveness of the ideas, concepts, characters, and settings of a prospective screenplay prior to beginning the actual writing process.

Script consultants can offer evaluations of screenplay outlines, enabling you to identify the strengths and weaknesses of your characters and narratives even before a single page of the screenplay is written. They can also help screenwriters in crafting compelling loglines and synopses while also assisting in developing more engaging opening pages.

Script Coverage, Notes and Feedback- What's the Difference_

Development Notes

When you're working on a screenplay while collaborating with a development executive or producer, they'll give you development notes. These notes are typically given to screenwriters who have been hired for specific projects or are doing rewrites on scripts they've optioned or sold.

The purpose of these development notes is to help you, the screenwriter, make your script even better and get it closer to the vision they have for the project. This development process is key to getting a screenplay where it needs to be for potential acquisition, financing, and production.

Screenwriters can also pay for script coverage services that provide development notes similar to those found within Film/TV/Streaming industry companies.

Notes can cover a bunch of different elements, like:

  • Story structure
  • Character development
  • Dialogue
  • Pacing
  • Tone
  • Theme

Receiving development notes coverage helps screenwriters prepare for the development process that they will be facing if — and hopefully when — they reach a level in their career where they are under contract and collaborating with industry professionals.

A Screenwriters Guide to Script Coverage

Studio Coverage

Studio script coverage is a comprehensive in-house report commissioned by major studios, networks, streamers or production companies to thoroughly evaluate a screenplay. Its primary purpose is to assist high-level decision-makers in making informed investment decisions regarding potential projects.

This type of script coverage is written by an in-house script reader or a proficient external script consultant possessing a remarkable background in generating captivating and enlightening screenplay coverage. Agencies and management companies also utilize this type of coverage to dissect a screenplay's relevance to their respective company's client-focused vision, with the aim to determine how well the script aligns with the types of clients the agents and managers are seeking to represent.

However, studio script coverage is not something that screenwriters have access to. It is specifically meant for in-house development purposes.

Who Writes Script Coverage?

The best script coverage is written by individuals with industry experience working in film and television development branches of companies, as well as those with experience in writing and developing screenplays.

On the studio or network level, coverage can be written by any number of company employees and consultants, including:

  • Interns
  • Assistants
  • Junior Development Executives
  • Paid Script Readers/Story Analysts

These coverage writers are usually trained and given guidance by company development executives. They are instructed to keep a keen eye out for various company needs and wants. They are also given guidance to search for specific character strengths, enthralling story angles and many other concept, character and story elements that the company is looking for in screenplay submissions for potential development and acquisition.

When screenwriters pay for script coverage, the best script coverage service providers require their script consultants, readers and story analysts to have a certain amount of experience in movie and television industry development. It's important to ensure that the service you pay for employs experienced coverage writers.

Explaining Script Coverage Ratings

Script readers and story analysts are tasked with prioritizing submissions through the assignment of one of three script coverage ratings:

  • Pass
  • Consider
  • Recommend

Script coverage relies heavily on the pass, consider and recommend grading system, which plays a vital role in evaluating and processing the many screenplays in the spec script market. But what do these script coverage gradings mean?

Let's go over each one briefly. (We do a deep-dive of script coverage ratings in another post, so go check that out if you want more information.)

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Pass

In the realm of studios, networks, streamers and production companies, when it comes to script coverage, a "pass" typically signifies that the script will not progress further within the company's hierarchy due to various reasons.

When it comes to script consulting services, a "pass" indicates that the screenplay is not yet ready for submission to industry professionals.

Consider

A "consider" indicates that the reader recognizes a script's potential and considers it worthwhile for further consideration by higher-level executives within the production company. However, there might still be certain flaws or issues that need to be addressed before the script can be approved for acquisition, production, or further advancement.

For consulting service coverage, a "consider" grade can be uplifting for the screenwriter, as it indicates that their work showcases potential. When you receive a "consider" grade, you're on the right track.

Recommend

Achieving a "recommend" grade is the ultimate recognition for a screenplay, but it is also the most challenging to attain.

Within the Hollywood system, bestowing a script with a "recommend" rating implies that the reader believes the script is fully prepared for production, worthy of substantial investments, and possesses the potential for great success.

For a script consulting service, a "recommend" signifies that the reader has confidence in the script's readiness for submission to Hollywood companies and recognizes it as a work of high quality and marketability.

 

What Does Script Coverage Look Like?

Script coverage utilizes a particular structured form for presentation purposes. The formats and grading scales for coverage differ among companies, but over the years, most studio script coverage formats have maintained a relatively consistent pattern.

The average script coverage form looks like this:

When evaluating scripts, readers assess various elements, including the concept, story, characters, dialogue, pacing and structure. They also consider the script's marketability, its potential for casting, and its overall suitability for consideration by the specific company employing the reader.

Script readers will fill out the blank informational elements of the form, including the title, format, and all credited screenwriters, as well as provide a summary of the story, logline, and overall comments.

But things get exciting once we get to the grading grid!

The Script Coverage Grading Grid

To assess the screenplay's various elements according to the company's needs and wants, a grid is employed to gauge the reader's overall reaction. Most studio script coverage forms evaluate the concept, story, characters, dialogue, structure, pacing, catharsis, and originality.

These elements are graded by marking the boxes as Excellent, Good, Fair, or Poor with an X. At the bottom of the grid, the script and writer receive an overall grade — Recommend, Consider, or Pass — each described in detail above. The average placement of X in each category determines the final grade assigned to the script.

Here is what a completed script coverage grading grid would look like:

The overall assessment of this sample grid results in a "consider" grade, with the marks averaging out to this level. If a majority of the marks had been "excellent," the script would have received a "recommend" grade.

If most of the marks had been "fair" or "poor," it would have been an easy "pass," implying a clear rejection.

CLICK HERE to download an editable script coverage document that you can use to write your own script coverage. 

What's the Difference Between Feedback, Notes, and Coverage?

Okay, you now know the ins and out of script coverage. Let's delve into a more comprehensive understanding of the difference between feedback, notes, and coverage.

Feedback

Acquiring feedback on your screenwriting is a valuable tool that can significantly contribute to improving the quality of your work. Writing groups, peers, mentors, and commissioned script consulting coverage services contain general feedback to consider — but not changes that you need to actually make.

You should always keep in mind that feedback — even from a paid script consultant — is just someone's opinion. It's up to you to decide how to use it. However, if you receive similar feedback repeatedly, it might be worth considering making changes or investigating why those issues keep coming up.

Learn more about feedback!

A Screenwriter’s Guide to Script Coverage

Notes

Script notes are the analysis offered in script coverage written for studios, networks, streamers, production companies, agencies, and management companies.

The purpose of these notes is to give objective feedback and achieve specific goals set by the studio or network. This could involve adding or removing scenes, sequences, storylines, or character developments.

Typically, when studios or companies give notes, there isn't much room for negotiation. Usually, if you receive these notes, it means you either have a contract for a writing assignment or your original spec script is going through its first contracted rewrite.

Learn more about notes!

Coverage

When you receive script notes within paid coverage services, it's key to remember that the notes within the script coverage are being offered through the lens of movie studios, television networks, and streamers. Thus, they are more objective than general feedback but still aren't set in stone as far as what you need or are required to apply in further drafts.

The people writing the coverage are generally versed in the needs, wants, and current trends of the industry. Because of this, screenwriters should strongly consider the points being made within the coverage notes.

Learn more about coverage!

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How to Use Script Coverage

Script coverage should always be used as a tool rather than a crutch. You can't rely on it to write your screenplays for you. You can only use it as a tool to get some insight into possible changes and improvements that can better your chances of breaking through.

The benefit of script coverage is that it is just that — a tool. You're not writing at the behest of a development executive or producer that may have particular demands. Instead, you're being offered an educated and experienced opinion. And the points being brought up within the coverage you've paid for should be considered. But that's where it stops. You can either apply what they have suggested or find a balance between what you've learned from the coverage and what your overall vision for your script is before you start submitting it to contests, competitions, fellowships, and, especially, to studios, networks, streamers, agencies and management companies.

You're not using script coverage to get glowing reviews, receive inspiration for story and character ideas, or for proofreading. You should be using coverage for guidance, advice, and objective feedback.

Read More: What You Should and Shouldn't Expect from Script Coverage

Best Script Coverage Services

If you're looking for a free option for general screenplay feedback, CoverflyX offers a free peer script exchange. This type of coverage goes back to the feedback breakdown mentioned above, offering you a subjective reaction to your script. This free service also offers you the benefit of reviewing another screenwriter's work, which can be an equally valuable experience.

As we mentioned before, the best script coverage services hire individuals with industry experience in studio script coverage and development.

Based on that guidance, here are some of the best script coverage services that we recommend.

What Is Script Coverage

ScreenCraft Screenplay Coverage

Regarded as one of the best in the industry, ScreenCraft's script coverage services offer you script readers that are chosen specifically for the genre that your screenplay falls under. Thus, you're not going to get someone that prefers period dramas but is tasked with reading your contemporary horror script. You're going to get someone that is well-versed in whatever genre you are writing in.

WeScreenplay

WeScreenplay offers unique packages that range from $69 to $199, depending on the type of script and the amount of coverage you want. And even better, the coverage comes back to you at a faster rate in just 72 hours!

Launch Pad

More advanced emerging screenwriters can take advantage of Tracking Board's Launch Pad coverage offered in a more studio-level aesthetic. 

Coverfly Industry Direct Notes

Part script coverage from industry pros, part screenplay/screenwriter promotional platform, Coverfly gives writers the chance to buy notes directly from Hollywood TV and film executives. They tend to be pretty spendy, but they often come with follow-up phone calls with your reader. 

Nicholl Fellowship Reader Comments

The Nicholl Fellowship is the Academy of Motion Picture Arts and Sciences fellowship competition, which is the most prestigious screenwriting competition in the industry. Per submission, screenwriters can pay extra for reader comments. And the readers that help judge the Fellowship are esteemed industry professionals.

Read More: Top 5 Best Screenplay Coverage Services

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Script coverage is an essential industry tool for screenwriters, as well as the Film/TV/Streaming industries. On the screenwriter's end, it can contain invaluable feedback to help learn and hone those professional skills for potential writing assignments and script sales.


Ken Miyamoto has worked in the film industry for nearly two decades, most notably as a studio liaison for Sony Studios and then as a script reader and story analyst for Sony Pictures.

He has many studio meetings under his belt as a produced screenwriter, meeting with the likes of Sony, Dreamworks, Universal, Disney, and Warner Brothers, as well as many production and management companies. He has had a previous development deal with Lionsgate, as well as multiple writing assignments, including the produced miniseries BLACKOUT, starring Anne Heche, Sean Patrick Flanery, Billy Zane, James Brolin, Haylie Duff, Brian Bloom, Eric La Salle, and Bruce Boxleitner, the feature thriller HUNTER'S CREED, and many produced Lifetime thrillers. Follow Ken on Twitter @KenMovies and Instagram @KenMovies76.


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Fall 2023 ScreenCraft Film Fund Semifinalists https://screencraft.org/blog/fall-2023-screencraft-film-fund-semifinalists/ Wed, 16 Aug 2023 17:00:30 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=53920 Listed below are the Semifinalists of the Fall 2023 ScreenCraft Film Fund. These exceptional projects were selected from almost 1,100 submissions. Congratulations to those who...

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Listed below are the Semifinalists of the Fall 2023 ScreenCraft Film Fund. These exceptional projects were selected from almost 1,100 submissions. Congratulations to those who have made it this far!

Stay tuned for the Finalist announcement on September 6th on our blog and on our Twitter, Facebook, and Instagram pages! And if you’d like to receive a notification when this contest re-opens for entries, you can subscribe for updates via Coverfly subscribe for updates via Coverfly here.

Here are the Semifinalists:

97 Allyson Rice
A Light In Canon City AARON BEAR
Abdo and Saneya Omar Bakry
ADA - MY MOTHER THE ARCHITECT Yael Melamede
After What Happened at the Library Kyle Casey Chu, Roisin Isner
Against The Current Jo Erickson , Kibwe Cooper
Ali 1978: The Butterfly's Last Dance Eddie Goines
APPETITE (working title) Kevin Longa
As Easy As Closing Your Eyes Aaron Golden, Parker Croft
Bare Skin Mico Montes
Bella Noche Antonina Kerguelen
Black Snow Alina Simone
BLACKBELTS Kan Muftic
Bumblebees Can't Fly Andrew Jonathan Smith, Abraham Buckoke
Camping with Dad Jeremy Davis
Coal Country Jessica Blank, Eric Jensen, Audrey Rosenberg
CRAZY LEGS Kristopher Garcia-Simms
Dawn Chorus Laura Jayne Tunbridge
Don't be late, Myra Afia Nathaniel
Downline Jacob Zorn, Alexander Zorn
Dream Machine Daniel Egan
El Cartel Cubano Adrienne Hall
Enjoy Your Visit Erin Cramer
Everything Falling Away Julian Muller
F*ck That Guy Hanna Gray Organschi
Family Dinner Ethan Romaine
Forward Thinking Jeremy Hsing, Abby Burton, Antonio Harper
Frankie & Sage Seda Anbarci, Lissette Camacho
Greyhound 1170 Zach Jansen
Grieving Chris Chi
Growing Flowers on the Moon Robert Bowersox
Gummy Worms Sophie Bennett
Help! Alex E. Chew
How to Sue the Klan John Beder
I Am Kathy jane therese
I Am Oronde Halimah Iman, Teresa Schaeffer, Black Deniro
ILONA'S JOY DUST C. Fitz
In Earth We Trust Sophie Morgan
IRON LUNG Vee Saieh
Is Gay Marriage Next? Emily Clark
Isis and Osiris Mezan Ayoka Morrison
Killing Time Caroline Koonce
KONNICHIWA TOKYO DAISY DENNERLINE
Life of Lola Jacopo Campaiola
Long Days Adam Keleman, Brian Trichon
Long Pork Iris Dukatt
Lost Time Ben Hickernell
M Calvin Nemeth
Maid to Steal Derek Quick (Negane Meno)
Más Allá ("Beyond") Bettina López Mendoza
My So-Called Iraqi-American Wedding AYSER SALMAN
My Star Parish Rahbar, Tara Moini
Niki Tomi Beto Jon Ayon
No More Wet Feet Martin Calvo
No Rules Ashley Gianni
No Strings Attached Heather Alexis
NOBODY'S LEAVING til Jesus Comes (aka Save Me!) Jean Barker
NOEL & LEON Dayna Hanson, Dave Proscia
Now, Hear Me Good Dwayne LeBlanc
ONE Alex Abdel Salam
One More from the Road William Reilly
Out of Body Ryan Kim
Ovary-Acting Laura Jayne Tunbridge
Pearl Rising Linda Dahlem Espinoza
Peki House Haunting Emma Van Lare
Please, Call Me Back. Eva Fabray
Portal to Hell Woody Bess
Seed Money Bartow Elmore
Shapeshifter Bianca Catbagan
SIDES Jonathan D'Rozario
Sitting Bird Athena Han
Socks Jiyeon Kim-Myung
Sons of The River Katyayani Kumar
Spellbound: Women in Magic Susan Dynner
Standing With The Ancients Jen Muranetz
Stitched Zach Goodwin
Strangers in the Night Ivona Juka
Subversive Sea Lara Carvalho
Sugar Daddy Mike Cooke
Sun Falls Aeden O'Connor Agurcia
Sunhat Naomi Christie
THE (MIS)EDUCATION OF BLACK CHILDREN Moreetsi Gabang
The Collins Film Brennan Huizinga
The Designer Em Johnson
THE HOUSE SITTER Anne Hollister
The Hummingbird Trees (Diary of a Tree Girl) Andrea Koehle Jones
The Sphinx Chloë Myerson
The Stolen Children Elizabeth Jacobs
THE WAYS OUR BODIES BURN Daniel Egbert
The Weight of it All Arthur Gay
Timetracker Peter Quandt
Tokeru (Melting) Yuki Soga
Under the Influencer Skye Emerson
Unstaged Elizabeth Shew
Ways to Fly Kirby Marshall-Collins
Welcome to North Brother Island Enzo Flores
Westhampton Christian Nilsson
What Happens in the Bookstacks Alexandra Miller
What Men Do For Love karan talwar
Whitehead: The Improbably Charmed Life of Paul Whitehead     Heidi Hornbacher
Who Killed Alex Odeh? William Youmans
Windy City Serenade Harper Philbin
Winsome Justin Lerner
WOODWORK Alex Woodruff

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2023 ScreenCraft Comedy Competition Winners https://screencraft.org/blog/2023-screencraft-comedy-competition-winners/ Wed, 16 Aug 2023 17:00:00 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=53915 Listed below are the Winners of the 2023 ScreenCraft Comedy Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 2,200 submissions. Congratulations to these winning writers!...

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Listed below are the Winners of the 2023 ScreenCraft Comedy Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 2,200 submissions. Congratulations to these winning writers!

Grand Prize Winner

Treasure, Inc. by Ted Sperling

A co-ed bachelor party is swept into a high stakes treasure hunt after finding clues leading to millions of dollars buried in the Idaho wilderness. Action comedy in the vein of GAME NIGHT meets CITY SLICKERS.

Feature Winner

The Tabby by Emily McGregor, Samuel Weller

In this rain-soaked, action-packed Seattle noir-comedy, a woman investigates her brother's disappearance while his cat goes on a bloody tour of revenge.

TV Pilot Winner

Daddy Issues by Justin Viar

When the lives of three diverse "girl dads" become intertwined, they work together to overcome their significant shortcomings in the endeavor of modern parenting.

Add-On Prize Winner

Talk Black by Destiny Macon

A timid engineer develops a wild and expressive split personality to help her speak up to the boy's club at work and prevent "urban renewal" in a historically black neighborhood.

Congratulations to these winning writers and finalists, and thank you to our jury and to everyone who submitted projects; we read a number of remarkable projects. View the quarterfinalists, semifinalists and finalists by clicking the corresponding link.

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What is a Femme Fatale Character? https://screencraft.org/blog/what-is-a-femme-fatale-character/ Mon, 14 Aug 2023 22:00:11 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=53825 The femme fatale is a character archetype you can’t simply take your eyes off of. Think Sharon Stone’s Catherine Trammell in Basic Instinct. Like her...

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The femme fatale is a character archetype you can’t simply take your eyes off of. Think Sharon Stone’s Catherine Trammell in Basic Instinct. Like her or loathe her, the femme fatale is usually the most intriguing presence on screen. She’s both desirable and diabolical, captivating and conniving. Like the male protagonists she’s often paired with, you can’t help but want to be with her, but don't you dare double-cross her.

The history of the femme fatale is a complex one. She’s been featured in stories for centuries, often portrayed as a deceptive seductress or even a mystical priestess, and typically only through the male gaze. Only recently has there been a female re-appropriation of the femme fatale archetype in cinema; now she’s not so much overly sexualized and therefore “bad” or “evil,” but a passionate woman whose anger is fueled by the sordid history of women being routinely dismissed and not heard or respected. 

Let’s define what a femme fatale character is, the term’s origins, examples of the character, and how you can best write them in your screenplays, allowing femme fatale characters to thrive in your story.

What is a Femme Fatale Character

Basic Instinct (1992)

Femme Fatale Meaning

The femme fatale is French for “fatal woman,” and is otherwise known as a “seductress,” “man-eater” or “vamp.” She’s usually depicted as a seductive woman who woos the male protagonist into a dangerous trap for her own benefit. As such she’s typically used as a nemesis, trickster, or attractor in stories. 

What is a Femme Fatale Character

Double Indemnity (1944)

Common Femme Fatale Characteristics

The most common femme fatale characteristics include: 

  • She’s the epitome of an independent woman. She’s usually single either widowed or never married. She’s self-reliant and is able to do what she wants when she wants.
  • Her sense of style oozes sex appeal whether she’s wearing revealing dresses or tight clothing or delicate lingerie. While her fashion isn’t flashy, her sensuality spills from her wardrobe. 
  • Speaking of which, she’s connected to her sexuality. She talks about sex and likes to have sex. Her sexuality is very much a part of who she is. 
  • She’s bold and ambitious. She doesn’t back down and isn’t afraid to go after what she wants. She always has some sort of a plan running at the back of her mind. 
  • She leaves a little mystery. For all her forwardness, there’s an element of suspense that she embodies. You just can’t quite figure her out. Is she telling the truth or not? She’s essentially an elegant enigma.
  • She’s charming. Even if you know she’s no good, you can’t help but want to be around her due to her wit and intelligence. 
  • She’s manipulative and deceitful. Yet because she’s so charming, you probably won’t notice her lies and scheming –  or at least will ignore it. 
  • She has a dark past. She might not talk about it overtly but you know there’s something that went horribly wrong that still haunts her. 
  • She’s dangerous. Getting involved with her will surely ruin, or at the very least, upend your life. 
What is a Femme Fatale Character

Wonder Woman (2017)

Different Types of Femme Fatales

According to a research paper published in 2019, there are four types of femme fatales. 

Diana: the Huntress

In Greek mythology, Diana, or Artemis, is the goddess of the moon and hunt, sister of Apollo. She punishes men for their greed. Her strengths are her independence and intelligence. Her goal is to get paid – she wants her fortune and she isn’t afraid to trick or do away with men in order to get it. She’s feminine but strong. She will literally fight for what she wants. Think Diana in Wonder Woman or Virgina Baker in Entrapment

Venus: the Seductress

She is the goddess of erotic love and beauty, and therefore uses her beauty and sexuality to get what she wants. She might carry herself behind a mask of innocence and playfulness but that’s only to ingratiate herself further into the lives of men she wants to ruin. Her goal is to have men fall for her…and then leave them high and dry. Think Kathryn in Cruel Intentions

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Amazon: The Warrior

Enigmatic and strong, she bucks against tradition. She is considered both feminine and masculine, and as such she’s seen as risque and a non-conformist. She typically uses her sexuality to get what she wants – and she’s always looking for her next conquest. Think Fox in Wanted.

Sappho: The Self-Reliant

Sappho was considered to be “the tenth muse” by Plato. She’s known as the earliest female writer in the West, and she enjoyed a life of freedom and opportunity along with her fellow women of Lesbos. Unlike the other archetypes, this femme fatale is only dangerous because she seeks a different lifestyle than what’s considered “normal” by most. She’s ambitious and smart, and her main concern is living the life she wants and doing whatever she needs to do so. She’s as admired as she is considered a threat. Think Lydia Tar in Tar.  

What is a Femme Fatale

The Maltese Falcon (1941)

Origin of the Femme Fatale in Literature

The term "femme fatale" was coined in nineteenth-century French literature and she was presented as cold-hearted, deceitful, and violent, often using her powers of seduction as a means to destroy her enemies. A famous example from that time is John Keats’ La Belle Dame Sans Merci, who puts men in her "thrall" by luring them into her arms. 

However, the femme fatale archetype was used in stories way before the nineteenth century, appearing as early as Homer’s Odyssey as the character Circe. Other examples of the femme fatale in literature include Salome in the play of the same name by Oscar Wilde as well as Lady Audley in Lady Audley’s Secret and Brigid O’Shaughnessy in The Maltese Falcon.  

Read More: The Good Genre Guide: Noir

What is a femme fatale character?

Gilda (1946)

Rise in Popularity in Cinema (Film Noir)

The femme fatale archetype that we are most familiar with was made famous in film noir from the 1930s to the 1950s. Think Barbara Stanwyck in Double Indemnity, Rita Hayworth in Gilda, and Lana Turner in The Postman Always Rings Twice. In these movies, the femme fatale characters use their sexuality as a form of power over the man in order to get what they want no matter the consequences. Naturally, femme fatales were labeled “no good” for weaponizing their beauty and sexuality. These were women who were often always unmarried and single, who took a wrong turn somewhere in life and were quickly treated as outcasts from society as a result. Back then, the only way a femme fatale could be redeemed for her wily ways was if she claimed innocence or loyalty to her male protagonist and professed her true love, or she was promptly destroyed by jail time or her own death. 

Many people at this time (read: men) feared the strength these alluring women possessed, thus the intention of the femme fatale archetype in early Hollywood was to send a message to the masses: women needed to be married and stay home or else they might use their sexuality to their advantage and then what? Well, the world might just lose its head.

What is a Femme Fatale Character?

The Killers (1946)

Classic Femme Fatales Examples (1930s-50s)

  • Double Indemnity (Phyllis)
  • The Postman Always Rings Twice (Cora)
  • Gilda (Gilda)
  • Mildred Pierce (Veda)
  • The Killers (Kitty)
  • The Maltese Falcon (Brigid)
  • Scarlet Street (Kitty)
  • Detour (Vera)
  • Kiss Me Deadly (Christina & Lily)
What is a Femme Fatale Character?

Atomic Blonde (2017)

Modern Femme Fatales Examples (2000s-present)

    • Austin Powers (Vanessa Kensington)
    • Basic Instinct (Catherine Tramell)
    • Jennifer's Body (Jennifer Check)
    • Inception (Mal Cobb)
    • Gone Girl (Amy Dunne)
    • Atomic Blonde (Lorraine Broughton)
    • Promising Young Woman (Cassie Thomas)
    • L.A. Confidential (Lynn Bracken)
    • Blood Simple (Abby)
    • Blue Velvet (Dorothy Vallens)
    • Lost Highway (Alice)
    • Memento (Natalie)
    • Brick (Laura Dannon)
    • Black Swan (Nina Sayers and Lily)
    • Ex Machina (Ava)

How to Write a Femme Fatale

Read Scripts That Feature Femme Fatales

Want to write a great femme fatale character? Read scripts that have femme fatales! The Script Lab has a great Script Collection that features a ton of great modern femme fatale scripts, so head on over there, download them (for free!), and give them a read.

Get the Dialogue Right

Writing the femme fatale is a lesson in subtext. It’s not what she says, but how she says it. She’s telling you what she wants without telling you what she wants. It can be a great way to play with how you write a character’s assertion of power in a way that’s not as overt or obvious. Her power is rooted in her being, and not her doing. She’s also not afraid to let her wit and intelligence shine through. Don’t forget: she’s a master at wordplay and banter. 

Consider Making the Femme Fatale the Hero

The femme fatale is usually the nemesis or trickster but what if she’s the hero or the anti-hero of your screenplay? What if what she wants is for the good and how she goes about it (meaning using her seductive charms) is exactly right for who she is and the story? Think of Carey Mulligan’s character in Promising Young Woman. Whether you choose to have the femme fatale be a leading or supporting character, then consider giving her more depth with a clear motive and back story. Letting the audience have genuine empathy for your femme fatale is an interesting choice. 

Read More: How to Write an Awesome Female Protagonist

What If It’s Sexy and Powerful to Be Sexy and Powerful?

It's really hard to write characters that inspire, but what if you spin the tired trope on its head and celebrate the femme fatale’s sexuality? Make it that her inherent beauty, charm, and sexuality are something that’s admirable and respectable, and not reductive. Create complexities in her life but don’t let her sexuality be one of them. 

Go Deeper

This is true for all characters but the femme fatale perhaps deserves a deeper dive than most. Ask yourself who is this woman? A sexual woman is a fully formed woman. She has flaws and strengths like any other character. Look beyond the sultry facade and create a character that’s truly three-dimensional. Like Lydia Tar in Tar, what is truly important to this woman and what happens if her world comes tumbling around her?

Want to dig into more character archetypes? Check out 99 Archetypes and Stock Characters Screenwriters Can Mold!


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How William Friedkin's 'The Exorcist' Became a Haunting Landmark in Horror Film https://screencraft.org/blog/how-william-friedkins-the-exorcist-became-a-haunting-landmark-in-horror-film/ Wed, 09 Aug 2023 21:01:22 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=53879 William Friedkin’s 1973 The Exorcist remains one of the most influential and iconic horror films of all time, inspiring several sequels and even a television remake....

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William Friedkin’s 1973 The Exorcist remains one of the most influential and iconic horror films of all time, inspiring several sequels and even a television remake. But why? Admittedly, today's audiences aren't strangers to provocative stories, shocking cinematic violence and gore, and creative viral marketing, so why does The Exorcist so often get put at the top of the horror genre heap?

Well, in honor of the late William Friedkin, a truly genre-defining filmmaker who passed away on August 7, 2023, let's explore what many consider his ultimate masterpiece that defined his legacy — The Exorcist — and find out why it's been one of the most influential horror films of all time for the past five decades.

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What is The Exorcist About?

Based on William Peter Blatty’s 1971 novel (which was based on a true story), The Exorcist tells the story of actress Chris MacNeil and her 12-year-old daughter Regan who begins to exhibit strange behavior. After seeking help from doctors and psychologists once Regan's condition becomes worse, Chris ultimately decides to ask Father Damien Karras for help to decide what is wrong with her.

As the title of the film might suggest, Karras determines Regan is possessed by the Devil and reluctantly agrees to perform a dangerous exorcism with the help of an experienced priest and paleontologist, Father Lankester Merrin

Read More: 25 Films You Have to Watch If You're Writing a Horror Script

The Special Effects in The Exorcist Were Amazing

One of the most notable aspects of the production of The Exorcist is the special effects. You know what I'm talking about — the throat swelling, the pea soup vomiting, and, hello, that demonic voice!

All of these things were created completely in-camera. Utilizing low-tech methods, Friedkin and his team managed to create graphic special effects practically (that means without the help of CGI or anything computer generated). And they were so convincing that theater-goers fainted, vomited, and just up and abandoned their friends in their theater seats.

Let's take a look at some of the most iconic effects used in the film.

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Regan’s Spinning Head Effect

In order to achieve Regan’s upsetting 360-degree neck turn, Friedkin’s special effects team created a fiberglass mold of Blair’s head set atop a rubber dummy used for the body — a creative and pioneering method that has become the norm for special effects houses. The team even added moving eyes and "breath" to the dummy head to make it all more concincing. 

The Spider Walk

In one particularly disturbing scene early in the film, we begin to see clues that something is wrong with Regan when she walks backward down the stairs on her hands with a mouthful of blood — a scene that was originally omitted from the theatrical release and added in later for the extended director’s cut.

Regan’s spider walk down the stairs was originally achieved with wires to help the stunt actress — though in the director’s cut, CGI was used to really seal the deal. 

Some fans have claimed that Friedkin’s decision to omit the spider walk in the original release made more sense from a story perspective — a great example of “killing your darlings” or in this case, your terrifying demonic possession details.

Freezing Sets

To create the illusion of a cold environment, filmmakers today will add a character's breath in post-production. That's not how it was done on The Exorcist.

Instead, the special effects team brought in restaurant-style air conditioners to lower the temperature of the Exorcist set to forty degrees, which made the actors’ breath appear during paranormal scenes in the movie. These details made the atmosphere organic, believable, and almost sensory in realism. 

The Marketing Helped The Exorcist Sell Itself

In addition to disturbing effects and chilling aesthetics, the marketing and distribution team played on the religious subject matter of an exorcism by releasing the film on December 26th, right after Christmas, a major religious holiday. Religious groups protested — which the marketing team spun to extend their reach, luring audiences in with controversy. 

Read More: How to Write a Great Christmas Horror Movie

Rumors from the set were leaked to the public, providing free publicity and sparking curiosity about sets burning down, injuries, and even deaths during production. These marketing methods continue to be adopted by the industry to this day.

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Linda Blair and William Friedkin on the set of 'The Exorcist'

The Audience Experience Was First of Its Kind

Modern audiences are so desensitized to violence and gore that they often wonder why The Exorcist is considered the scariest movie of all time. However, keep in mind that The Exorcist was the first of its kind — a horror film that pushed every boundary of the genre (not to mention artistic norms). People were unprepared for the graphic imagery — the manipulations and helplessness of a Devil-possessed human body, the profanity coming out of the mouth of a child, the violence, and the broken-limbed scuttling spider walk. All of these things were new and truly shocking to people at the time. Now, you see worse in a red and trailer.

Read More: A Horror Writer's Responsibility: What to Consider When Writing Violence

viral video of audience reactions to the original theatrical release demonstrates just how affected people were in 1973. One police officer walked out of the theater and stated, “It’s something I never saw in my whole life. It’s something different, and I went to a lot of movies but I’ve never seen anything like this myself.” 

Theater owners hired security guards and extra staff to manage the hysterical audiences. People were vomiting in the aisles, fainting, and even reportedly experiencing medical emergencies like heart attacks and miscarriages. 

These experiences only added to the reputation and lore of The Exorcist. It's a film so scary you'll have a heart attack! It's so grotesque that you'll throw up into your popcorn. How could anyone, let alone horror fans, not go see it? How could a movie that prompted such a huge response from an entire movie-going generation not end up becoming so iconic?

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Despite a limited theatrical release in only 30 theaters, The Exorcist grossed $1.9 million in its first week ($13 million today), setting a box office record for R-rated horror films that went unchallenged until Stephen King’s It hit theaters in 2017, according to the Travel Channel. Ticket sales went on to more than $200 million, the equivalent of about $1.3 billion today. 

The Exorcist literally changed critical opinions of horror films, elevating them into respectable storytelling and paving the way for Academy Award-winning films like Rob Reiner's Misery (1990), Darren Aronofsky's Black Swan (2010), and Jordan Peele's Get Out (2017).

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William Friedkin on the set of 'The Exoricst'

While The French Connection dominated the Academy Awards — and earned William Friedkin an Oscar for Best Director — it is The Exorcist that will keep his name alive. He had the creative vision — and the audacity — to truly shock people with a creepy story based on true events, as well as the brilliance to work with a team that could bring that vision to life with inventive effects and provocative story structure.

What could have been otherwise campy or underwhelming, in Friedkin’s hands, became what The New York Times called “a cinematic study of evil at work in the modern world.”


Shannon CorbeilShannon Corbeil is a writer, actor, and U.S. Air Force veteran in Los Angeles with appearances on SEAL Team and The Rookie. She was also a 2023 DGE TV Writing Program Finalist, and her screenplays have placed in various contests. You can read more about her on her website or come play on Instagram and Twitter!

 

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2023 ScreenCraft Feature Competition Semifinalists https://screencraft.org/blog/2023-screencraft-feature-competition-semifinalists/ Wed, 09 Aug 2023 17:00:00 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=53871 Listed below are the Semifinalists of the 2023 ScreenCraft Feature Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 2,000 submissions. Congratulations to these writers! Stay...

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Listed below are the Semifinalists of the 2023 ScreenCraft Feature Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 2,000 submissions. Congratulations to these writers!

Stay tuned for the Finalist announcement on September 13th on our blog and on our Twitter, Facebook, and Instagram pages! And if you’d like to receive a notification when this contest re-opens for entries, you can subscribe for updates via Coverfly here.

Here are the Semifinalists:

A Daughter, Wading Calais Bird
Altered Zach Bandler
An Accident Wei Liu
Any Other World Ben Pickles
Armadillogeddon Brian Koukol
Au Revoir Floris Driebergen
Becoming Ptah Nathan Hirschaut
Big Girls Jackie Akiko Cloud
Blinky Allan Roberts
Bloodbath Patrick Tierney
Blue Moon Taylor Ghrist
By the Sea Vanita Flanagan
CARDBOARD Juice Caballero
CASKET GIRL John Darbonne
Cassandra J Rainsnow
Cast List Connor Smith
CHARISMA Dallas Faulkner
Cling AARON WARNER
CLOISTER Kevin Kinsella
Cutthroat Michael Learner
Defensas Reynaldo Leal
Detroit Run Odin Ozdil
DIGNITY Dean Poynor
Eastern Son Y.S. Kim
Electric Road M. K. Ching
Fissure Spencer Slovic
FORCED: A Love Story Y.S. (Young-Sun) Kim
Good Boy Tom Castillo
Goodnight Nobody Carly Scanlon
Gratuity Truman Matheny
Gunslinger Tyler Geditz
HE HAS YOUR EYES Ryan Eicher
Hiamovi: Red Dog of the Prairie Allison Johnson
High Moon Isaac Ruth
How Not To Write a Romance Novel Suzy Stein, Fernando Perez
Human Resources Brett Caron
Human Stalk Nil Unerdem
Hysteria Amy Asbjørnsen
I Hold It True Joohun Lee
If I Could Turn Back Time James Love
Intern of the Year Scott Wagner
Internal Security Stefan Alexander
Inward Jolan Bastien
IVG Christopher Backs
Jabrat Peter Dawson
Jimmy Kent Moran
Knockoffs Christine Capone
Late Night With Dad Steve Mackall
Leonard Darrell McGregor
Margo & Perry Becca Roth
Midnight's Door Rocky Karri
Moon Flower Phil Reilly
Mother Mehreen Anna Khan
Mud, Dust, and Rain Chandler Berg
MUTATOR Daniel Diako
One-Eyed King Joe Bonito
Only Apparently Real Michael Richter
Other People Jordan Prosser
Out to Sea Timothy Despina Marshall
P.O.V. Nicholas Grant
PACIFIC OCEAN BLUE Chris Phillips
Philos Sophia B. R. LaPlant
Pursuing Piper Jennifer Ball
Pustka Edel Dmytro Oksamyt
Raiz Paris Herbert-Taylor
Red Knights Forever Dos Goats Films
Rent Boy R.W. Perkins
Saturn Return Mallory Sparks
Say Cheese Ryan Stanisz
Seasick Sailor Torre Catalano, Devon Bostick
Sexy Little Murder Alise Morales, Bailey Belzora
Shaka Emelie Svensson
Siren Alex Clark
Sleeping with Strangers Genie Leslie
SOLICE George Basiev
Sovereign Citizen Trent Johnson
Star Power Siobhan McCarthy
SUDDEN DEAD Frank Tremblay
The Brockton Brawler Timothy Driscoll
The Children of Lilith Siobhan Finkielman
The Cockfighter Andrew Case
THE DEADHEAD Justin Ballheim
The Estranged Dylan James Amick
The Fear of the North Micah Ricke
The Gales of November Robert McDermott
THE GOLDEN CITY Michael Yuen
The Green House Zach Grossman
The Language Of Wolves Nan Schmid
The Light Of Venus kelly Beck-Byrnes
THE MANDRAKE OF MERRYWEATHER WOODS       Brad Starr
The Pact Vince Melocchi
The PareRat Trap Alicia Mooty
The Promised Letter Alexander Yakobovich
The Refugee Ibrahim Renno, Jennifer Black
The Screenplay Guilherme Viegas
The Tower Of Power Abdikadir Abdinasir
The Understudy Dan Aho
Twang of the Devil e.e. Thorsen
Unbecoming Melissa Alfredson
Vessel Sean Mogridge
What Money Can Buy Zachary Swickey
WRECKING SILENCE Samantha Franco
Wrightsborough Mahonri Stewart

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2023 ScreenCraft Sci-Fi & Fantasy Screenwriting Competition Semifinalists https://screencraft.org/blog/2023-screencraft-sci-fi-fantasy-screenwriting-competition-semifinalists/ Mon, 07 Aug 2023 17:00:33 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=53846 Listed below are the Semifinalists of the 2023 ScreenCraft Sci-Fi & Fantasy Screenwriting Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 1,300 submissions. Congratulations to...

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Listed below are the Semifinalists of the 2023 ScreenCraft Sci-Fi & Fantasy Screenwriting Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 1,300 submissions. Congratulations to these writers!

Stay tuned for the Finalist announcement on August 30th on our blog and on our Twitter, Facebook, and Instagram pages! And if you’d like to receive a notification when this contest re-opens for entries, you can subscribe for updates via Coverfly here.

Here are the Semifinalists:

A Glass Darkly Jonathan Talbert
Adrift Aaron Edwards
AFTER LIFE Cheeyang Ng
All That Is Seen and Unseen Laura Becker
Amerika Zaf Ayub
Anything You Can Do David Hailes
Ask Me For Anything Ariel Ehrlich
ASTOUNDING Amanda Kowalski
AUTOPILOT David Luz, J Randolph Harrison
Beau Rivage Logan Rees
Bigfoot Matthew J. Beier
Brother's Keeper David Zeltser, Joseph Greco
COMMON PEOPLE Jon Fletcher
CONTAINED Johnny Hartmann
Coy Dog Matthew Corley
Cross of Wotan Bradley Stryker
Death's Daughter Sunny Karnan
DRIFT Eva Konstantopoulos
Earthbound Bryce McLellan
From Above Ben Tedesco
Growth Casimir Nozkowski
Gun Clown Jax Ball
HAVEN Addie Manis, Bob Oltra
Hereditary Craig Berger
I Hold It True Joohun Lee
i, bogeyman Sean Steinberg
Instant Justice Dan Buckley
It's All Been Done Laura Becker
Liars Alicia Louzoun-Heisler
Like Earth Without the Problems           Anne Silke Czichos
Man-Made Ryan Cunningham
Matriarch Matt Hodgkinson
North Star Zach Grossman
Only Apparently Real Michael Richter
Out of This World Jeremy Pick
Pandora Jeff Bower
Point Nemo Alex Rivers
Positron+ Jud Cremata
Pulling Seedlings Eris Qian
RETRO Aaron Lindenthaler
Rim of the World Chris Knauer
SCÁTHACH: A SHADOW'S TALE Daniel McNaught
Scavenge Curt McCray, Kent McCray
Search Angela Treviño
Sequence Alex Britten
SHE Jonathan Klemke
Shentu Across the Ages Allen Wu
Sleeping Beauty Jonathan Uriel Lopez Cruz
Sleepless Beauty Cheryl Lodovico
Sole Mate Michael Apgar
Soul Hammer Allen Wu
Starfall Seda Anbarci
TAKEOVER Jace Serrano
The Cure Zander Grantham
THE DEADHEAD Justin Ballheim
The Ghost Door Laura Quimby
The Lights of Time Paul Ian Cross
The Return of the Last Dragon LaShawn Evans
The Shadow League C.J. Baer
The Tides Paul Del Gesso
Time Janitors Ryan Manns, Jocelyn Manns
To the Moon and Back Brea Cola Angelo
Trashy Chelsea Marshall
Universal Frequency Richard Krzemien
Vessel Sean Mogridge
VIENNA CALLING Renate Grassmugg
Zarmina's World Arturo Corces

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Script Apart: 'Mission Impossible' Screenwriter David Koepp Shares Keys to Success https://screencraft.org/blog/script-apart-mission-impossible-screenwriter-david-koepp-shares-keys-to-success/ Fri, 04 Aug 2023 16:21:16 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=53809 What does Spider-Man have in common with the velociraptors of Jurassic Park, IMF super-spy Ethan Hunt, and the world’s most famous fedora-wearing archeologist, Indiana Jones?...

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What does Spider-Man have in common with the velociraptors of Jurassic Park, IMF super-spy Ethan Hunt, and the world’s most famous fedora-wearing archeologist, Indiana Jones? The answer is David Koepp, the screenwriting legend who has penned tales for each of the above, across a career spanning 35 years and billions in box office receipts.

David recently came on my podcast Script Apart (sponsored by ScreenCraft) to revisit his 1996 espionage classic Mission: Impossible and reveal a bit about his creative process. Here are some of the major lessons I learned about screenwriting from our chat – listen to the full episode below for more…

Sometimes, Prose is the Place to Start

When you have a new idea for a story, sometimes you want your creativity to flow uninterrupted, without the distraction of things like formatting and page counts. This is why David often starts his screenplays in Word doc form, writing as if he were writing a novel rather than a blockbuster.

“I have what I think might be a movie idea, and start writing prose to try to understand my character,” he explains. “That’s just the quickest way to get things down initially.” Occasionally, he’ll continue in prose format – which is how his most recent page-turner Aurora was born. Other times, he’ll allow his early ideas for character and plot to marinate and bloom in novelistic paragraph after paragraph, before transposing into screenplay format at a later date. 

Write Fast and Get to the End

Momentum is important when writing. David believes you shouldn’t stop to worry about what’s working and instead endeavor to get to the end of your draft as swiftly as possible. “I move through each draft pretty quickly because I feel like you get into this state of concentration,” reveals the 59-year-old, who insists that the best way to see what is and isn’t firing in your screenplay is to power through to the end and evaluate it in the context of a finished draft.

“You want to just execute it and have it done, so you can then go back and read it to see what's lacking. Some days you'll write seven or eight pages that you just cut the next day because you're finding the story. It’s part of the process.”

Read More: Screenwriting Insights from Jurassic Park Screenwriter David Koepp

Script Apart: 'Mission Impossible' Screenwriter David Koepp Shares Keys to Success

Emmanuelle Beart and Tom Cruise in 'Mission: Impossible' (1995)

Don’t Be Scared If Your Middle Act is Murder

“The second act is always awful,” laughs David Koepp. “Anyone who's writing a screenplay can tell you: it's terrible. There's nothing worse than pages 48-60. Who doesn't like the beginning of the story? When you can set up that there’s this guy and all his friends are killed. That’s exciting. People are leaning forward already. You know that you like good to prevail and evil to be punished so you may already have an ending in your head – a way to resolve.

But the middle — keeping the flow right, stopping it from becoming boring or repetitive — that's all very difficult.” If you’re struggling with your middle act, you’re not alone – write the nuts and bolts of what needs to happen to connect your beginning and end, then patiently work at this section in draft after draft till you have a version that feels right.

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Al HornerAl Horner is a London-based journalist, screenwriter and presenter. His work has appeared in The Guardian, Empire Magazine, GQ, BBC, Little White Lies, TIME Magazine and more.

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How to Write a Great Christmas Horror Movie https://screencraft.org/blog/how-to-write-a-great-christmas-horror-movie/ Fri, 04 Aug 2023 12:46:58 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=53792 Ah, the holidays. Hollywood has transformed the snowy season into a magical landscape for various stories such as those 1990s family flicks, cheesy Hallmark rom-coms,...

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Ah, the holidays. Hollywood has transformed the snowy season into a magical landscape for various stories such as those 1990s family flicks, cheesy Hallmark rom-coms, and some of the most celebrated adventure stories of all time. That said, there’s another genre that gets plenty of attention during Christmastime: Horror. As some films develop the unadulterated image of a winter wonderland, others use the biting cold, the otherworldly quiet of Christmas Eve, or even creatures of legend to fuel terrifying stories onscreen. If you’re planning to write a Christmas horror movie, here are a few conventions you must remember if you want your nightmarish creation to thrive in the season of cheer and merriment.

How to Write a Great Christmas Horror Movie

'Silent Night' (2021)

Remember the Setting

Any setting should become its own character of sorts, including the holiday season when used properly. When it’s Christmastime in your quaint little town beset by a serial murderer, you should at least acknowledge that consistently throughout the film. Wherever you start, make sure the setting fills the world. Whether it’s a chilling carol from the streets to set the mood, entrails wrapped around the Christmas tree, or a cold night filled with snow, isolation, and silence, each needs to become the world. When thinking about your setting, ask yourself this: “Would my story happen the exact same way if it was a different time of year, a different setting?” If the answer is “yes,” take a moment to brainstorm how to better incorporate the Christmas setting into your narrative. Steeped in traditions, imagery and even sounds expected by your audience, this season is well known and you must play on those expectations. And the more familiar the audience feels with a setting, the more upsetting and disturbing it is to see that setting ravaged by horrors.

Read More: 3 Low Budget Movies to Inspire Your Horror Screenplay

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Sint (2010)

Get Specific

Horror tends to see two extremes in the industry: films that provide cookie-cutter killer stories (be it alien visitations, demon possessions, or mundane murders) and flicks that go hog-wild with a unique concept or spin premise. The best Christmas horror movies belong to that second group. That said, not everything needs to be extreme. 

For example, while Gremlins and Sint (the 2010 Dutch dark comedy horror film) do their own thing, Black Christmas arguably does not have a remarkably unique concept. But how is Black Christmas hailed by most as the best Christmas horror movie of all time? For one thing, it was the most revolutionary Christmas horror movie of its time, breaking boundaries that had never been broken in theaters before. 

The other thing was its specific filmic language: it delved into the idea of voyeurism so deeply and so intimately that it became a disturbing exemplar for the subgenre of killer POV horrors. This was so profound, in fact, that the same filmic language was adopted by none other than John Carpenter four years after this movie, where he used it to great effect in Halloween (1978). Bob Clark’s dedication to that specific feature of visual storytelling (among other directorial trademarks he uses) was significant enough to propel it into the zeitgeist as it inspired Carpenter to employ the same idea.

Don’t Take Things Too Seriously

The best examples of killers ravaging the holiday season come from a bit of self-awareness that ranges from the darkest and most chilling spectacles such as Black Christmas to campy flicks with very ironic or comedic shticks (e.g., 1997’s Jack Frost). You may, for example, make garish references to other Christmas films. Consider movies like Better Watch Out, whose callbacks to Home Alone are significant enough to warrant notice. Still, other films use more levity when sharing that self-awareness with their audiences. After all, how would the anthology of A Christmas Horror Story come together without disc jockey Bill Shatner? What would Gremlins be without fun, ridiculous devastation or its parody of the monster movie subgenre?

Read More: Want to Get Noticed in Hollywood? Write Horror

Some General Rules in Horror

There are some rules that horror films benefit from in general. Not every horror flick will use the rules the same way. Still, you should keep these in mind while crafting your story about death, danger and demented gingerbread:

Maintain Tension (or the Illusion of Tension)

There are always going to be slow burns. Not every story can scare the audience every 10 minutes, but you do need to think about how the tension will mount and maintain its gravity throughout the story. For something like Dead of Night (1945), there’s an element of mystery to drive that tension. Movies like The Leech also take a slower approach, delving into character more than the action in ways that pay off later on. All that said, some serial killers or satanic Santas engage in an ultimate slay-fest that feels almost thriller-like, as they more consistently up the ante. Whichever way you set it up, horrors require that tension to set the audience on edge and get them primed for shock, fright, or utter disgust.

Read More: 25 Films You Have to Watch If You're Writing a Horror Script

Pay Attention to Your Characters

Any successful story — even one when the characters start to die off — requires an emotional connection with the characters in question. You need to prioritize the exploration of these people in your narrative to make them three-dimensional: Give them flaws and conflicting traits that feel realistic. As you do this and apply motivations to their actions (apart from the prevailing goal to “stay alive”), you’ll start to see your characters take unique shapes. This, more than anything, creates a story that feels very much your own, despite how similar your murderous Christmas tale might be to others on the docket.

Read More: What Makes a Killer Horror Movie? Common Horror Character Archetypes

How to write a great Christmas horror movie

Gremlins (1984)

Have Your Own Rules

Again, every tale of terror differs from others. You may choose not to follow every rule, and you may choose a different direction from most successful horror flicks. That said, you need to keep a consistent internal logic for your story. For example, Christmas horror movies like The Advent Calendar and Gremlins explicitly set up rules to follow. Failure to follow them results in danger or death. Other movies, like Krampus (2015) offer themes throughout that get reinforced as the subtle “rules” of the story. Whether implicit or stated outright, this internal logic will determine success in the horror genre, no matter which other guidelines you follow. When you create expectations, they need to pay off — and if you do it right, a horror will pay off those setups in ways the audience didn’t expect or even want. After all, upended catharsis is what the horror genre is all about!

It’s important to remember no two films are the same, nor should they be. Instead, you need to remember the needs of your story. Is it a character-driven psychological horror, or an intense Santa-stricken gore-fest? Those two flicks require different approaches to structure, tone and characterization. That said, you can use some general rules like those above to guide your story. As you do, you’ll discover methods of making your screenplay stronger and getting your ideas to stand out. Keep these in mind, and you’ll be scaring the pants off the holiday crowd in no time.

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America Ferrera's Glorious 'Barbie' Monologue Explained https://screencraft.org/blog/america-ferreras-glorious-barbie-monologue-explained/ Wed, 02 Aug 2023 19:11:14 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=53774 Usually, monologues are frowned upon in movies. If they are included in a script, they often end up on the cutting room floor because screen...

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Usually, monologues are frowned upon in movies. If they are included in a script, they often end up on the cutting room floor because screen time is just so precious. But the famous Barbie monologue, delivered by Gloria (America Ferrera) in Act 3, resonates so powerfully that audiences are both emotional and empowered!

While the monologue (from the screenplay written by Greta Gerwig and Noah Baumbach, with input from Ferrera) feels like the unexpressed voice of millions of women, it also pulls various elements of the story together in a coherent, strategic way: theme: check. Spine of the film: check. Empowering message: check. Rally cry for the protagonist: double check!!

Let’s take a look at the Barbie monologue and explore how a well-crafted monologue can drive the narrative forward and sharpen a story.

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Theme vs. Spine

Most of us know what theme is (that thing we had to write essays about in high school when we read books like Catcher in the Rye), it’s basically the underlying message or reason why the story is being told. Most movies have multiple themes and they are usually presented either as a statement to be disproved or a question to be answered.  

In Barbie, some of the themes include self-acceptance, unrealistic expectations, idealized femininity, male vs. female roles in society, and consumerism to name a few. These themes are most clearly expressed when Barbie leaves Barbie Land, goes to the Real World, and heartbreakingly discovers that men rule society (unlike Barbie Land) and most girls shockingly abandon their Barbie dolls at a young age, making Barbie irrelevant to teen and adult women.   

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'Barbie' (2023)

The spine of a screenplay, however, is the central narrative that drives the plot and the characters' actions. Think of the spine as the essential backbone that connects all the main events and actions of the characters as they explore and question the theme. 

The spine of Barbie is Barbie’s journey to the real world to solve the mystery of why she’s malfunctioning. Dolls aren’t supposed to think about death, so something must be really wrong with Barbie! She thinks that if she can solve that mystery, her fallen arches (and her happiness) will return to their normal state. What she’s not expecting is how difficult and confounding the journey will be – especially to an outsider like her. 

The Character Gloria 

Gloria is a major ally for Barbie when she gets to the Real World. Gloria serves as a tour guide, helping Barbie navigate this foreign land. Gloria not only works for Mattel (Barbie’s creator) and has that inside knowledge, but she’s also a single mom whose own daughter has given up on Barbie dolls, amplifying the rift between mother and daughter. If Gloria can solve Barbie’s problem (i.e.: Barbie’s malfunction), she can solve her own problem with her daughter (i.e.: their relationship malfunction). This makes Gloria’s character the spine of the film personified. 

Gloria’s Monologue

Gloria’s monologue not only hits at the heart of what modern women experience in society today, but it also serves as a battle cry for Barbie. Now in Act 3, Barbie feels defeated because she’s unable to discover the source of her malfunctioning – it’s her “All is lost” moment. She feels doomed to live the life of an unhappy plastic toy forever and never know the beauty and mystery of the human world. But Gloria’s monologue may offer Barbie a light at the end of the tunnel.  

Let’s Look At The Opening of the Monologue 

“It is literally impossible to be a woman. You are so beautiful and so smart, and it kills me that you don't think you're good enough. Like, we have to always be extraordinary, but somehow we're always doing it wrong.” 

Though this doesn’t provide a clear answer to Barbie’s issue of why she’s malfunctioning, it does help her to understand the unfair, prejudiced battle she is fighting. The expectations of real women are totally unrealistic, just like those of a Barbie doll. Finally, some common ground and a clear expression of one of the film’s main themes.

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'Barbie' (2023)

Gloria Goes on to Say:

“You have to be thin, but not too thin. And you can never say you want to be thin. You have to say you want to be healthy, but also you have to be thin. You have to have money, but you can't ask for money because that's crass. You have to be a boss, but you can't be mean. You have to lead, but you can't squash other people's ideas. You're supposed to love being a mother but don't talk about your kids all the damn time. You have to be a career woman but also always be looking out for other people. You have to answer for men's bad behavior, which is insane, but if you point that out, you're accused of complaining. You're supposed to stay pretty for men, but not so pretty that you tempt them too much or that you threaten other women because you're supposed to be a part of the sisterhood. But always stand out and always be grateful. But never forget that the system is rigged. So find a way to acknowledge that but also always be grateful. You have to never get old, never be rude, never show off, never be selfish, never fall down, never fail, never show fear, never get out of line.”

Gloria’s frustration and honesty about all the contradictions women face helps Barbie start to understand that women are expected to walk a tightrope between their real selves and who society thinks they should be. However, this is a tightrope where the walker is doomed to fall off! This is a clear expression of the spine of the film and Barbie’s journey. 

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'Barbie' (2023)

Gloria Continues: 

“It's too hard! It's too contradictory and nobody gives you a medal or says thank you! And it turns out in fact that not only are you doing everything wrong, but also everything is your fault.” 

Ding! That’s exactly what Barbie’s been feeling but didn’t know how to express it! She starts to feel inspired as Gloria sums it all up.  

“I'm just so tired of watching myself and every single other woman tie herself into knots so that people will like us. And if all of that is also true for a doll just representing women, then I don't even know.”

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America Ferrera in 'Barbie' (2023)

This is the battle cry with the answer Barbie’s been searching for: stop worrying if other people like you because you cannot live up to other people’s expectations. You must accept your true self, flaws and all, despite all the twisted messages society sends you. This is easier said than done of course, but it’s the only way to get through human life. 

This truthful, heartfelt monologue causes Barbie to snap out of her gloomy state of mind to see the reality of the situation and discover the solution. They must find the courage to fight unrealistic expectations, stand up to patriarchy and commercialism, and live their authentic, flat-footed lives. 

Once the monologue is delivered, Barbie and Gloria can team up to help the other brainwashed Barbies escape the male-dominated world Ken has brought to Barbie Land and discover their own authentic selves. 

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'Barbie' (2023)

How To Use Monologues in Your Script

This monologue is a tool that allows the main characters (Barbie and Gloria) to find a resolution to their big problems and arc or change. As a screenwriter, determine which character represents the spine of your film and experiment with giving them a third-act monologue. Ask yourself: how does the monologue affect my protagonist? How does it change their trajectory? How does it clear the path to victory? 

Monologues don’t have to be put in the third act, they can occur anywhere in the screenplay, but they usually come at an emotional turning point before a plot turning point. The monologue should clarify a character’s feelings to the audience and set in motion the character’s next moves. 

Read More: How to Write Memorable and Compelling Monologues

Bottom Line

You may not have room in your screenplay for such a lengthy speech in your script, but just the act of writing the monologue may clarify and focus the story in your own head. 

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2023 ScreenCraft Action & Adventure Screenplay Competition Quarterfinalists https://screencraft.org/blog/2023-screencraft-action-adventure-screenplay-competition-quarterfinalists/ Wed, 02 Aug 2023 17:00:00 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=53766 Listed below are the Quarterfinalists of the 2023 ScreenCraft Action & Adventure Screenplay Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 700 submissions. Congratulations to...

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Listed below are the Quarterfinalists of the 2023 ScreenCraft Action & Adventure Screenplay Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 700 submissions. Congratulations to the writers who have made it this far and thanks to all for submitting!

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Here are the Quarterfinalists:

50/50 K/O Joshua Nicolás Prits
A DANGEROUS WORLD OF POSSIBILITIES Phillip Hardy
A Kind of Guilt john cooney
A TO B DT Yang
After Power Vinnie Mancuso
All That Is Seen and Unseen Laura Becker
Almost Cuban Trevor Bermudez
ASSASSINS David Meister
ATHOR Brian Streaty, Paul Rose
ATLANTEANS Mark Abriel
Away From All Suns Rian McNamara
Bailout Over Normandy Madeleine Fahrenwald, Maria Maiella
Bait and Switch Ray Keller, Richard Schmidt
Bitking Oscar Garcia
Black Butterfly Tim Kontje
Blackstone Jess and the Island of the Warshadows Michael Hahn
Blitzkrieg Follies Devin Toohey, Brian Whitaker
Blood Trigger Ron Podell
BLOTTER HF Crum
Blowback Eric Murphy
Bodyguard Z Lee Whittaker, Kara Myers
Caper Graham Nelson
Cate Starr Vs The Giant Space Squid Holden Weihs
CHAMP Joel Jensen
CHASE AND GHOSTS Stephen Knox
Christopher Pan James Yantko
Citizen Eric Kallevig
City on the Edge Stephen Yaffe, Barbara Vaccaro
Contained Jennifer Wilton
Cross Path Przemyslaw Lukasik
Daddy Daughter Day Ethan Chapman, Nathan Cox
Dead Water Lisa Rysinger
Desert Belles Candace Egan
DETONATOR Donn Kennedy
Detroit Run Odin Ozdil
Día de las Carpas Marina Kato
Dracula: World at War Jeff Dorer
DRY LIGHTNING Christopher Barranti
DTA Alex Kochetkov
East Jesus Duane Graves
El MATADOR Thomas Oliver Hand
Emery & Ellsworth Make a Picture Madi Stine
Episode Six Joe Amadon
ESCAPE FROM EDEN Bob Graham, Kate Quillan-Graham
Eyes of Fate Catherine Wright
Fightanic Jacob Serlen
Flight to Freedom Jeff Nowak
Fools' Errand Eric Sandefur
FORCED TO KILL James Lakas
Fright Masks Stephen Polakiewicz
GARDENIA Eva Swan
Genesis Home Matthew Kelcourse
Ghost Mamba Michael Dzurak
Good Company Trevor Benoit, Robert Benoit
Guardian of Rome Jakob Vestergaard
HEARTRACE Will Bermender
Helping The Dead Ron Mondz
Henchmen Zachary Tomlinson
Heroes and Villains Timothy Burgess, John Burgess
His Horse is Crazy Sven Anarki
History Emergent: Janus Nasim and the Identity Crisis Part 1      Kyle Moser
How The Brooks Saved Christmas Parker Starnes
Identities Bruno Lyra
In Vain Jake Nordby
International Incident Johnny Fairchild, Jared Pettit
Into The Ether Steve Brown, Robert Rogers
INTO THE WEST Matthew Dixon
Island Kingdom: "Surf Enforcers" Hiroshi Mori
Jacked Pablo Briz
Jumpstart Brady Pierce
Just A Game Paul DeStefano
KILL SCHOOL Katrina Skender
King of Pain David Page
LIFELINK Johnny Gilligan
Lost Knife Sam Lu
Lost Souls Jeremiah Granden
Lure Tom Castillo
MAGE Daniel Corrieri
Magnitude Douglas Charles Macleod
Manual Override Ryan Sterrenberg
Marco Polo David Dodson
Meek Talisa Chang
Mexican Overdrive Paul Fenn
MIDDLE AGED Mark Griffin
Mientras Cae el Sol II Trenton Bouie
Mods Tom Moriarty
Mokabi Hunter Charlotte Zielinski
Moon Flower Phil Reilly
No Greater Sin Joe Favalaro
OCHO Adam Best
Operation Babylift John Mccarney
Orion M. Lloyd Cui
Paradise Divide Richard Curtis
Patriots and Tyrants: Graveyard of Empires Jack Gorman, Shannon Walsh
Phantom in Time Douglas Charles Macleod
Phoenix Lee Lawson
PIKERS Aaron Patton
Plague Walkers Heather Wilk, Michael McIlraith
Point Blank Range Bill Kelman
PRISONERS OF THE RISING SUN Mark Arament
Prospero's Island, Pilot: "The Duke of Milan" Mahonri Stewart
Queen for a Day Andrew Parker
Re:Collection Jake Fogel
Reckoning Road Joshua Weeks
SALT MINE MAYHEM Elizabeth Weigandt
SEAL Team '76 Takeo Hori
Shadow Walkers Aashish Gadhvi
Sisters Incarcerated Alexis Rosas
Six Sabotage Jeff Edwards, Rob Jaeger
Smoke Erik Cardona
Sol Horizon Autumn Cavender
Soldiers of Martial Law Alex Tackett
Stopping Power Andrew Jenner
Stray Dog Caleb Ellis
Strength Beneath the Surface Dallas Stiles
Superlame Darren Moran
SYZYGY Samantha Erickson
Ten Cent Beer Night Nick Hawks
Tender Trina Colon
The 10th Rudi O'Meara
The 7 Steve Ronaldson
THE APPLICANTS Justin Ballheim
The Before Trilogy The Rhees
The Biologist Alex Lyras
The Book of Raquel Olga Holtz
The Code David Asmussen
THE DEADHEAD Justin Ballheim
The Devil, a Rebel, a Fool Clay Fusco
The Double Life MARY WORKMAN
The Handler 1 - Junkyard Dog Lawrence Whitener
The Heat Ben Carter Olcott
The Heroine of Wrangel Island Aaron Michael Bailey
THE HOUDINIS Ron Mondz
The Kill Box Andrew Jenner
The Lamb John Ingle
The Language Of Wolves Nan Schmid
The Last Gate Pilot Nikhil Emmadi, Mark Dudley
The Last Soul Manuel Cantu
The Last Travelers Darrell McGregor
The Left Hand of The West Omar Iturriaga
THE LOST AND THE ROTTEN: PART ONE Ryan Chong
THE MATCH Justin Ballheim
The One Percent Ray Keller, Richard Schmidt
The One They Call the Fighter Joshua Scammell
The Out Foxes Luigi Gonzalez
The Pale Horse Kyle Rizor
The Paleontologist Ross Peacock
The Place We Stand Together Catherine Wright
THE ROMMEL GAMBIT John Doble
The Runner Debra Equassance
The Savage World Tom Moriarty
The Savant Tom Moriarty
The Taking of North Pole 1-2-3 Robert Husted
The Tribe Erik Leifson
The Wages of Sin Byron James, Stephen Johns
TOW TRUCK Jud Cremata
Treasure Hunters Peter Bucke
Triggered Elliot Seidel
Trophies Peter Van Horne
TURQUOISE MOUNTAIN Diane Joy Schmidt
Two Lane Forever Andrew Jenner
Unlikely Stars Donald Dugan
Unscathed Rebecca Lieberman
Vampires of the Amazon T.J. Hamilton
VANILLA John Darbonne
Vigilant Abhi Kumar
VOLANTINO Russ Eisenman
Wasteland Britannia Aaron Hector
Where They're Kept L.X Mitev
Yi Hao and the Wild West Eljohn Macaranas

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What is Prose? https://screencraft.org/blog/what-is-prose/ Mon, 31 Jul 2023 19:25:51 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=53752 Sometimes to understand what something is, we have to first look at what it isn’t. Though the stanza below describes writing prose, the lines have...

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Sometimes to understand what something is, we have to first look at what it isn’t. Though the stanza below describes writing prose, the lines have been structured in rhymed couplets, better known as a poem. A bad poem, I agree, it’s flowery and verbose (tedious even?), but it is the opposite of prose. This poem is also an example of why poetry isn’t the best vehicle for learning. 

To explore writing, prose is the most popular, it's true

For readers, it’s accessible and easy to view

In its flowing lines, stories unfold

No mental rigors, its tale is told

With ease, the meaning of prose is understood

A canvas for ideas, as it should

So, what is prose? Let's dig into this type of writing and find out how you can harness it to write better stories.

So, What is Prose?

Prose simply means ordinary language without a formal structure or metrical pattern. No stanzas, no rhymed couplets. Certainly, nothing resembling Shakespeare’s sonnets with their metered, rhythmic verses. Prose is what you might read in your favorite novels, short stories, essays, news articles, blog posts, and many other forms of narrative writing – especially for storytelling.

Prose is the most common way to tell a story because it uses the same plain language most of us use every day. Prose allows for a more natural and fluid expression of ideas and it follows the conventional rules of grammar, using clear and coherent sentences. 

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Why Write in Prose?

Prose allows a writer to say exactly what they are thinking without relying on fancy wordplay, artifice, rhythm, or rhyme. Communication is clear and easy to understand especially since there are no restrictions or limits on the number of words, sentences, or paragraphs a writer can use. Prose is like having a green light for whatever you want to write.

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Prose Allows a Writer To Create and Express Tone

Whether you’re writing a nostalgic, wistful memoir, a news article about a political underdog or an epic novel about the Crimean War, good writing establishes tone from the opening paragraph. Let’s look at the opening of one of Charles Dickens’ most famous stories - A Christmas Carol – and how it clearly establishes tone

“Marley was dead, to begin with. There is no doubt whatsoever about that. The register of his burial was signed by the clergyman, the clerk, the undertaker, and the chief mourner. Scrooge signed it. And Scrooge's name was good upon 'Change for anything he chose to put his hand to. Old Marley was as dead as a doornail.”

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The opening sentence mentions that someone has died. Dickens goes on to mention a “clergyman,” “undertaker” and “chief mourner.” The inclusion of death and the people associated with death help to signal to the reader that this will be a story of death, its consequences and the serious nature of such events preparing the reader for those subjects. Though he doesn’t mention ghosts up front, any story about death holds the possibility of a haunting. Dickens uses prose to ensure the reader is clear about the death of “Old Marley.” If that isn’t clearly stated up front, the rest of the story won’t make a lot of sense. By calling Marley “Old” we also accept that it was his time to pass and we don’t need to feel terribly sad about his passing. 

Is Screenwriting Prose? 

No, screenwriting is not considered prose. The main reason is that screenplays are typically written in a specific format that adheres to film industry standards. These standards help to facilitate production and collaboration among filmmakers, actors, and designers. It also allows one written page to roughly equal one minute of screen time.

Screenplay Dialogue is Stylized

Another reason screenwriting is not considered prose is because dialogue has to be - at least minimally - stylized. It might seem strange that movie dialogue is stylized considering it’s supposed to sound like real people talking, but dialogue has several functions beyond just a character expressing their thoughts.

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Screenplay dialogue has to move the plot along with as few words as possible and often it must reveal exposition. Dialogue can do these same things in a novel, but there is no time or space restraint like there is in a screenplay. While screenwriting shares similarities with prose, it’s a distinct style of writing that is meant to be filmed and the dialogue spoken by actors for dramatic or comedic effect.

Comedy Has Its Own Style

Comedic dialogue often includes wisecracks, punchlines, wordplay, innuendo, and double-entendres. In prose, many characters often say funny things, too, but the funniest scenes in movies have their own rhythm and timing. We all remember the great Abbott and Costello bit, “Who’s On First?” It’s a prime example of witty, stylized dialogue that relies heavily on timing for comedic effect. 

Screenplay Dialogue Should Be Restrained

Okay, so if you’re Aaron Sorkin or Quentin Tarantino, you’re not too worried about containing or limiting your dialogue, but for most writers, it’s best for the dialogue to be streamlined. The characters need to say only what’s important and then you have to get out of the scene as soon as possible. 

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Bottom Line: There is Freedom in Prose

Prose can vary widely in style, tone, and purpose. It can be descriptive, narrative, persuasive, or analytical. Overall, prose is the main form of written expression, enabling writers to communicate, inform, entertain, and express themselves in clear and meaningful ways.

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2023 ScreenCraft Comedy Competition Finalists https://screencraft.org/blog/2023-screencraft-comedy-competition-finalists/ Wed, 26 Jul 2023 17:00:05 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=53733 Listed below are the Finalists of the 2023 ScreenCraft Comedy Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 2,300 submissions. Congratulations to the writers who...

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Listed below are the Finalists of the 2023 ScreenCraft Comedy Competition. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 2,300 submissions. Congratulations to the writers who have made it this far and thanks to all for submitting!

Stay tuned for the Winner announcement on August 16th on our blog and on our Twitter, Facebook, and Instagram pages! And if you’d like to receive a notification when this contest re-opens for entries, you can subscribe for updates via Coverfly here.

Here are the Finalists:

 

Beard ismail hysam
Brew Kimberly Dilts
Chosen Ryan Manns, Jocelyn Manns
Daddy Issues Justin Viar
Daphne and Althea Save Greece LeeAnn Patrick, Daniel Shinners
Down & Out Nick Madson
Eat Me Leslie Thomas
Fantasy Grace Marlowe
Hard Time Nick Pappas
I Told You So Brian "Crusty" Horgan
Lessons in Kissing Brazilian Boys Jenna St. John
Remix Sean Boring
Rock 'Til You Die Adam Allen
She's The Man Callie Waligora
Smallwood David Page
Talk Black Destiny Macon
The Bridal Party Ben Mansbridge
The Final Rose Jenna Lafferty
The Lift Rick Mallett
The Tabby Emily McGregor
Tonight Tonight Danny Wascou
Treasure, Inc. Ted Sperling
Tweener Kristina Sproat
Us Against The World(s) Ross Buran
Youtopia Danny Galvin, Brad Pike

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Hayao Miyazaki Says 'Ma' is an Essential Storytelling Tool https://screencraft.org/blog/hayao-miyazaki-says-ma-is-an-essential-storytelling-tool/ Wed, 26 Jul 2023 16:30:13 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=53607 Summer is the time for spectacular action flicks. Big explosions, heart-pounding car chases and over-the-top fight scenes fill the screen and audiences can’t seem to...

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Summer is the time for spectacular action flicks. Big explosions, heart-pounding car chases and over-the-top fight scenes fill the screen and audiences can’t seem to get enough. But not all movies thrive on loud, flashy and ostentatious action sequences. Sometimes, emotion and catharsis can come from stillness and silence on screen. One filmmaker who knows all about stillness and silence is renowned Japanese animator, Hayao Miyazaki. Famous for the Studio Ghibli movies, Miyazaki has mastered the Japanese concept of “Ma” to create a deeper, psychological experience. So what exactly is Ma and why does it affect an audience so deeply?

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What is "Ma"? 

In an interview with film critic Roger Ebert from 2002, Ebert tells Miyazaki he appreciates what he calls “gratuitous motion” in his films, adding that, “Instead of every movement being dictated by the story, sometimes people will just sit for a moment, or they will sigh, or look in a running stream, or do something extra, not to advance the story but only to give the sense of time and place and who they are,” said Ebert. 

Miyazaki answered with, “We have a word for that in Japanese," he said. "It's called Ma. Emptiness. It's there intentionally."

What is 'Ma' According to Hayao Miyazaki?

Spirited Away (2001)

Miyazaki then clapped his hands several times and said:

"The time in between my clapping is Ma. If you just have non-stop action with no breathing space at all, it's just busyness, But if you take a moment, then the tension building in the film can grow into a wider dimension. If you just have constant tension at 80 degrees all the time you just get numb."

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A Moment of Rest 

Using Ma allows the audience to reflect, imagine and interpret what is happening – not only visually, but emotionally. Instead of using dialogue to tell the audience how a character is feeling, Ma allows the audience to simply experience what the character is feeling along with them. 

Another way to think of Ma is like a gap, a pause, or a space between actions. In music, this pause is called a “rest” and balances the music with silence, which can have a very powerful effect by helping to build tension and suspense.

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Rests also help to create and maintain the rhythm for a piece of music, just as Ma helps to determine a rhythm in a story. Whenever there is a moment of silence or stillness in a movie or piece of music, the audience is able to prepare for the upcoming emotional or physical peak. 

Read More: WATCH: Domestic Trailer for Hayao Miyazaki's The Wind Rises

Ma in Spirited Away

In this famous scene from Spirited Away, Ten-year-old Chihiro Ogino takes a train ride with a masked spirit called No-Face as she contemplates the world around her. While the train is moving, Chihiro is almost completely still. This allows the audience to see what she is seeing (the outside world passing by) and feel what she is feeling (being just a small part of a big world). 

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Spirited Away (2001)

This scene is incredibly effective for several reasons. First, the music is just achingly beautiful and doesn’t overpower the images. The sounds of water around the train add a feeling of nature, adding to the smallness of the people who exist in the world. The color palette is pale and haunting, and the ghost has an ethereal, transparent quality. The other people on the train look like dark shadows, as if they might disappear in the night. At the end of the scene, the ripples in the water behind the train indicate a fleeting sense of purpose. The camera then zooms in on Chihiro’s face, making it clear we are still in her world as night falls and the train sputters away. Chihiro’s stillness juxtaposed with the moving train gives a sense of time and place that is unique to her character and absolutely gripping to watch. 

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Use of Ma in American Films

In American films, Ma can be seen in the way filmmakers use pauses, stillness and the timing of shots to create tension, atmosphere, and emotional impact. To create suspense, directors often use moments of silence or slow pacing to build anticipation and heighten the impact of a sudden event. 

Theme Music From Jaws 

In this scene from Jaws, the famous music goes, “Dun, dun,” then pauses before another “dun, dun,” as the lady swims in the dark and murky ocean. The music symbolizes the shark (or life’s hidden dangers) and the audience comes to associate danger and dread with the unnerving music that stops and starts.  

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The Whisper Scene in Lost in Translation

In dialogue-driven films, the use of pauses and silence between lines can add meaning and weight to the spoken words. But sometimes silence says more than any line of dialogue ever could. Writer/Director Sophia Coppola had a stroke of genius by not letting the audience hear what Bob (Bill Murray) whispers to Charlotte (Scarlett Johansson) in this scene. In fact, they are standing in the middle of a busy Tokyo street and all the street sounds have been subdued to give emphasis to the quiet emotional moment the characters are sharing. 

Mexican Standoff in Reservoir Dogs

Writer/director Quentin Tarantino is known for bold violence and witty dialogue in his films, so there’s no chance of traditional Ma making its way into his movies. Instead, this Mexican standoff serves as a restful moment where the characters pause the action to reassess the situation and come up with a plan for moving forward. The characters are literally just standing there, with no action taking place so the audience can prepare for the bloodbath that’s about to come. 

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While the traditional concept of Ma may not be widely used in American filmmaking, the idea of creating tension, balance, and meaning through the use of pauses, silence and stillness are certainly popular techniques seen in many movies and can trace their roots to the Japanese aesthetic of Ma. 

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How Oppenheimer Created a CGI-Free Atomic Blast https://screencraft.org/blog/how-oppenheimer-created-a-cgi-free-atomic-blast/ Mon, 24 Jul 2023 18:00:38 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=53661 No, it did not involve dropping an atomic bomb. Christopher Nolan piqued audiences' interest in his twelfth feature film, Oppenheimer, when he told Total Film...

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No, it did not involve dropping an atomic bomb.

Christopher Nolan piqued audiences' interest in his twelfth feature film, Oppenheimer, when he told Total Film that he had achieved the effect of detonating an atomic bomb without the use of CGI. This led to many fans jokingly saying that the British auteur with his eye on realism had somehow convinced Universal Pictures, the studio he worked with on Oppenheimer rather than Warner Bros., to purchase and blow up a real nuclear device in the middle of the desert to replicate the Trinity Test, the world's first atomic bomb explosion.

However, this wasn't the case—and isn't practical narrative filmmaking either. So how did Nolan create the bomb effect in Oppenheimer? Let's get into it.

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How Oppenheimer Pulls Off the Atomic Blast Effect

Special Effects Supervisor Scott R. Fisher, who has now worked with Nolan on the director’s previous films including Interstellar and Tenet, let Total Film peek behind the curtain to see how the larger-than-life visuals were created.

“It was definitely not as rigorous with day-to-day filming,” said Fisher. “[Nolan] said, ‘There’s not as much stuff for you on this as the other one, but there’s a couple of things we do have to cover. And that was, of course, the Trinity explosion, and some prop builds, and elements of different things that we had throughout the film.”

Nolan is famous for using practical effects in a world where most films use heavy CG to create larger-than-life effects. “I find CG rarely is able to grab you,” Nolan told Empire for their July issue. “It tends to feel safe. Even if it’s impressive and beautiful, it’s difficult to make you feel danger. And we were presenting the ultimate danger. We needed it to feel threatening, nasty, and frightening to the audience.”

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How Oppenheimer Created a CGI-Free Atomic Blast

Oppenheimer (2023)

Recreating the Trinity Test without CG was a huge challenge for Nolan to take on, which is why he brought Visual Supervisor Andrew Jackson on board early to find ways to create most of the visual elements, such as the quantum dynamics and quantum physics, of the test practically.

Nolan, Fisher, and his team found a way to create the practical effect by using an old Hollywood in-camera trick: forced perspective. Forced perspective is a technique that uses the space between your subjects to manipulate the viewer's perception of the space and distance between the two objects to create an optical illusion. One of the most famous examples of forced perspective in cinema is in The Lord of the Rings trilogy.

"We don't call them miniatures; we call them 'big-atures,'" he explained. "We do them as big as we possibly can, but we do reduce the scale so it's manageable. We get it closer to the camera, and do it as big as we can in the environment."

When it came to the explosion of the bomb, the intense blaze was “mostly” a combination of gasoline and propane “because you get so much bang for your buck,” Fisher said. Aluminum powder and magnesium were then added to the mixture to mimic the instant blinding flash that so many records recall of the nuclear blast. "We really wanted everyone to talk about that flash, that brightness. So, we tried to replicate that as much as we could."

But not every explosion is created equal. Nolan described the technique of creating the bombs used during filming as “very experimental” and ranging in size. "Some on a giant scale using explosives and magnesium flares and big, black powder explosions of petrol, whatever," Nolan said. "And then some absolutely tiny, using interactions of different particles, different oils, different liquids."

Director of Photography Hoyte Van Hoytema told Variety, "We created science experiments. We built aquariums with power in it. We dropped silver particles in it. We had molded metallic balloons which were lit up from the inside. We had things slamming and smashing into one another such as ping-pong balls, or just had objects spinning. We had long shutter speeds, short shutter speeds, wide negative color, negative overexposure, underexposure. It was like a giant playground for all of us."

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How Oppenheimer Created a CGI-Free Atomic Blast

'Oppenheimer' (2023)

How Do You Record Explosions on Film?

Nolan and Van Hoytema set out to make Oppenheimer on film and finished it on film. Using Kodak 35mm and 65mm on IMAX, the largest format available, Nolan and Hoytema captured some of the best-looking explosions in cinema history.

A deep depth of field is already necessary when working with the “big-atures,” which allows the camera to already be in the best settings to capture explosions. This protects the film from being overexposed by the intense flash of the explosions.

Now, you have to capture explosions that audiences can see. Explosions are quick, and the awe-stopping moment of the explosion can start and end within seconds. By adjusting the frame rate of the camera, the team can capture the explosions in slow motion.

Rumor had it that one of the cameras Nolan and Hoytema attempted to use was a Photo-Sonics 35mm 4C high-speed rotary prism camera, which is capable of 2,500 frames per second. However, if a shot requires a faster camera, then creatives must rely on a rotary prism camera. The Photo-Sonics 16mm E10 is one such camera that can capture up to 10,000 frames per second while still using film, making it a great solution for slowing down motion to a near standstill.

Unfortunately, the camera was unable to capture usable footage at such a high rate for a feature film. Instead, the cameras used on Oppenheimer maxed out at 150 fps. The pyro work on the film was done at a substantial scale due to the limits of in-camera magic.

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How Oppenheimer Created a CGI-Free Atomic Blast

Oppenheimer (2023)

While the close-ups of the fiery explosions that have been teased throughout the trailers of Oppenheimer are a hair-raising experience in themselves, the infamous mushroom cloud that the atomic bomb creates is a challenge that Christopher Nolan accepted without hesitation.

"The most obvious thing to do would be to do them all with computer graphics," the writer-director said. "But I knew that that was not going to achieve the sort of tactile, ragged, real nature of what I wanted. ... The goal was to have everything that appears in the film to be photographed. And have the computer used for what it's best for, which is compositing, and putting ideas together; taking out things you don't want; putting layers of things together."

Nolan is a filmmaker who is dedicated to pushing the boundaries of filmmaking, creating new technology with IMAX to present the brilliant complexities of Robert J. Oppenheimer in a way that presents the visual tones to the audience while entertaining them. The filmmaker is one who cares about the details, spending most of his pre-production time creating accurate depictions of atomic bombs and black holes in a way that serves the audiences and pushes filmmaking technology, all while keeping his cast and crew safe.

Oppenheimer is now in theaters.

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Showrunner Tze Chun on the Benefits of Bad Ideas and Nonsense https://screencraft.org/blog/showrunner-tze-chun-on-the-benefits-of-bad-ideas-and-nonsense/ Fri, 21 Jul 2023 13:00:48 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=53599 Grounded, self-reflective with the ability to be hard on himself and still push through, Tze Chun is a filmmaker who’s willing to fail. But after...

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Grounded, self-reflective with the ability to be hard on himself and still push through, Tze Chun is a filmmaker who’s willing to fail. But after that failure, he also has the strength to pick himself up and try again. Ultimately, he believes in his vision for a story and keeps fighting for it until he reaches his goal. 

Tze Chun’s been the showrunner for the recent MAX animated series Gremlins: Secrets of the Mogwai. He’s also written for such shows as Prime’s I’m a Virgo, Apple TV+’s Little America, Fox’s Gotham and ABC’s Once Upon a Time.  He spoke with ScreenCraft about his creative process, setting realistic expectations, and developing an awareness about oneself as a writer. 

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Passion – Combined with Persistence ­– Pays Off 

As a teen, Chun’s first love was comic books. After attempting to tell stories on the flat page, he says he was able to borrow a video camera from the AV department at his high school and borrow their editing deck. He transferred his love of drawing images to filming them, making a series of low-budget short films. When his short Windowbreaker got into Sundance in 2007, his career was off and running.   

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Knowing When an Idea Has Legs

We’ve all had that genius, creative spark of an idea only to sit down, begin writing and realize, maybe this isn’t a movie after all. Sometimes we may not have any ideas at all and feel like we’ll never have a great idea again – that’s when panic can set in. Chun knows both feelings all too well, but he has a solution. 

“What I do when that happens,” says Chun, “is I give myself permission to come up with bad ideas. I will sit down for a week, maybe two weeks and write out 10 ideas a day. It doesn’t matter if I get good or bad ideas and sometimes, I’ll only get 5.” 

Showrunner Tze Chun on the Benefits of Bad Ideas and Nonsense_Gremlins: Secrets of the Mogwai

'Gremlins: Secrets of the Mogwai'

He says the process of letting yourself come up with bad ideas can actually be fun and inform other good ideas by getting the bad ones out of your system. He keeps all his ideas – good and bad - in a Google doc that he can revisit and reassess at a later date. “It sounds clinical. But it’s better than sitting around not knowing what I’m going to write,” says Chun. 

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Dealing With Procrastination 

We’ve all been there. We finally have an idea we love but somehow, it’s easier to let it live in our head than on the page. This is when our apartment or closet gets super clean and organized because anything seems better than actually writing. But Chun has a method of dealing with the self-imposed delay.   

“When I started writing,” says Chun, “there was a procrastination element. But I knew I wanted to finish these projects. What I told myself was: of all the things that can happen today, the only way a script is not going to get done is if I don’t jump into it. Anything I do with the computer open is going to be moving me towards that goal.”

Showrunner Tze Chun on the Benefits of Bad Ideas and Nonsense_Gremlins: Secrets of the Mogwai

'Gremlins: Secrets of the Mogwai'

So just typing in a doc, brainstorming, coming up with character names – these are all ways to focus your mind on your story. 

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Break Large Tasks Down Into Small Tasks 

Chun says sometimes you just have to take baby steps because writing an entire script can be really daunting. His advice is to break it into small tasks. 

“When I come up with a movie idea or even a TV idea, I give myself permission to write 3 pages of just nonsense. Nothing that has to end up in the script – thoughts about character, theme, why am I interested in this story. What are some cool things you haven’t seen before that maybe could go into the script? I allow myself to just write a huge amount. I’m not going to write 120 pages, I’m going to write one page that tells the story – very generally. Then I’ll break that into a four-pager. If it’s a movie, every page is Act I, Act II a, Act II b and Act III. If it’s a TV show, then maybe I’ll split it up so that every ¾ of a page is an act. At that point it’s less daunting already.” 

 

Long Outlines Pay Off 

Most writers hate outlining but it’s a necessary evil if you don’t want to get lost in your second act – or anywhere else! Chun thinks spending time on a lengthy outline will help writers in the long run. 

Showrunner Tze Chun on the Benefits of Bad Ideas and Nonsense_Gremlins: Secrets of the Mogwai

'Gremlins: Secrets of the Mogwai'

“If it’s a movie, maybe I’ll write a 40-page outline. I know that’s overkill, but at the same time, I know that when I jump into writing the script - turning a 40-page outline into a script [will take] a week. But it might take 2 or 3 weeks to do a 40-page outline. TV is the same. I’ll probably do a 19-page outline for a 60-page script or a 10-page outline for a 30-page script,” Chun says. 

Putting everything into an outline will help structure the story and allow the writer to see the repercussions of each action more clearly. Story can be like Newton’s Laws of Motion – for every action there is an equal and opposite reaction, so putting each action and reaction into the outline can be really helpful. 

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Develop Your Own Writing Process

By now, says Chun, he’s very aware of the ups and downs of his own writing process. He’s developed a self-awareness around it so that he can trust it will lead to something great – even when it seems like nothing productive is happening. He explains:   

“Sometimes I have intense anxiety about whether I’m on the right track, but at the end of that anxiety, I have a good idea. So now I know that when I’m going through a really tough time, I know there’s something that’s going to happen. I have to allow that to happen, to feel all that anxiety and at the end of it, I’ll just be walking around and think, ‘Oh, that’s something I want to write.’ That was a hard lesson, because you’re in [the middle of] it,” he says.

Showrunner Tze Chun on the Benefits of Bad Ideas and Nonsense_Gremlins: Secrets of the Mogwai

'Gremlins: Secrets of the Mogwai'

Develop Self-Reliance 

So much of the film and TV industry is out of the writer’s control. The WGA strike is a good example. So, the more a writer can rely on themselves, the better off they will be. 

“Projects are short-term,” says Chun, “but you as a writer are a long-term project. You are somebody who is going to have to know themselves in a certain way because there’s a lot of stuff you can’t necessarily control about this industry. But if you can control an understanding of who you are and what you need in order to be productive, that’s a really important goal to set for yourself. It’s also just taking care of yourself because there’s a lot of stuff that can happen in the industry that can be really hard. You have to know yourself and the way that you deal with it so you can be healthy and productive.”

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Fall 2023 ScreenCraft Film Fund Second Rounders https://screencraft.org/blog/fall-2023-screencraft-film-fund-second-rounders/ Wed, 19 Jul 2023 22:16:10 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=53652 Listed below are the Second Rounders of the Fall 2023 ScreenCraft Film Fund. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 1,100 submissions. Congratulations to the...

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Listed below are the Second Rounders of the Fall 2023 ScreenCraft Film Fund. These exceptional screenplays were selected from almost 1,100 submissions. Congratulations to the writers who have made it this far and thanks to all for submitting!

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Here are the Second Rounders:

...And Before We're Condemned Gavin Fields
"The Riddle of the Doors" JOE HAWKINS
(True) North HF Crum
04:30 Russell Sharman
1 Star Review Simon Darkman
1000 Feet Down Ben Strang
113 Aladen Gulmohamad
2 Soles Ashlyn Forbes
3 Cold Dishes Asurf Oluseyi
8:46PM. Harriet Arrives. Aimiende Negbenebor Sela
97 Allyson Rice (I'm an Exec. Producer on the documentary)
A City in the Lev Omelchenko
A Gettysburg Haunting Rabia Bouchiba
A Sacred Piece of Home Amita Sarin
Abdo and Saneya Omar Bakry
Ada - My Mother the Architect Yael Melamede
Adult Conversation Hanani Taylor
After What Happened at the Library Kyle Casey Chu, Roisin Isner
Against The Current Jo Erickson , Kibwe Cooper
Ali 1978: The Butterfly's Last Dance Eddie Goines
All I Wanted To Say Was (그냥 보고싶었다고) Julie Shin
All the Beautiful Things A.M. Lewis
All The Little Things Joshua Chamberlain
All the small things Christian Sinclair Wolf, David Barton
Alone with you Adam Clark
Alterations Sean Wainsteim
America's Other Irish -- A Musical Journey Chris Moser
American Fallout Harry Kakatsakis
American Paragon Quinn Matthews
Anchored Noah Arjomand, Kate Soper
Antyesti Oz Go
Appetite Kevin Longa
As Easy As Closing Your Eyes Aaron Golden, Parker Croft
Ashes Stephanie Domini
Ashes Under The Sand Richard LePow
At First Light DARREN MARKEY
At the Right Decision Turn Left Alexandra Case
Awake Joshua Nicholas Moreno
Ayşegül on Tuesdays Amy Omar
Aysha Lauren Burgueno
Baby Daddy Road Trip Aubrey Reynolds
Baby Names Josh Sullivan
Baby's Breath Elijah Noble El
Bare Skin Mico Montes
Beej (Seed) Meghna Haldar
Bella Noche Antonina Kerguelen
Beware The Preacher Jannik Ohlendieck
Beware The Trojan Horse Tim Hewitt
Big Jim's- Pick Your Coffin Kelton Arcado, Connor Cooper
Black Canvas Stephen Reyes
Black Snow Alina Simone
Blackbelts Kan Muftic
Bleed - A Julie d’Aubigny Story Jim Onyemenam
Bloody Mary, Bloody Mary, Bloody Mary Emma Mueller
Bloom Seren Sensei
Boar Hunting Cortney Stowers
bOb Alberto Chumaceiro
Bob's Hops Agatha Whitechapel
Boxed Harry Baruch
Breakthrough AARON BEAR
Brown Babies Zaire Davis
Bum Next Door Irina Chernikina
Bumblebees Can't Fly Andrew Jonathan Smith, Abraham Buckoke
Burning Bush Mallory Sparks
Burro Hannah Lerner
Buscando Alma Melissa Fisher, Mair Flores
By The Grape Of God Kevin Hickey
BZRK Chandler Clarke
Cabe Sarah Bishop
Caller Unavailable Bella Maxwell
Camping with Dad Jeremy Davis
Candy and Debris Mere Walton
Carrots Jake Redmond
Catharsis Debora Liss
Changes Martyn Eaden
Cherry-Colored Funk Chelsie Pennello, Corbett Blair
Cheryl Shelly Mar, Steven Polletta
Child of Woe Samuel Perrone, Michael Perrone
Choices Sean Nash
Christmas With Jerks Leanna Adams
Chronic Chloe White
Chuck and Fern Henry Alexander Kelly
Clothes Rachel Barnett-Jones
Cluster Kevin Dembinsky
Coal Country Jessica Blank, Eric Jensen, Audrey Rosenberg
Collapse Alex Criqui
Collapsed Vincent Bain
Country Dog Eduardo Costas Cordero
Couple Goals Tom Bridger, Jonny Gillard
Crazy Legs Kristopher Garcia-Simms
Cruiser Alexa Best
Cue Applause Benj Welmond
Dawn Chorus Laura Jayne Tunbridge
Deepfake Matt Eames
Degrees of Separation Eva Grant
Demon Ana Liza Muravina
Derailment Danielle Alberico
Disco de la Raza: A Chicano Story Paloma Rabinov
Dissonance Andrew Brame
Dog Eat Dog Eat Dog Chas Chang
Dog Park, Mother Fucker Jason Slotkin
Dogsoup Brockton Komon
Don't be late, Myra Afia Nathaniel
Downline Jacob Zorn, Alexander Zorn
Drawing Blood Zachary Tirgan
Dream Machine Daniel Egan
Drip Phoebe Gibb
Earbuds Archana Shinde
Earth and Moon Kai-han Huang
El Cartel Cubano Adrienne Hall
El Cohete Eric Jacobo
End Pointe Eva Seymour
Enjoy Your Visit Erin Cramer
Everglow Mohammed Mamdouh
Everything Falling Away Julian Muller
Everything Is Good Tori La Desma
Everything Is Perfect And I Have Nothing To Complain About Mark L. Feinsod
Exceptional Steve Beta
Eyes Wide Open - Short Film Yasir Raza, Cindy Bonilla
Eyesore Jonathan Shander
F*ck That Guy Hanna Gray Organschi
Family Dinner Ethan Romaine
Father to Son George Perrin
Finding JaMia's Spirit Candace Patrick
Fire and Coolant Olivia Webb
Fire Lily Phil Dunn
Firecracker William Stewart
First Blood Jessica McLaughlin
Flat Over Crest Short Iris Davis-Quick
Flowers from the Front Line Carmela Corbett
For The Love Of Jupiter Rakhi Varma
Forward Thinking Jeremy Hsing, Abby Burton, Antonio Harper
Fractal Anslem Richardson
Frankie & Sage Seda Anbarci, Lissette Camacho
From Remote Places Philip Hamilton
Girls Together Christie Arnold, Issy Halpin
Gold Kylie Murphy
Good Bad Things Shane Stanger
Green Grass Laura Hauschild
Greyhound 1170 Zach Jansen
Grieving Chris Chi
Gris and Mrs. Garcia Claudia Barcenas
Growing Flowers on the Moon Robert Bowersox
Gummy Worms Sophie Bennett
Gun Golem Michael Winingham
Guns Down Robert Sweeting, Rob Alicea
Hangman Aleks Spurmanis, Danielle James, Durga Myakala
Hangtown Stuart Harmon
Happy Ending Ahmad Bakrin
Harley Andy Lyberopoulos
Hate Darion Trotman
Haunted Heart Mike Bencivenga
Hearts in a Sling Stephanie Gould
Help! Alex E. Chew
How Do I Live With This Raphael Chinca
How To Get Ahead Emily Goode
How to Sue the Klan John Beder
How We Escaped Our Certain Fate Alistair Legrand
Human Interest - Pilot Laurie Waplington
Hungry Man Andrew Appelle
I Am Home Pavitra Chalam
I Am Kathy jane therese
I Am Oronde Halimah Iman, Teresa Schaeffer, Black Deniro
I Came Back To Life Amina Elfiki
I Dared My Best Friend To Ruin My Life: He's Succeeding Michael Morgenstern
I Don't Dream In Spanish Anymore Missy Hernandez
I'm So Sorry Baby Friday Anderson
Ilona's Joy Dust C. Fitz
In Earth We Trust Sophie Morgan
In Search of Sister Hai Richard Hall
In The Belly Zora Kovac
Incisor Julia Barlow
InfesTatioN JJ Condon
Irish Love Story Aisling Corristine
Iron Lung Vee Saieh
Is Gay Marriage Next? Emily Clark
Isis and Osiris Mezan Ayoka Morrison
It Started with Small Things Katherine Landry
Jessica Nina Ljeti
Just Dance Carlos Cardona
Kaboom - Kin Anthony Vercoe, Margaret MacDonald
Killing Time Caroline Koonce
Kisses and Bullets Faranak Sahafian
Kissyfoot Michael Clifton
Kleptomania Mallika Kavadi
Koko Suzanne Zach Bandler, Emmanuel Epenge
Konnichiwa Tokyo DAISY DENNERLINE
Ladies Night EMMANUEL SAINT-ANGE
Lady Lazarus Lucy Benson-Brown
Last Call Rebecca L. Hargrove, Kedren Spencer
Last One: A Journey into Heaven's Gate Corey Wells
Learning to Play Steen Agro
Lia, 19 Liz Singh
Liana Werner Vivier
Life Cycle 63 Jordan Wade
Life of Lola Jacopo Campaiola
Ligaw (Stray) Ian Alessandro Abaya
Ligeia john reshetar
Limbo Carlos Gutierrez
Local Haunts Katie Sanderson
Locard's Principle jacob richardson
Long Days Adam Keleman, Brian Trichon
Long Pork Iris Dukatt
Lost Time Ben Hickernell
Love School Julia Maryanska
Love, from Ellie Chantelle James
Lovebug Blake Kaiser
Lullaby Lorenzo Nera
Lyrical Carter Stewart
M Calvin Nemeth
Maid to Steal Derek Quick (Negane Meno)
Malia & Dalia Francisco Lorite, Marilyn Sanabria
Mallwalkers Debra Kirschner
Malocchio Alex Knell
Más Allá ("Beyond") Bettina López Mendoza
Miles & Melodies Ronjoy Borthakur
Miss Liberty the Movie Victoria Moran, William Melton
Model Minority Tapan Sharma
Mondorama Morten Thorning
Monogamish Maggie Callis
Moonrise Beo Lerman
Moose Jaw Melissa Puente
Moshe and Amira Eliot Gelberg-Wilson
Move Ayako Karasawa
Movement, Light, and Life Winston Stemler
Mr Perfect Desi Lyon
My So-Called Iraqi-American Wedding AYSER SALMAN
My Star Parish Rahbar, Tara Moini
My Truck Cory Dean Ford
Nana Alfredo Vidal
Nema Marlene Emilia Rios
Niki Tomi Beto Jon Ayon
No Filter Mary DeMatteo
No More Wet Feet Martin Calvo
No Rules Ashley Gianni
No Strings Attached Heather Alexis
Nobody's Leaving til Jesus Comes (aka Save Me!) Jean Barker
Nocturne Lindsay Wyath
Noel & Leon Dayna Hanson, Dave Proscia
Now, Hear Me Good Dwayne LeBlanc
NYCW (NYC Witches) Dave Solomon
Old Mate Mitchell Charman
On Firm Ground JUSTIN JONES
Once Trees... GLENN BIREN
Once Upon the City: A Hella Cracked Short Film Myles Bergman
One Alex Abdel Salam
One More from the Road William Reilly
Open Up Tiina Chisola Lantz-Hirvonen
Orpheus Steve Wieclaw
Our Bodies & Other Shames Malka Wallick
Out of Body Ryan Kim
Out of Sight Jack Goessens
Ovary-Acting Laura Jayne Tunbridge
Over the Rolling Green Hills Emily Pudalov
Paper Monsters Michael Clifton
Papaer Plates Brian Nguyen
Park Benches Joe Favalaro, Dan Braga Ulvestad
Party O'Clock Lindsey Robertson
Pearl Rising Linda Dahlem Espinoza
Pegs Ethan Evans, Jess Bartlett
Peki House Haunting Emma Van Lare
Penny's Circle Alexa Salimpour
Persuasion Michelle Calderon, Zoë DeLeon
Pillow Talk Ra-ey Saleh
Please Make Sense Alexander Ullom
Please, Call Me Back. Eva Fabray
Plus One Zayn Alexander
Portal to Hell Woody Bess
Portrait Allegra Oxborough
Portrait of a Persian Cat Abraham de Cugnac
Presumption of Death Gustavo Hernandez-Perez
Punching Bag Rob Ayling
Quran Camp Samah Meghjee
Rapunzel Becca Sugar, Margarita Milne
Recurring Gig Adam Hutchinson
Red Fish Anastasiya Sergienya, Helga Landauer
Reveal Kevin McCloskey, Donna Miller
Reverberate Jewel Hargrove
Ride Or Die Alex Parkinson
Robin Hood: The Golden Arrow Tyson Vick
Role Play Elizabeth Katz
Runner Jordan Riggs
Ruthie Joins a Death Cult Nina Concepción, Kyle Kenyon
Saffron Highway Alex Tyson
Salsa Sangre Nathan Castiel, Keith Boos
Scary Dog Onyeka Oduh
Seed Money Bartow Elmore
Self Reflections Sharie Vance
Shame Nadia Tabbara
Shapeshifter Bianca Catbagan
Sharkkin Tommy Garcia
Shifts Laura Cotterill
Shock Jock Ross McGowan
Sides Jonathan D'Rozario
Sins of the Father Christopher Guerrero
Siren Song Stephen Coll
Sitting Bird Athena Han
Slick Rick Alex Garcia
Smile...The Worst is Yet to Come joseph mancuso
Smokeeasy Courtney Thomas, Amy Copperman
Snakeeater Tore Knos, Aron Flasher
Socks Jiyeon Kim-Myung
Sonder Oluwatimilehin Faderin
Sons of The River Katyayani Kumar
Spellbound: Women in Magic Susan Dynner
Standing in Fire Philip Musey
Standing With The Ancients Jen Muranetz
Starburst Dmitry Chaplin
Stitched Zach Goodwin
Stolen Dough Stefano Da Frè
Strange Is Our Situation Here On Earth Nicki Carrico, Julia Pontecorvo
Stranger After Fall Stephen Murphy
Strangers in the Night Ivona Juka
Strega Richard Cotzabuyucas
Stupid C*nt Ksenia Nikto, Polina Zabrodskaya
Subtext/Clipped Wings Christina McInulty, Erin Morgan
Subversive Sea Lara Carvalho
Sugar Daddy Mike Cooke
Sukkot Mandy Clinton
Sun Falls Aeden O'Connor Agurcia
Sunday Morning Jason Wallace
Sunhat Naomi Christie
Sweet Dreams Gary Alvarez
Talon Heather Parra
Test Drive Mitchell Lazar, Sam Downey
Text Ya Later Jeniffer Hernandez
Thank You, Places! Timothy Mark Davis, Luis Roberto Herrera
The (Mis)Education of Clack Children Moreetsi Gabang
The Astrum Wranglers Samuel Keene
The Ballerina Daniel Marques
The Biggest Alien Renee Kester, Samantha Mandich
The Blind Couple From Mali Sonia Gooding Togobo
The Blossom Shahnaz Mahmud
The Bobbsey Twins Go to Hell Gil Luna
The Bus Stop Parker Briscoe
The Call Out Jess C Wheatley
The Cima Project Anna Katarina
The Clam Guy Jen Nista, Max Beckerman
The Collins Film Brennan Huizinga
The Compatriots Spencer Cohen
The Cutting Room Floor Victoria deMartin
The Designer Em Johnson
The Dyson-Nüwa Project Joey Yu
The Extraordinary Inner Life of Engineer Atul Kulkarni - Short Jyothi Kalyan Sura
The Flip Side Alise Morales
The Gentlemen of Sig Alph Chi Vasco Munoz, Sahil Rustami
The Great Divide John Skipp
The Great Tit is a Bird Ar Ducao
The Gringo in the Hammock Joe Tripician
The House Sitter Anne Hollister
The Hummingbird Trees (Diary of a Tree Girl) Andrea Koehle Jones
The Ingenue Kyle Andrews, Frances Wendorf
The Invisibles Julia Beney
The Maker Andio Manguray
The Meeting Spot Lauren Sick
The Method Jace Anderson, Adam Gierasch
The Officers Sebastien Michel
The Other Moon Benjamin Font
The Ride Alysha Haran
The Rite of Spring Nick Nocera
The Rosewood Interview Andy Dispensa
The Sound of Silents Nicholas Reynolds
The Sphinx Chloë Myerson
The Stolen Children Elizabeth Jacobs
The Test Addyson Douglas, Andrea Meister
The Tyrant Peter Bussian
The Untamed Olga Holtz
The Ways Our Bodies Burn Daniel Egbert
The Weight of a Dog Lucy Sandler, Mechi Lakatos
The Weight of it All Arthur Gay
The Wicked: Reborn Matthew Stalletti
Them Charlie S. Jensen
There's So Much More to Fishing Than Catching Fish Roger Corea
They Chose The Sea Nnamdi Kanaga, Tunray Femi
They Will Bleed Us Dry Phillip Dixon
Thirst Trap Lizzie Parmenter
Thump Richard Young
Timetracker Peter Quandt
To the Moon Michael Dukakis
Todo el Tiempo en el Mundo Stephanie Ibarra
Tokeru (Melting) Yuki Soga
Trash Baby Jacy Mairs
Trimester Narlyia Sterling
Tummy Monster Ciaran Lyons
Two for One Spencer Tuggle, Eric McCorkle
Under the Influencer Skye Emerson
Unheard Voices: A Mothers Quest for Freedom TOSHA MILLS
Unicorn Boy Joe Tripician
Unstaged Elizabeth Shew
Untitled North Miami Project Edson Jean
Untouchable Adam Lapallo
Vanishing Cowboy Randi Johns
Verity Tim Maupin
Watermelons Cheryl Wong
Ways to Fly Kirby Marshall-Collins
We Can Never Go Back Aminah Hughes, Dylan Kussman
Welcome to North Brother Island Enzo Flores
Westhampton Christian Nilsson
What are You Called? Briana Monet
What Happens in the Bookstacks Alexandra Miller
What is the Criteria? [Criteria Kya Hai?] Aneesa Khan
What Men Do For Love karan talwar
What We Leave Behind Yashoda Parthasarthy, Vijesh Rajan
Where's Harlem Donaldo Prescod
Whistle Down Wind Andie Morgenlander
Whitch Hoku Uchiyama
Whitehead: The Improbably Charmed Life of Paul Whitehead Heidi Hornbacher
Who Killed Alex Odeh? William Youmans
Wildflowers Jeff Lucky
Willow and Wu Kathy Meng, Harry Bacon
Windy City Serenade Harper Philbin
Winsome Justin Lerner
Wishes Sink in Man Made Lakes Faye Ruiz
Woodwork Alex Woodruff
Xin Xin: The Last Panda in Latin America Anna Wang
Yes Emmie, You Can! Nori Ortiz
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6 Screenwriting Tips from Juel Taylor's ‘They Cloned Tyrone’ https://screencraft.org/blog/6-screenwriting-tips-from-juel-taylors-they-cloned-tyrone/ Wed, 19 Jul 2023 18:00:56 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=53470 There is something special about a debut feature film that takes big, risky swings and hits that target every time. From the jokes to inverting...

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There is something special about a debut feature film that takes big, risky swings and hits that target every time. From the jokes to inverting tropes to create an aesthetic that is as unique as co-writer/director Juel Taylor’s voice, They Cloned Tyrone is a masterful sci-fi comedy mystery film that you’d expect from a seasoned writer/director. 

Taylor, who is still relatively new to screenwriting but has had his scripts optioned by major studios like Warner Bros. and Netflix, stepped onto the scene with a script that landed on 2019’s Black List.

Although the official script for the film has not been released, the 2019 script from the Black List is available online for our reading pleasure. After watching the film and chatting with Taylor about his project, here are six lessons we learned from his screenplay for They Cloned Tyrone. 

[Editor's Note: Beware of Spoilers!]

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1. Mix Genres

Written by Juel Taylor and Tony Rettenmaier, the film tells the story of an unlikely trio coming together after uncovering a government conspiracy that threatens their home and community. Fontaine, a drug dealer, finds the help of a pimp named Slick Charles and a sex worker named Yo-Yo, who witnessed Fontaine die the day before. 

Throughout the script, the tone of the story works as a satirical hybrid of genres that shifts from: 

  • Gangster film that focuses on the community and dynamics of the Glen
  • Political thriller as unmarked black cars and secret underground lavatories kidnap Black community members to test on them
  • Coming-of-age film as the character discover who they want to be and how they can break away from the system created to keep them down
  • Heist movie as the gang tries to save a lost member of the trio and free the clones 

The script maintains comedic undertones that bring levity to the heavy tones and themes that take over at the end of act two to keep the story from falling victim to the assumptions and tropes of the genres listed above. Here is how Taylor was able to subvert expectations in his script while keeping his audience hooked from beginning to end.

Read More: The Power of Genre-Bending Screenplays

Jamie Foxx (Producer) as Slick Charles and Writer, Director, Producer Juel Taylor on the set of They Cloned Tyrone. Cr. Parrish Lewis/Netflix © 2023.

Jamie Foxx (Producer) as Slick Charles and Writer, Director, Producer Juel Taylor on the set of They Cloned Tyrone. Cr. Parrish Lewis/Netflix © 2023.

2. Use the References People Know

Throughout the screenplay, Taylor sets the scene or upcoming events by drawing on references that most audiences are familiar with. 

“I had this silly idea of creating a bootleg Scooby-Doo movie,” Taylor says. “So it's a blend of something frivolous with something personal and somber, and as the project grew, it delved into weirdness.” Some of the weirdness comes from a slew of references Taylor calls on to like John Carpenter’s They Live, Dr. Strangelove, A Clockwork Orange and Invasion of the Body Snatchers. 

Taylor incorporates these references in his screenplay in multiple ways. For example, he has characters reference moments in the film to specific shots in iconic films, like when Slick Charles says, “We just found out they're Clockwork Orange-ing [people],” (pg. 61). Other references are in the small details, such as the name of the corrupted radio DJ named DJ Strangelove (in reference to the Nazi-turned-American Dr. Strangelove (Peter Sellers) in Dr. Strangelove) or when the gang finds the breakroom in the trap house and a small TV is playing Invasion of the Body Snatchers.

These references in the screenplay allow the reader to understand the tones of the film and the structure of a specific genre of the film that the story is following.

Read More: 101 Epic Sci-Fi Story Prompts

6 Screenwriting Tips from They Cloned Tyrone

They Cloned Tyrone (2023)

3. Lean Into Your Unique Voice

Establishing your voice is crucial to creating a standout script. Taylor’s voice is present within the first few lines of the screenplay by using language to perfectly capture the aesthetics of his world. 

When describing the world, Taylor’s language is short and exact, yet there is an energy to it that brings the image into clear view for the reader. When describing the Glen, the neighborhood the story takes place in, Taylor describes it, writing, “...past boarded up abodes and homes barely holding on … rusted lemons… crackheads… It’s active out here. Folks just… around.” 

In so few worlds, we can see the Glen clearly. It’s a run-down yet active community. 

Taylor’s voice understands the stakes of the world he has created immediately, the stakes of his characters, and how to escalate conflict or de-escalate moments by leaning into the comedy of three unlikely heroes fighting against a government conspiracy. 

Read More: How to Develop Your Voice as a Screenwriter

6 Screenwriting Tips from They Cloned Tyrone

They Cloned Tyrone (2023)

4. Find the Balance Between the Comedy and Drama

They Cloned Tyrone is a satire that balances a delicate edge of absurdity. Taylor balances between a cool-effortless gang who have an asks-questions-later type of energy and the drama of what is happening, which is a hard tightrope to walk. 

“It’s an ongoing negotiation with each scene to avoid being too obvious,” Taylor says. “I never want to come across as preachy or prescriptive. I recoil from anything in that sphere.”

In the first laboratory scene, Fontaine is experiencing a very life-altering moment, but Taylor brings levity to this by having Slick Charles accidentally kill someone and attempt to convince the others that the dead man is still alive. While the dead man might seem like a life-altering moment, Fontaine's discovery of a clone of himself weighs down the chaos of what happened on the other side of the room. It’s an odd balance that works visually.

Read More: You've Got to Have Heart: The Power of Comedy in Drama

6 Screenwriting Tips from They Cloned Tyrone

They Cloned Tyrone (2023)

5. Repetition Builds Familiarity

One of the biggest references that Taylor looked at while writing the script for They Cloned Tyrone was The Truman Show. Similar to how Truman has a distinct routine every day, Fontaine has the same day, every day. 

Taylor establishes this by walking us through a day in the life of Fontaine. He wakes up, lifts weights, and goes to the gas station for a drink and a scratch-off that always says “You Lose!” We walk through the same events the next day when something strange happens. From there, every time Fontaine goes through those same motions, he is following his “life plan” established by some higher force. 

This is a thematic element of blame and responsibility that Taylor wanted to explore in a sci-fi satirical story. If Fontaine continues his routine, he will always lose. But who is to blame if he does? Who tells him that he isn’t responsible for his actions, even if he is a clone? 

Taylor understands that audiences understand visual repetition very well and lean into that to showcase who his characters are and their internal struggles as the story unfolds. You don’t have to explain things that the audience already knows. 

6 Screenwriting Tips from They Cloned Tyrone

They Cloned Tyrone (2023)

6. Plant and Pay-Off

ScreenCraft writer Ken Miyamoto wrote it best when he said that the most entertaining movies are the ones that have plants that pay off. These moments of foreshadowing feel rewarding when an audience notices that small details have a purpose in the larger narrative. 

For They Cloned Tyrone, Taylor creates a tight screenplay by having the smallest moment have the biggest impact on the screen. 

The government conspiracy is established early on in the film when Fontaine interacts with the world around him. From the hair formula making people careless about their problems to the commercials for fried chicken with “Inserts of folks lovin’ the shit outta said chicken. Motherfuckers dancin’ after every bite,” the gang becomes aware that they are being used as lab rats for a government experiment. 

Another plant and pay-off is the code, “Olympia Black.” Originally, the phrase is used against Fontaine and his gang to take control of the clones. However, Fontaine ends up using the code to save himself, his neighborhood, and the corruption of power from the person in charge. 

There are so many little details that end up paying off in a satisfying way in the script, which makes each detail strong and meaningful. After the first plant pays off, the audience is hooked and is ready to find more of those entertaining and satisfying moments. 

They Cloned Tyrone is a masterfully written screenplay that subverts expectations in a number of ways. Taylor's use of references, his unique voice, and his ability to balance comedy and drama all contribute to the film's success. Additionally, Taylor's use of repetition and plant-and-pay-off techniques help to keep the audience engaged from beginning to end.

If you're a screenwriter looking to learn from the best, then I highly recommend checking out They Cloned Tyrone. It's a film that is sure to inspire you to create your own unique and entertaining stories.


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2023 ScreenCraft True Story & Public Domain Competition Winners https://screencraft.org/blog/2023-screencraft-true-story-public-domain-competition-winners/ Wed, 19 Jul 2023 17:00:51 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=53629 We are excited to announce the Winners of the 2023 ScreenCraft True Story & Public Domain Competition. Congratulations to the these winning writers! Grand Prize...

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We are excited to announce the Winners of the 2023 ScreenCraft True Story & Public Domain Competition. Congratulations to the these winning writers!

Grand Prize Winner

Angel Eyes by Richard Mauro

In 1947, in the lead up to his execution, can the murderous Commandant of Aushwitz find redemption.

Feature Winner

The Boy Scout by Dan Williams

In the spirit of SPOTLIGHT and SHE SAID: The groundbreaking lawsuit that uncovered the confidential files kept by the Boy Scouts of America chronicling an unprecedented history of child sexual abuse.

TV Winner

Once and Future by Kylie Boersma

King Arthur returns in Britain's greatest time of need: the First World War.

 

We are also excited to announce the selections for the True Crime Prize, which is presented by BondIt Media Capital.

BondIt Media True Crime Prize Selections

Black Cadillac by Beth Brickell

A 10-year-old girl who is a Hardy Boy fan and wants to be a detective helps a state police investigator discover facts about a murder while learning that she can defy cultural limitations placed on women's dreams.

Mike and Maud by Beth Brickell

The riveting true story of the events leading up to the disappearance of a spirited female attorney who went missing from a small Arkansas town in the 1950s after running afoul of a corrupt local State Police Commissioner over an inheritance dispute.

Sin of the Stormbird by Mike Streng

After three teenage boys go missing and a local waitress is murdered and drained of her blood, Lieutenant John "Trooper" Martin suspects a Satanic cult may link both investigations, but the sudden interest of the DEA suggests there may be another twist about to unfold.

Congratulations again to these winning writers, and thank you to our jury and to everyone who submitted projects; we read a number of remarkable projects. View the quarterfinalists, semifinalists and finalists by clicking the corresponding link. If you’d like to receive a notification when this contest re-opens for entries, you can subscribe for updates via Coverfly here.


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Barbenheimer: Why Are ‘Barbie’ and ‘Oppenheimer’ Battling at the Box Office? https://screencraft.org/blog/barbenheimer-why-are-barbie-and-oppenheimer-battling-at-the-box-office/ Mon, 17 Jul 2023 02:09:03 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=53571 One of the most highly anticipated dates of the 2023’s calendar year is July 21, 2023, otherwise known as the day that both Barbie and...

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One of the most highly anticipated dates of the 2023’s calendar year is July 21, 2023, otherwise known as the day that both Barbie and Oppenheimer hit all theaters across the United States.  The release of both films on the same day created an internet phenomenon known as Barbenheimer. While the two films are drastically different in tone, themes, and color pallets, it's hard to wonder why Barbie and Oppenheimer are battling for dominance at the box office. 

What started this madness, and is there already a clear winner? Let’s get into it. 

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Twin Films Happen All the Time… So Why is Barbenheimer Different?

Twin films are not a new phenomenon. They typically happen when two studios invest in similar scripts at a similar time and are racing to get their film in theaters first. 

However, two completely different movies becoming twin movies are rare. The only example that comes to mind is in 2008 when Mamma Mia! and The Dark Knight were released on the same date. 

When we look at the cast and crew of both Barbie and Oppenheimer, we see industry-beloved, Oscar-nominated writers/directors creating projects with a highly awarded and praised crew and an all-star cast. These movies are more similar than we realize when we look at the posters. 

While they couldn’t be more different in aesthetics, tone, and style, Barbie and Oppenheimer have similarities. They were both created by auteurs. Case in point when Barbie's director Greta Gerwig captured the attention of the male-dominated cinephile world, who would have never been willing to give the Barbie movie a minute of their day, by referencing Stanley Kubrick’s 2001: A Space Odyssey with the first Barbie trailer.  

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The marketing of Barbie is trying to convince a male audience who isn’t comfortable with their masculinity that this movie is also for them through careful marketing and highlighting the level of craft that went into each and every frame. 

Oppenheimer's director Christopher Nolan, however, doesn’t have to prove that he is making a movie for a specific audience. He is a filmmaker that has established himself by taking risks and crafting visually compelling narratives as an auteur that film bros. and cinephiles everywhere adore. He is a filmmaker who also cares about the details of each frame, which makes audiences care about the story he is telling us. 

At this point, both films and filmmakers have told audiences everywhere that their movies are for people who love movies. Neither film is targeting a specific audience, but they are rather opening the doors for original stories that have the potential to perform well at the box office. 

Read More: Screenwriting Wisdom from Christopher Nolan

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Why Are ‘Barbie’ and ‘Oppenheimer’ Releasing on the Same Day?

While it is not fully transparent why Barbie and Oppenheimer are being released on the same day, there are some excellent theories behind the strategic move. 

After Warner Bros. Discovery decided to dump its entire 2021 theatrical slate on HBO Max during the COVID-19 pandemic, Nolan, who had a 20-year relationship with the studio, packed his bags and went to Universal. 

"Some of our industry's biggest filmmakers and most important movie stars went to bed the night before thinking they were working for the greatest movie studio and woke up to find out they were working for the worst streaming service," Nolan told THR in December 2020.

When Deadline reported that Nolan would be making his next movie, Oppenheimer, at Universal, Warner Bros. saw the opportunity to release a major film on the same day to compete. 

As theatrical-release dates began to fill the 2023 calendar, Oppenheimer was slated for July. 21, which studios, theaters, and movie fans know is the prime blockbuster season and Nolan’s preferred-release week since 2008’s The Dark Knight (four out of his last six movies have been released in mid- to late-July). Rather than going for an adult drama that would ultimately not perform well at the box office, Warner Bros. decided to swing in the opposite direction and slate Barbie, a light-hearted comedy from Oscar-nominated writer/director Greta Gerwig. 

Sources familiar with the issue tell Insider that Nolan was upset with Warner Bros. scheduling Barbie on the same weekend as Oppenheimer. There was even an attempt by the movie-theater community to convince Warner Bros. to change the release date of Barbie. However, the studio didn’t budge or comment on why they wouldn’t change the date. 

While Nolan has avoided answering interview questions about this theory, he does state that “those who care about the theatrical experience, we’ve been longing for a crowded marketplace with a lot of different movies. That’s what theaters have now, and those of us who care about  movies are thrilled about that.” 

Despite the possible efforts from Warner Bros. to sabotage their ex-filmmaker, the plan may have backfired as audiences are eager to watch both films for one of the strangest double features to date.

Read More: How Oppenheimer Created a CGI-Free Atomic Blast

Barbenheimer Why Are Barbie and Oppenheimer Battling at the Box Office

Who is Winning “Barbenheimer”?

It seems that almost everyone excited for Barbenheimer has already gotten their hands on tickets for the opening weekend of both films. 

Cillian Murphy and Tom Cruise have both stated that they will be watching both films in theaters on Jul. 21, with Murphy saying in an interview, “I think it’s just great for the industry and for audiences that we have two amazing films by amazing filmmakers coming out on the same day. Yeah, you get to spend a whole day in the cinema. What’s better than that?” 

Currently, Barbie is projected to gross $80-$100 million on opening weekend, while Oppenheimer is estimated to gross $50 million. Two weeks before their release, AMC Theaters released a press statement that over 20,000 AMC Stubs members had already pre-booked tickets to both films on the same day, seeing a 33 percent increase in people buying double feature tickets from Jul. 7 to Jul. 10. 

While Oppenheimer might be the more critically-acclaimed film of the two, it’s clear that Barbie has a larger appeal to the general public. 

Read More: America Ferrera's Glorious 'Barbie' Monologue Explained

Unfortunately, Oppenheimer is a mature drama, and adult dramas have notoriously not done well in the theaters in our post-pandemic world. Sure, the three-hour-long biopic will be stunning to see in theaters as we watch the first black and white IMAX footage ever shot shine on the silver screen, but Barbie is barely an hour and a half long and is telling the story of an American icon and cultural phenomenon. 

While Barbie will more than likely come out on top, further drawing a divide in Nolan and Warner Bros. strained relationship, it will be wonderful to spend a day at the cinema watching two great films made by writers/directors who care about the longevity of cinema and the moviegoing experience.


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What is Three-Act Structure and How Do You Use It in Screenwriting? https://screencraft.org/blog/what-is-three-act-structure-and-how-do-you-use-it-in-screenwriting/ Fri, 14 Jul 2023 18:55:36 +0000 https://screencraft.org/?p=53129 Beginning. Middle. End. That is the most simplistic way to open a discussion about the three-act structure. No matter what screenwriting philosophy you read, "secret"...

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Beginning. Middle. End. That is the most simplistic way to open a discussion about the three-act structure. No matter what screenwriting philosophy you read, "secret" formula you apply, or structure you choose, no story can escape the master structure of the three-act story composition.

Screenwriters have multiple ways to tell their stories. And we're not just talking about different platforms and formats like features, TV pilots, episodic series, limited series, etc. Nor are we discussing the multiple genres in which you can place your characters, worlds, and stories. Here we will delve into the dynamics of the three-act structure and try to simplify it so you can master it within your screenplays.

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Where Did Three-Act Structure Come From?

This story structure has been utilized in humankind's storytelling since the dawn of our existence when we began to tell stories around the fire in caves, camps, and villages. This history is evident in archeological cave etchings that define the three-act structure in visual form.

  • Hunters preparing for the hunt with spears and weapons (beginning).
  • Hunters confronting the dangers of the prey (middle).
  • Hunters defeating the prey (end)

You can expand upon this simple breakdown in equally simplistic definitions as well.

  • Characters are introduced in their world (first act).
  • They then face conflict and confrontations that rock their world (second act).
  • They learn from their mistakes and missteps, adapt, and defeat the conflict they face (third act) — unless it's a tragedy.

What is Three-Act Structure and Do You Use It in Screenwriting?

Aristotle's Poetics & Three-Act Structure

Aristotle — the Greek philosopher, scientist, and master storyteller — is often called the father of the three-act structure. His book Poetics delved into the analysis of epic storytelling and tragedies. These forms of storytelling were presented to the public of his time — poetry and the stage.

The great philosopher stated that the best storytelling involved artistically constructed incidents that produced the essential tragic effect found within the most significant plays and stories. He pointed out that the core structure of a story's plot involved a beginning, middle, and end.

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Screenwriting is a cousin to the plays of Aristotle's time and the hundreds of years of stage and theatre storytelling that followed. Structure was necessary to tell a story within a play's limited time. Screenplays are even more constrained by time, with the average film ranging from 90 to 120 minutes, with most longer movies going only 30-45 minutes beyond that.

A three-act structure helps to organize pivotal events within the story to create a well-paced visual experience that builds to a climax.

What is Three-Act Structure and Do You Use It in Screenwriting

Other story structures include four-act, five-act, six-act, and seven-act variations. Additional structure options can flip the end to the beginning or create more visceral cinematic experiences by telling a story out of sequence in different ways using structure tweaks like flashbacks, flashforwards, dream sequences, and many other creative alternatives.

However, none of these variances can escape the three-act structure.

In 1979, author Syd Field wrote one of the best-selling screenwriting books in history, Screenplay: The Foundations of Screenwriting. Field embraced the three-act structure in the book and broke it down into three sections.

  • Setup (Act I): You set up the characters and establish their goals. You also showcase their ordinary world so that we can see how affected they are by the conflict(s) they are about to face.
  • Confrontation (Act II): The characters are confronted by the conflict(s), and the story escalates as the stakes grow higher amidst the confrontations they are involved with.
  • Resolution (Act III): Everything within the first and second acts is resolved. The characters either triumph or falter (as with tragedies).

That is the most general definition of the three-act structure.

The Three-Act Structure Is NOT a Formula

Screenwriters should never mistake the three-act structure as a formula.

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Formulas are story options that work under the umbrella of the three-act structure, just as other story structures do. The three-act structure is the basic understanding of story structure at its core. Each act serves the next. And within the preceding act, or anything to build towards in the third act, the story is less effective and more disjointed.

What is Three-Act Structure and Do You Use It in Screenwriting

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Why Use the Three-Act Structure?

The three-act structure gives you the most basic story organization for your screenplay. It's a virtual compass that guides your process, characters, stories, and plots.

These three acts help you sectionalize your story. And within each act, you can effectively employ additional plot points to drive the story toward its necessary conclusion.

Development questions like:

  • "Where does my story begin?"
  • "Where does my story end?"
  • "What happens in between the beginning and end?"

These are all answered by looking at your story through the lens of the three-act structure. They help you answer additional development questions like:

  • "Where are the characters before the major conflict hits them?" (finding the first act)
  • "How can I raise the stakes to keep audiences invested?" (finding the second act)
  • "What is the best way to end the story?" (finding the third act)

These questions also help you pin down and edit those broader worlds you may have been creating. They allow you to pinpoint the part of the characters' lives you want to showcase. And then also help you to find the essential story and character elements you'll be able to include within the confines of what will eventually be a 90-120 minute cinematic story.

What to Include in Act I/II/III

The great thing about focusing less on formulas and sub-structures and more on three acts is that you can utilize additional plot points and moments as needed within your story, as opposed to following a step-by-step or paint-by-the-numbers approach. There is more freedom to it. And you can utilize variations of different formulas and sub-structures within.

Save the Cat and The Hero's Journey are the two most highly utilized formulas or sub-structures. There are dozens of variations of them as well. But they all fall under the three-act umbrella.

The broad strokes of each of the three acts include:

Act I

The first act briefly sets up the characters, the world they live in, and establishes the characters' wants and needs. It's essentially the start of their internal and external character arcs. The internal and external conflicts they will be facing can also be introduced in the first act as well.

You generally want to keep the first act to a minimum, allowing the characters' actions and reactions to define their characters, as opposed to overuse of exposition and back story. Remember, it's a movie. And the audience wants to get to the juiciest parts of the story as quickly as possible. You don't need to waste too much time with back story.

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Act II

The second act is the longest of the three and has the characters facing the conflict head-on, with increasing stakes that put them in more physical, mental, or emotional peril. Traditionally, the end of the second act will leave the characters at their lowest point. However, they have learned a lot about themselves and the conflict(s) they are facing.

To keep script readers and audiences engaged, you can use the second act to create additional plants, payoffs, and twists to keep things interesting.

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Act III

The third act is where the story is resolved. The characters take what they've learned and try to apply those lessons to defeat, conquer, or surpass the conflict(s) they have faced. This is the act with the climax, be it emotional or physical. The story is resolved by the characters achieving an inner or outer goal (preferably both), defeating the conflict (emotionally or physically), or succumbing to the conflict (when the story is a tragedy that ends with a tragic loss).

It's important to know that you'll read a hundred different things that each act must have — but there are no secret formulas, necessary beats, or particular page counts where story elements need to happen. All that is figured out within your process as you develop your story and write your script. What worked for one script or movie may not work for the story you are trying to tell.

Again, that is what is so great about the three-act structure. There's plenty of room to maneuver your story and characters within each act instead of trying to hit particular story points by specific pages.

The Three-Act Structure of Top Gun: Maverick

While Top Gun: Maverick is a sequel, the actual story is far removed from the original film's story and could have just as easily been an original movie about a fighter pilot dealing with demons from his past. The sequel elements are minimal, beyond character history that drives the actions and reactions of Maverick.

With that in mind, here we present the simple three-act breakdown of Top Gun: Maverick.

First Act

We are introduced to Maverick's ordinary world. He's not a Top Gun instructor. In fact, he's at the end of his career. Because of his maverick ways, he has ruined any potential leadership roles after years of continual insubordination. He's now relegated to the role of a test pilot in a program about to be disbanded. Despite his heroic — yet insubordinate — efforts to attain the program's goals, Maverick is ordered back to Top Gun.

Upon arriving, he's informed that he has been assigned to instruct a group of Top Gun pilots to undergo a seemingly impossible mission. Maverick reconnects with an old flame and is about to face a person from his past — the son of his best friend, Goose, who died tragically thirty years prior while Maverick was piloting their jet. Upon seeing Rooster, Goose's son, it's clear that Maverick is still dealing with guilt and loss.

By the end of this first act, we know what conflicts Maverick will face. We also see how these conflicts oppose his ordinary world, where he was happy living under the radar doing what he does best. Lastly, we know he's about to face people from his past.

Second Act

The second act begins as Maverick arrives to instruct the pilots. He faces his estranged adopted son, Rooster, and there is instant conflict between them. Maverick also faces confrontations with his superior officer, as well as with the training of the pilots in a mission that seems to be more and more surefire suicide.

Maverick learns from his mistakes — primarily through the guidance of his previous wingman Iceman, now the commanding Admiral of the Navy Fleet — and finds ways to train the pilots properly. However, more and more conflicts arise as Maverick and the pilots try to find ways to make this impossible mission more plausible.

He turns to his old girlfriend, Penny, to help him through the ongoing conflict while building a potential post-Navy life with her.

But the stakes keep getting raised. Iceman dies. Maverick is released from the mission when his superior officer changes the mission parameters, which Maverick knows means certain death to Rooster and other pilots. This is where the characters of Maverick, Rooster, and the other pilots are at their lowest.

Third Act

When the mission briefing begins — with Maverick now released — the pilots are shocked to see that Maverick has taken a jet to prove to his superior officer that the mission can succeed under the original parameters. He flies the lead jet formation with seconds to spare, proving that not only is the mission possible with the original safer parameters, but he is the one to lead the team.

The mission begins. They complete it successfully. But now the pilots are tasked with getting out alive. Additional stakes are raised when Maverick — and eventually Rooster — are shot down in enemy territory. They steal an old F-18 and battle their way back to their U.S. aircraft carrier.

The story is resolved. The external arc of the story is complete as Maverick has successfully trained the pilots — and the mission was a success with no loss of life along them. The internal arc of Maverick is complete, as he has regained his relationship with Rooster and has now found a new life with him and with Penny.

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The three-act structure is simple, with nuanced elements that you can apply to the beginning, middle, and end of your screenplays. Since it is the ultimate master structure of all stories, you can find ways to adapt it to fit the needs of your story, giving you structure and direction to achieve Aristotle's collection of "artistically constructed incidents" that make up a compelling and engaging story.


Ken Miyamoto has worked in the film industry for nearly two decades, most notably as a studio liaison for Sony Studios and then as a script reader and story analyst for Sony Pictures.

He has many studio meetings under his belt as a produced screenwriter, meeting with the likes of Sony, Dreamworks, Universal, Disney, and Warner Brothers, as well as many production and management companies. He has had a previous development deal with Lionsgate, as well as multiple writing assignments, including the produced miniseries BLACKOUT, starring Anne Heche, Sean Patrick Flanery, Billy Zane, James Brolin, Haylie Duff, Brian Bloom, Eric La Salle, and Bruce Boxleitner, the feature thriller HUNTER'S CREED, and many produced Lifetime thrillers. Follow Ken on Twitter @KenMovies and Instagram @KenMovies76.


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